-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later - Page 7

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazinglyyy written :D

thank u soo much priyuu...!!!!😊😊

Originally posted by: fragnantdreams

wow its such a cute os of choclate & strawberry please write more i am waiting.

thank u soo much dear...!!!😊
ill try to write if i get any idea..!!!
take care..!!

Originally posted by: palakajenian

awesome great work. loved it 😊

thanks a lot palak..!!!😊
im glad u liked it..
take care..~!!!

Originally posted by: panamaa

Nice update dil

Wow dil nice concept that confession part...

Atlast he understand that he is in love with ridhima

Nd he leaved that maya

V.good dil

thank u soo much annuuu..!!!😊
im glad u liked it..
bt u know wat i know the secret u would have loved it eevn if i write antthing..!!
love u girl..!!!

Originally posted by: Jess2014

I liked the end, 👏

Armaan realised that he loved Riddhima and left that wrecked Maya,

Their confession was adorable,

Thanks for PM

thank u soo much jess..!!!😊
im glad u liked it..take care..

Awsm ending...
Ufff no best starting of their beautiful journey of life..

Outstanding wrk...
Keep it up..
Thank alot for pm dear...

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm ending...
Ufff no best starting of their beautiful journey of life..

Outstanding wrk...
Keep it up..
Thank alot for pm dear...

thank u soo much dear..!!!😊😊

ridhima enters armaan's rum..!!

R : stupid idiot moron gadha ulu..
Meri neend haran krke mze se so raha hai.. Tri toh...
A : haye meri itni tarif..
Thoda break lga.. Kyu subha subha tng kr rahi sone de na..
R : tujhe toh main jinda nahi chodungi..
A : aisa maine kya krdia..

R : ques - tu mujhe bachpsn se jnta hai
A : yes
R : mera best frnd hai..
A : yes
R : tujhe mere sare secrets pta hai
A : yes..
R : tujhe pta hai na i have crush on ksg..
A : yes..
R : i day nite dream of ksg..??
A : yes..
R : agar pta hai toh mere se shadi ke kie haan kyu kia...!!!
Ksg mera hero hai... (with a pout..)
A : no..
R : kyu no.. He is..
A : no ways ridhu tra asli hero main hn..
R : vo kaise..

A : main mujhe bachpsn se jnta hn..??
R : yes
A : maim tra best frnd hn..??
R : yes
A : mujhe tre sare secrets ota hai..
R : yes..

A : hogya na prove.
R : very funy.. Mere q mujhse hi.. N how does it prove that u are my real hero..

A : are mere tubelite tujhe sara kuch detail main explain kna pdta hai...
R glares at him..
R : meri burai bad main krio.. Pehle prove ur point..

A : chal q/a ki game age khelte hai.. As per rules sirf to point ans as breif as posible.. N jb tk q finsh nahi hote.. Kuch nahi bolna..
R : ye rule maine bnaye the.. Mujhe mt sikha..

A : jda time se kise jnti hai mujhe ya use.
R : u

A : hat sal ksg ki bday cake kon lake deta hai..
R : u

A : tujhe ksg ke posters kon lake deta hai
R : u

A : kon tre sath ksg ki repeted vedio dekhta hai..
R : u

A : ksg ki vedios dekhti kahan pr hai
R : tre lapy main

A : kyu
R : yaki kisi ko pta na chake i like him..

A : jb ksg pr ya ise co star pr gusa ata hai toh punching bag kon bnta hai tra
R : u

A : kon tri day nite ksg gosip sunta hai
R : u

A : ksg ke har sad scene ke bad tujhe kon chup krvata hai..
R : u

A : ye sahi hai.. Tujhe ksg ki pics vedios main dun.. Infact ek bar toh muskan ko lga tha main gay hn i like ksg... Use itni mujhskil smhjaya.. Tre sari demands main puri krun.. Tamtrums main sahun.. Or tra hero vo.. Mt me..!!
Wat a logic.. Hats off..

R kept mum..

A : ab bolegi..??

R started crying...

A got woried...

A : sory sory.. Plz ro mt.. U know na i cant see u crying... Shh.. Plz chup hoja.. Tra asli hero ksg.. Nt me.. Maun shadi ke lie mna krdunga... Abhi cal krta hn aunty ko.. Plz ridhi stop crying..!!

####
Next day..."!!

R : stupid idiot moron gadha ulu..
Meri neend haran krke mze se so raha hai.. Tri toh...
A : aj fir agi neend haram krne..(to himself..)
hold on ridhu.. subha subha itni tare mujhe digest nahi hoti...
Thoda break lga..

R : tujhe toh main jinda nahi chodungi..
A : (very slowly almost unaudible..) ye toh main bachpan se sunraha hn..

R : kya bola tu..??
A : kuh bhi toh nahi...aisa maine kya krdia..

R : tu mujhe bachpsn se jnta hai
A : yes
R : mera best frnd hai..
A : yes
R : tujhe mere sare secrets pta hai
A : yes..

R : toh fir tune shadi ke lie mna kyu kia..

A : hey bhavan kya ldki hai ye.. kl ld rahi thi shadi ke lie haan kyu ki.. mera hero Ksg.. or aj jb mna krdia.. fir agi subha subha neend kharab krne..
u only wanted it.. ab kya problem hai..

R : kyuki mera real life toh tu hai na jise i can bug by saying any thing..!!

A : thank god tu mani toh..

R : chal fir ab mujhe purpose kr.. n that too ek dm unique..!!
A : tra unique pta hai mujhe kya hota hai.. ruk ek min..

armaan gave her an envelope

A : ridhu i promise u to love u for my complete life.. tri har wishes puri krunga chahe vo jitni hi stupid ya crazy kyu na ho.. ksg ka har show movie dekhunga tre sath without any complaint.. will u marry me..???

Ridhima moves towards armaan n hugs him..

R : is main kya hai..

A : kudh dekhle.. main fresh hoke ata hn..

after 15 mins..

armaan came back from the bath rum... ridhima was siting on his bed.. taking suprt of the bed post n was lost in a paper..
armaan moves towards ridhima..
A : to himself.. ye ldki kabhi nahi sudhar sakti... jst 15 min pehle ise propose kia n ye abhi bhi ksg ke khayalon main khoi hue hai..

A : (pokes ridhima) N sings..

Tera dhyaan kidhar hai
Yeh tera hero idhar hai
Toh Palat...
Tujhe itni bhi khabar hai
ki tera dhyan kidhar hai
-- that was it.. i wrote it less than hr.. hope u like it..!!!!

aww that is a simple, cute nd beautifully written os.
fantastic gud look for ur exam

It's so cute, 😳