-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hey,
It was a really nice OS,

Loved Armaan and Rohan's bonding
and Riddhima could not seem to get Armaan
out of her mind.
After that, she decided to join swimming classes
and when Armaan first saw Riddhima,
he was mesmerized by her sight
Loved the part where Armaan tries to
get Riddhima familiar with water
And the confession part in water was really nice
At last, they finally got married,

Loved this OS,
It had a unique concept

Thanks for the PM

Keep writing,

Take care.😊




thank u soo much dear...
im glad u liked my idea,...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago


thenk uuu priyuuu😊
:-*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa

wow dil... u comeback with a bang

loved the story dil
superb




aww thank u aannuuu...!!!!😊😊
:-*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

Its awsm os dear..
Love the way U expressed each n every thing..
Thnx alot for pm..
Keep rocking



thank u soo much dear...!!!😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Both the os were super awsumm..!!

Sorry for not commenting before..!!
But really they were superb..!!
Loved it..!!
Do write more and pm me..!



thank u soo much niki..
plz dont be sorry..
surely i will...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

beautiful OS dear

loved it
superb!!
do continu
thanks for pm



thank u dear..!!!
im glad u liked it...!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

Is Os ka siggie dekhte hi mujhe yaad aya

Aj blue hai pani pani pani pani
Aur din bhi sunny sunny sunny sunny
Aja on the beach yaar photo meri khich phuti kismaat hogi teri
agar tune baat na mani


Then ate hai storry me

So shuruat se main soch rhi thi where is Our own AR
but mil hi nhi rahi thi
then hero ki entry hui as swim coach
The way he enter usse yaad aya

Tune mari entriyaan
dil me baji ghantiyaan


then hroin bhi agayi
Sweet si pyari si hero ki diwani
Then use bhi swiming join karni hai
Jabki usko pani se darr lagti hai
uski haal se yaad aya

Tere naam se jee loon
Tere naam se marr jaaun
Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun
Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
Ho ri ha ha ri ho gayi main
Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani deewani


Armaan bhi pehli nazar me lattuuu
Wah wah
Well then love the way armaan make her learn swiming
Pata hai i love to be in water but mujhe swimming nhi ati

& then riddhima ki harkatoon se to Armaan ki bhi nind hurrr
Then ridz finally speaks to her bhabi

then riddhima ka wo comedy circus wala comment was too funnyy

then armaan invite her
well it was just awesome
Their confession
it was just tooo goooddd
loved it
Then their wedding night
tooo awesome yaaarrr
i just loved it
unka wo last bit romance se yaad aya

Boond boond karke mujhe main girna tera
Aur mujh main mujhse jada hona tera
Bhiga bhigasa mujhko tann tera lage
Aaja tujhko pooloon mann mera kahe..
Mein na bacha mujh main thodasa bhi
Dekh tu na bacha tujh mein bhi
Jal ne kaga garam saanson main
Tu pighal ne laga mujh mein hi


excelent os diks
loved it whole
Aise hi likhte reh
love u :*
Tc



Aishu yaar tri song selection.. ekdm perfect suit krta hai...👍🏼👏

kya rply krun main tre itna amzing musical coment ka.. haye i just loved reading ur coment.. ek musical saga main convert krdia tune mere os ko...

love u.. :-*

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