-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later - Page 8

Very nice

Awsm os..
Love ridhima's style...poor armaan..
Outstanding wrk dear.
Thanks alot for pm..
Keep rocking

It was such a cute os..!!

Originally posted by: palakajenian

aww that is a simple, cute nd beautifully written os.
fantastic gud look for ur exam

thank u soo much my bunny...im glad u liked it...
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Originally posted by: Jess2014

It's so cute, 😳

Wonderful os 👍🏼

Keep writing

Thanks for PM...

thank u soo much jess...im glad u liked it...
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

Very nice

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for other work

thank u soo much dear...im glad u liked it...
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Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Awsm os..
Love ridhima's style...poor armaan..
Outstanding wrk dear.
Thanks alot for pm..
Keep rocking

thank u soo much dear...im glad u liked it...
🤗

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

It was such a cute os..!!

wonderfull..!!

full of naughtyness..!! loved it..!!

best part was when ridz came to wake ammy up by giving sweet sweet cursings in morning..!! :P :P

and the ques ans part..!!

awww sooo cute..!!

thank u soo much niki...im glad u liked it...
cursings full of love.. a unique love dose...😉
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Originally posted by: halima_zaka

fab

thanks dear..!!!

Originally posted by: niki795

Part 1

Nice os

Continue soon

thank u soo much niki... im glad u liked it..!!

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh

so sweet :D

thanks dear..!!!

OS ~ 4
Ajab Gajab Romance

ye idea kafi time pehle aya tha.. bt it was hanging in between like my other works... aj finally jb maine apne drafts open kie to write someting mujhe ye os dikha jiske bare main bhul chuki thi.. so i thought of completing this first...

humari team ne ek survay kia jismain hmne logon se teen swal kie.. n they were..:

1- ek perfet 1st date kaise honi chahie..??
2- ek couple jisne resently apni felings confes ki konsi 1st movie dekhe..??
3- apne partner ke sath long drive kaise honi chahie..??

here are the public views on our ques..!!

Megha Bansal A1. according to me perfect date is jahan two lovers ek saath hon...aur plenty of time... spend karen...jagah dpesn't matter... A2. DDLJ... ... A3. long drive should be on empty roads at l8 nyt... nd sweet littlr romantic talks b/w lovers...

Rup Kotha 1.pehle par as per all jaise wish karte hai lots decoration and make them feel special but in my view it doesn't matter how the other things go only sath important hoti hai baki mohal to apne ap a jati hai
2.this one depend on how they confession gone..
but in my view only then if i got a chance i would see some horror ya thriller film though i don't like any of them but company does effect u know...
3.in my view a true long drive would be start with morning at evening reach at place and after spending whole evening back in night on bike..

Palak Sharma perfect date should be on beach or some kind a place jahan bohot peaceful ho just the couple second any movie but a romantic one like any movie of shahrukh like ddlj , k2h2. long drive should be on late night in a rainy season nd the couple confessing their love, romance nd planning their future ahead

Aayushi KaJenian A perfect date a lonely place with a simple set up giving cosy felling and then partner must give plenty of time understanding each other and a small kiss in last confessing felling not passionate just simple touch of lips...

Movie should me after confessions. Vivah ...

Long drive should have drawning evening time so after a long drive reaching a point they sit on the car bonet with girl sitting beside ya between boys leg and seeing the drawning Sun sharing there feeling and then by night returning home... and in last a kiss on forehead. Of girl

Muskan Chada : oh ji.. Ye date shate ke bare main kabhi socha nahi... Koi ldka mila hi ni nahi jiske sath jaun.. Ya aise kahun.. Jis main psnd ayi vo mujhe nahi aya.. Or jo mujhe psnd aya use main nahi hai.. Mera chodo jb jaungi tb btaungi.. Pr ab apne mujhe se swal puch hi lie hai toh apko apni ek fnd ke bare main btati hn.. By god vo dono na single piece hai... Baba ji ne undono ko bnake vo wale model bnd krdue..!!
Hahaha..!!

**flash back..!!**

a girl comes out her house wearing a one piece dress high heels n a clutch in her hand her hairs nicely tied on her left shoulder n a few curled fliks on right side..

She was surprised to see scene in front of her.. It was their 1st date n her boyfriend was standing infont if a open landi jeep..

Wearing simple a simple t shirt n jeans..
Which was nt him.. No doubt it was her 1st date bt her boyfriend have been on many.. N she was the one who always helped him in preparation...
He would dress up in formal suit.. N in go with his date in his dad's expensive cars..

