llAbhiGya/TiSha AT#54 - 'Farak Padta Hai'll

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: -Martinski-
AND MS

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haaaye pretty lady!! ⭐️

but i don't understand...MS locket is a separate thing from MS? why might Sriti have MS locket if she's not married? like an heirloom or something?

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

safely home, no bus stops missed, 20 mins saved...but might not be online for a bit, stuff to do :P

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FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: -mina-

haaaye pretty lady!! ⭐️

but i don't understand...MS locket is a separate thing from MS? why might Sriti have MS locket if she's not married? like an heirloom or something?

Well the locket alone is not Marital type the chain ka beeds make it that way

Maybe

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FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#374

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FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#375

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#376

ok here's what i was thinking on the bus...unfortunately i still can't see a way to turn that scene into errr...sharbat (YHM slang for smut...much prettier naa? :P) but almost...and i'm gonna keep trying because i know a few people wanted to read, including me XD

a- bolo naa shuruwaad...
p- aap...darwaaza band kijiye...phir...
p-phir?
a-kijiye naa...darwaaza band...
*he closes the door and backs her against it, palms flat on the door on each side of her head*
*she looks up at him with angst in her eyes but also something else, that looks disturbingly like hope*
p-maine usko kuch nahin karne diya...
a-jhoot mat bolo -
p-*talking over him* lekin - lekin aap ko poora haq hai... sab kuch karne ka...toh kariye naa, shuruwaad
a-*frowns in confusion* kya?
p-aapko haq jataane tha naa...jataaye. waise meri bhi haq bante hai...mangne ka
a-aur tum...mang rahi ho? mujh par haq?
p-kyun? aap akele mang sakhte kya?
*he pulls away from her*
a-nahin...aise nahin..tum...tumhaare saath mujhe kuch bhi nahin karni hain...aur tumhe mujh par koi haq nahin hain, aur kabhi nahin hoga...
*he stumbles away into the bathroom to douse his head in cold water*
*she slides to the floor and feels numb about her close escape...and yet another rejection*

(tell me how he started...
close the door...and then...
and then?
first...close the door
*he closes the door and backs her against it, palms flat on the door on each side of her head*
*she looks up at him with angst in her eyes but also something else, that looks disturbingly like hope*
p-i didn't let him do anything -
a-don't lie-
p-*talking over him* but - but you have every right...to do everything...so...why don't you...start?
a-*frowns in confusion* what?
p-you want to assert your rights don't you? go ahead...but then i also have rights...a right to ask...
a-and you're...asking? for your right...to me?
p-why? are only you allowed to ask?
*he pulls away from her*
a-no...not like this...you...i don't want to do anything with you...and you don't have any right on me, and you never will...
*he stumbles away into the bathroom to douse his head in cold water*
*she slides to the floor and feels numb about her close escape...and yet another rejection*)

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@putturani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#377

Awww poor Pragya! She dodged a bullet that she maybe didn't want to dodge. 😕 But great drabble Mina! 👏

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: putturani
Awww poor Pragya! She dodged a bullet that she maybe didn't want to dodge. 😕 But great drabble Mina! 👏

yeah, i'm not sure she even knew what she wanted. thanks :)

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@putturani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#379

this show is confusing the life out of me...are they really going to drag it until the mantap when Bulbul takes the place of Pragya? Do they seriously see redemption for the relationship when Abhi talks of Pragya's character to her mother while he keeps Tanu under everyone's nose? What's sauce for the goose is clearly not sauce for the gander!

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@putturani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

And then, when I am trying to write Endings, I can't because I just don't see them together anymore but then my fic-Abhi hasn't been as terrible (I don't think) as show Abhi but I can't tell them apart anymore. 😕

Clarifying for the sake of the AT: that I don't see them together but I WANT them together, if that makes sense (afraid of being pelted with pillows! 😆)