SwaRon Breakup Track: Things needed for proper execution.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Honestly i have mixed reactions for this track. Intense and passionate SwaRon will be back with this track and it will bring some good and emotional SwaRon scenes. But it should be executed very carefully, otherwise it will loose its essence. Right now Swayam and Sharon both are angry and hurt. And it should be shown properly. There are some important points which should be i this track.

1) In this drama cvs and writers should not forget that SwaRon relationship has come a long way. So, dialogues should be written accordingly. All this loser thing is just not acceptable. How can a deeply in love couple can say such things about each other? Meaningful n proper dialogues and story line is required now. So pls check the dialogues. Its not 2011 but 2014.

2) Break up should not be stretched for too long, like last time. Quality scenes will be appreciated.

3) SwaRon are required to be shown in one frame. They should dere intensity with each other n not wid glass or vases.

4) Now Swayam is hurt and situation is perfect for Swayam's solo, so, it would be really nice if we can have SHANTANU'S SOLO ALSO. PLS _/\_

5) No unnecessary interference of gang or any third party.

6) Sharon's harshness should be less for swayam. She has come a long way and calling him loser or comparing his love is not done. Pls write meaningful dialogues for SwaRon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i totally totally agree wid u charu...
dialogues & script sud be good & balanced. & plz STRICTLY NO GANG INTERFERENCE UNNECESSARILY.
& most importantly WANT SWAYAM'S SOLO DANCE.

Hope this track wl bring intensity. plz for god's sake DO NOT STRETCH d track much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agree with you.

A break up again is already intolerable..SwaRon relationship hs turned a joke..At least give proper continuation and exclusive SwaRon scenes with PROPER dialogues.

The dialogues are horribly poor. What is wrong with the dialogue writer? They are forgetting that SwaRon relationship has come a longgg way. Insulting Swayam is so not making sense.

And yess want a Swayam solo. end this break up track soon.
Edited by sanjhbati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agreed dialogues should be written properly yes its 2014 not 2011 please...
and SWAYAM SOLO PLEASEEE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dialog writer needs to watch d3 from 2011
.. To know what swayam did for sharon...

Tab ye comparison wala dialog likhna to kya uske mind mein nai aata

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Completely agree with you...
Now at least we will get to see intense swaron story from Ameeta
Hope this times dialogue won't be repeated or copy paste from
Previous scenes... Patch up should happen between swaron itself no third person should solve this break up..
And yes this the perfect time to give swayam solo
Edited by Hussainbasha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No expectations from the writers.
I just hope they don't ruin SwaRon Bas.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cvs made a joke of such a pure lovestory

Swayam ne kuch nai kia for sharon
Never...

Dialog writer ko taang do pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Totally in with u here...writers pls this is a request - we have come a long way...seeing the SwaRon relationship bloom, grow, hiccup, rock, steady itself, get tarnished, revive itself, and now after all that, u decide that it still needs to refresh itself then do it with dignity - treat them both on equal terms as equally hurt individuals who dont end up abusing each other in the name of showing their angst...Swayam wont I guess but Sharon at this stage is someone who has been thru a lot with Swayam...for Swayam, and he has for her too... so making her call him a loser makes the creativity of people who concieve something like this look losers...
And yes, pls GIV US THAT ELUDING SWAYAM SOLO ATLEAST NOW...if this scenario does not warrant it then God knows what does...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sharon insulting Swayam is just not done... the main problem is the pathetic dialogues. . .
plz stop butchering SwaRon story more & write meaningful dialogues...
Want Shantanu's SOLO..

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