Reviving Parud FF Chapter 19 updated

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Nice update 😊

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aaliah3108

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This is awesome JJ !!! I absolutely loved it... will post more on the blog. I could not write there just now so came here.

Its a wonderful update. I am waiting !!!!!! for next one already.

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Awesome update Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Yes, I forgot to mention this point in your blog which I was meaning to later & that point being ... Rudra pursued the case & went ahead with a vengeance to catch & punish the criminals ...Maybe Rudra is still with BSD & working undercover in the guise of having a security agency for them only ?

Thank you NavyaKavya for the suggestion. Now I cannot let the story out now. Can only thank you for this input 😊

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JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: psagars
Hi JJ, some thoughts

You showed Sunehri being close to Kakusa. A suggestion, maybe you can use it in further chapters. This Shantanu and Sunehri fiasco could have being used as the reason for Mohini's transformation. If you look at the way projected in the show, Mohini' love for Sunehri was pure. Sunehri was the only one untouched of Mohini's taunts and schemings.

You haven't yet projected Sumer, Shatabdi's and Samrat's feelings. Are they standby players or they too have some role?

I liked that Rudra didn't give up his BSD job immediately after Paro's death. He rigorously pursued the case and put most of the men behind bars. He gave up the job 3 years back and that too for a better reason. Now really want to know the reason.

And the last thing. Paro's supposed death happened 7 years ago, Rudra left his BSD job 3 years ago and Thakur didn't hear Rudra's name from last 5 years. I am curious how will you connect these numbers?

Agree about Mohini. She never was taunting Sunehri except mildly. She had pure love for her daughter. Now I wonder why that was. CVs never explained it. And I am also not able to come up with a reason. But I will keep this in mind. Though the CVs showed Mohini to be still against adoption after the leap - maybe the Shantanu fiasco changed her.

Samrat, Shatabdi and Sumer ? Well what can I say. I know such characters exist in this world. But somehow I could never actually appreciate these three characters. I mean Shatabdi was just introduced to teach Mohini a lesson. Or just a blessing in disguise for Maithili. Samrat was spineless always. And Sumer - except for some time in the middle when I could connect with him - they kind of made him a comical person. So not sure how I can bring more meat into their roles. Thinking still...

Yes the reason for the BSD resignation will be revealed later. But not sure whether it will be convincing for you. But dekhte hain 😃

Ah numbers --my favorite. I trust numbers anyday compared to emotions. In real life am a person driven by just logic. And more logic. I am an extrovert and can entertain any group size. With jokes, anecdotes etc. But writing is not my forte. My emails , SMS and messages are crisp and to the point. IF made me write. On the daily takes. On many other threads here. And then the H&F thread made me write longer paras. It is VERY VERY difficult for me to write these chapters - believe me. I am not a creative person by nature. My logic side of the brain overshadows the other side anyday.

And now I am aghast that I wrote some lines in the chapters and some numbers there without thinking. Only when you put those three numbers here that I realize I have no story to spin around 7,3 and 5.
7 and 3 yes. But have no clue where the 5 came from. Oh my logical brain where are thou ?

Reshma, thanks dear. You make me think more and help me to connect the dots. Please continue helping me with this process.

Thanks again for writing down your views.

Edited by JJKKL - 11 years ago

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Roop_P

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

First of all thanks for posting on IF, an easy way to reach it.

Amazing update.👏

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Thanks for the PM. Nice update.

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FleurDeJuillet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Thanks dear. I missed you in the blog. Did you also find issues in commenting there ?

sorry, i can't reply in the blog - no technical issues but i have my reasons. but i'm definitely reading this absolutely wonderful story and will keep commenting on IF 😊

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