As she moved forward she lost her balance n was about to fall wen a pair of arms catches her n makes her stand strait..

Ridhima : thanks armaan..
Armaan : ye kya hal bna raha hai.. Jb hels main chalna nahi ata toh dali kyu... Or ge sir pr noodles kyu tange hue hai...!!

Ridhima : armaan vo main..

Armaan: tum main itni tamez kab se agi.. Tumne mujhe armaan bulaya.. Haye bhagwan kon ho tum..?!

Ridhima looked at him with her mouth open..

Armaan : leave..
He pics her up in his arms n moves inside her house..
Ridhima :(shocked) hmne toh jna tha bahar toh abder kyu jare hai hm..

After reaching inside armaan gave her packet..

Ridhima : ye kya hai..
Armaan : meri asli jangli bili..!!
Ridhima : mtlb..
Armaan : kudh dekhlo..

As she opend the packet she found a bagpack n it had jeans top.. new snekers .. And a braslet..

Ridhima : ye sab..
Armaan : ji ms gupta.. Now will u plz go n do the honour of geting my besti back..

Ridhima was a tom boy.. She was not at all comfortable in wearing short dresses hels or makeup..!!
** flashback..

ridhima was siting with her frnds anji n muski..
anji : so excited..??
ridhima : excited vo kyu..??
muski : are baba aj tri 1st date hai na armaan ke sath..
ridhima : kya tum log bhi.. hmdono bs nightout ke lie ja rahe hai.
anji night out tb hota tha jb tum frnds the ab u uys are gf-bf yaar.. forget it tumhe smjhana bekar hai.. ye btao kya pehan rahi ho..
ridhima : rember jo t armaan ne mere bday pr di thi vo with blue faded jeans n my fav snekrs..
muski : babaji.. apse koi maufaturing defect toh nahi hua na.. is jhali ko ldke ki jahag ldki bna dia..
ridhim a: kya bkwas kr rahi ho muski..
anji : or nahi toh kya.. aise jao gi date pr..
muski : anji ise kuch nahi hoga hmne hi krna pdega kuch..
ridhima : tum dono kya krne wale ho..

after 5 mins ridhima's rum was turned into a store with lots of dress shoes accories n makeup..
ridhima : ye sab.. no ways im nt gonna wear this..
anji : ridz are u mad date pr sl dekhna chahie...
muski : n moreover tune armaan ko pehle gf's ko nahi dekha..
ridhima : vo makeup ki dukan.. horor ki ki wiches..
anji : utna nahi bt thoda different toh lg sakti ho...

after lots of eforts by muski n anji they made ridhima wear a dres with heals as ridhima thought armaan would like her as his previous gf's..
** end of flashback..

AR are frinds since high school.. Both share each n every secret with each other.. Armaan the most handsome boy of colage.. Every girl just drol over him.. Girls would do anything to get a smile or a simple hey from armaan... N being his date was like an hounor for them..
Now the same armaan was in love with his besti.. His buddy his jungli bili.. Partner in crime n all pranks.. His ridhima..!!

Armaan was lost in his world when ridhima came out wearing the dres gifted by armaan..

Ridhima stood infront of him bt armaan was still lost in his own dream land
Ridhima moved her hand in front of him..
Still no responce..

Ridhima had enought of it..

She threw her bag on armaan's face..
A : abe mar kyu rahi hai..
R : jb koi khada khada eyes khol kr so jaye toh mere style main aise hi uthate hai use..
A : finaly u are back..

R : chalen ab..
A : chal na maine kb roka.. Vaise bhi late tune kia..
Sayi.g this armaan left leaving a surprised ridhima..

Ridhima folwed armaan towards his jeep..!!!

Both sat in jeep n armaan drove it to a mall... N headed towards the movie theater..
R : hm konsi movie dekhne jarahe hai...
No doubt she was excited to go on a moviebt a bit nerous too according her previous exprence armaan always watch either horor or romantic movie on his dates.. n ridhima hated both..
A : its a surprise baby...
R : armaan plz dont call me baby.. Tumhe kis angle se main baby lgti hn...
A : ab agar tum mujhe armaan armaan bulaogi toh mujhe bhi yahi krna pdega..
R : kute kamine...
A : ab hue na meri jhali wali baat..surprise hai.. chalo lets goo..

both sat in movie hall to ridhima's surprise the hall was full
n the mivie began.. .Action Jackson
ridhima was a fan of ajay devgan esply after his singhm n singhm returs. golmal,all the best son of sardar bol bachan were list of her fav movies..
n aslo she loved action movies elp of ajay devgan alot
Action Jackson was a perfct movie..
both of them enjoyed alot during the movie.. ridhima whistled alot on the scenes she liked...n armaan too accompanied her..
after the movie armaan 's next plan was to have diner..
armaan took ridhima to her fav dhaba.. again unlike armaan who used to go to big 5 star hotles..

dhaba..!!

