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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
fantastic update
loved it
thanks for the pm

Hi,

You also ditched my blog and commented here 😭. Koi Baat Nahin. Thanks for reading and liking it.

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: FleurDeJuillet
the story is moving so wonderfully! 😊
aman is back to help 😃

Thanks dear. I missed you in the blog. Did you also find issues in commenting there ?

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: taahir004
Thank you a billion times for posting the FF on IF again

Excellent Update
Rudra's pain was depicted so well his turmoil , his state of mind

I know Taahir004 that many of you prefer IF. I on the other hand find many issues with IF. Lose many posts after typing and many times the screen does not refresh etc. Anyway I will update in IF as well going forward

Glad you liked the update.

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: varshu27
Lovely chapter JJ...we get to see Aman and Sunheri and their little boy😃...
I could literally feel Rudra's pain through ur words...him trying to woo the parents is something I am looking forward to...

Mano, wonderful edits as always...

Thanks a lot Varshu. You also changed sides from blog to IF ????

Glad you liked the way the chapter was written. Rudra wooing Myrah's parents.hmmm.I am still struggling with the idea.

Yes Mano is a wonder and the her edits are wonderful

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Cutemithra
Nice chapter JJ... The part about Rudra's reaction to Paro's loss, his guilt, his pain.. You have done an awesome job... I liked the part about Aman and sunehri too...
Lovely edits Mano...

Thank you dear for liking the way Rudra's pain was portrayed and the way Aman-Sunehri happened. You too Cutemithra ? Gave up on the blog and migrated here ? Sobbing...

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: renusan.arshi
Awsome superbb update

Thanks a lot. Are you a regular reader of this FF ?

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JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
u depicted rudra's emotions beautifully.Rudra needs 2 share d truth with someone.otherwise its suffocating.But with whom?Aman?aman-Suneheri a jodi...surprise..luv Rudra Aman relation.missed myruh/paro

Yes Rudra needs Aman. And Sunehri also needs Aman. And we need Aman for the story to progress 😆

Am glad you liked the update. You were visiting the blog earlier. Ab Kya Hua ?

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_ResHma_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hi JJ, some thoughts

You showed Sunehri being close to Kakusa. A suggestion, maybe you can use it in further chapters. This Shantanu and Sunehri fiasco could have being used as the reason for Mohini's transformation. If you look at the way projected in the show, Mohini' love for Sunehri was pure. Sunehri was the only one untouched of Mohini's taunts and schemings.

You haven't yet projected Sumer, Shatabdi's and Samrat's feelings. Are they standby players or they too have some role?

I liked that Rudra didn't give up his BSD job immediately after Paro's death. He rigorously pursued the case and put most of the men behind bars. He gave up the job 3 years back and that too for a better reason. Now really want to know the reason.

And the last thing. Paro's supposed death happened 7 years ago, Rudra left his BSD job 3 years ago and Thakur didn't hear Rudra's name from last 5 years. I am curious how will you connect these numbers?

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Navya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: psagars
Hi JJ, some thoughts

You showed Sunehri being close to Kakusa. A suggestion, maybe you can use it in further chapters. This Shantanu and Sunehri fiasco could have being used as the reason for Mohini's transformation. If you look at the way projected in the show, Mohini' love for Sunehri was pure. Sunehri was the only one untouched of Mohini's taunts and schemings.

You haven't yet projected Sumer, Shatabdi's and Samrat's feelings. Are they standby players or they too have some role?

I liked that Rudra didn't give up his BSD job immediately after Paro's death. He rigorously pursued the case and put most of the men behind bars. He gave up the job 3 years back and that too for a better reason. Now really want to know the reason.

And the last thing. Paro's supposed death happened 7 years ago, Rudra left his BSD job 3 years ago and Thakur didn't hear Rudra's name from last 5 years. I am curious how will you connect these numbers?

Yes, I forgot to mention this point in your blog which I was meaning to later & that point being ... Rudra pursued the case & went ahead with a vengeance to catch & punish the criminals ...Maybe Rudra is still with BSD & working undercover in the guise of having a security agency for them only ?

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Lepzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Nice one.

Thanks for the PM.

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