Armaan jumowd out of jeep n waited for ridhima..
Armaan went towards ridhima..
A : ab kya yahan khana khana hai..
R : armaaann...
Chaloo..

Both went n sat the manji (folding beds..) a woden plank was kept in the middle n both sat on either side of the plank..

They ordered for big glases of lassi.. N ridhima's fav.. Black dal rice n tanduri roti with lots of buter; n for sweetdish both had gur with desi ghee n gajar ka halwa...!!!

punjabi folk dance Bhangra was being performed while they both were having their diner.. ridhima was nt able to stop her feets after listening the drum beats...
as soon as they finished their diner ridhima puled armaan towards the dance group n stared to dance with them on beets of drum..

after a dancing for about 10 mins both were completely exhausted n they both rested half lying on the manji where they had diner..
n the armaan last plan was a long drive...

open jeap full speed on nation highway with loud music...

song fukre
singer diljit
music honey singh
album jine mera dil luteya

O Jeep Di Mitro Shat Loha Ke,
Alloy Wheel De Tyre Pawa Ke,
Maari Di Aa Gedi Bai Nit Tika Ke,...2X
Roku Kehnde Pendua Nu,


O Maneya Ki Moodi Haige Ji, Madam Fukre Na,
Par Dil Lain Vali Koi Sanu Takre Na,
O Maneya Ki Moodi Haige Ji, Madam Fukre Na,
Par Dil Lain Vali Koi Sanu Takre Na,


Fukre Na.. Ji ,, Aapa Fukre Naa
Fukre Na ...Ji ,, Aapa Fukre Naa...


Raati Racean Laun Di Shaartan.
Sheeti-2 Daru Makyun Di Shaartan.
Pher Puwarda Paun Diyan Shaartna...2X
Main Ta Veere Idhe Hi Karu


O Maneya Ki Moodi Haige Ji, Madam Fukre Na,
Par Dil Lain Vali Koi Sanu Takre Na,
O Maneya Ki Moodi Haige Ji, Madam Fukre Na,
Par Dil Lain Vali Koi Sanu Takre Na,


Fukre Na.. Ji ,, Aapa Fukre Naa
Fukre Na ...Ji ,, Aapa Fukre Naa...


Roku Kehnde Pendua Nu, 4X
Main Ta Veere Idhe Hi Karu...

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MUskan : so guys ye thi story mere do stupid frnds who make a great couple.. unki masti n pranks main hi ukna pyaar chupa hai.. they make a perfect couple... ek dusre ko achese smjhte hai..

In short we can say that a perfect evening with the one u love is dosnt mater where u are n what u do.. the things that mater is u are with each other n make ur day memorable...

OK guys ye tha mera ek random thought hope u guys like it..
agar psnd na aye toh bta dena i promise bilkul bura nahi lgega.. n ap logon ko or tang nahi krungi aisa likhke...

Very nice and lovely

awesome update\

omg rock star thats a rocking os 😉
wow diks starting is so fabulous nd totally different nd unexpected 😃
all of ours ideas nd comments is used here
just loved the start nd concept too
its cute nd beautiful os
ridhz is a tom boy in this and that is unexpected as we always imagine nd seen ridhz as a simple nd sweet girl not like this nd i loved this new muskan type avatar of ridhima 😆
the song u used is my favourite song i just loved it nd its suit the situation too.
loved the scene where ridhz come after changing nd armaan is in his dreamland nd she beat him with the bag for this he he he 😆
and armaan hmm he is also nice nd sweet guy.
he makes ridhz first date the most memorable for her everything is for her nd according to her taste 😃
one thing i don't like is that its too short 😡 kyn? jab padhne main maza araha tha tab tak khatam hi ho gyi
but anyway next time do write a long one ohkay 😊
do write more nd plz give an update of ur on going ff
lover vs rivals or ffus ki update do na they r at a very important point