-OS on AR by dik..!! updated 13/04/2015 pmz later - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS
Loved the whole,
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THANK U SOO MUCH
all those who comment on my previews os..!!!


due to less time im unable to rply to each one of u separately..!!!
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OS ~ 5
In The Blues..!!!




Hey guys...
Ap sab ko toh pta hai me exam leave pr hn ajkl.. Bt kya krun AR se jda der tk dur raha ni gya.. So here im with an OS of mine.. In The Blues...!!

Im a bit disaponted reading it kunki jo maime imagine kia tha i couldnt expres that in the same way.. Bt still im sharimg it with u guys.. Hope u guys enjoy... No maime imagine kia may be u could conect to it..!!

No more bk bk..
Here goes my os...!!!

Love in the air.. Bahut purana hogya na... Lets change it.. Love in the water... Wat say..??

****

one of the best academy in mumbai.. it was a ful furnised building which had all the basic n mordern facilities required by a swimer.. gym, medical facilty waiting are..large changing rums for both male n female members..with clean showrers n locker facilityit had quest rums for families n couples... it had coman large pool n small pools which were given to members on booking..
one could feel the smell of clorine water from reception area...
it was a large pool with high hygiene level.. even the botom tiles of deep side
were clean n shiny...from kids to teenagers n even elders were enjoying them selves in the pool
laughing and splashing in the water... some of them learing to be profesional swimiers.. n others were there for fun n exercise... parents sitting at the side with laptops, iPads, iPods, e-readers, books, magazines some were holding cameras n recoding fun time of their kids n family members...

***

A boy in mid 20's comes out male changing rum.. In his swimming suit.. He was wearing green shorts with a black cap n holding goggles in his right hand..
Water droplets were moving down from his muscular chest n tattooed arm..
He moved towards the stairs n climbed up to a height of 10 metrs..
Dives from that height in deepest part of the pool...
By doing various kinds of strokes he swam towards the shallow end where others were watching him without blinking their eyes..
He moved towards the crud n waved his hand in front of them...

: Heloo people this is not done.. Apsabhi aise welcome kroge mera..

All those who knew him before shouted : coach u r back.. We missed u...
: me too kids... N all those who don't know me... Let me introduce myself.. I'm armaan malik senior coach in this academy.. N y u all stopped yr practice.. Continue..

A boy of almost 10 yrs shouted from pool side : coach u r back..
He jumped in the pool n directly landed in front of armaan..and hugged him tightly..
Boy : I missed u coach.. Wat a surprise.. U came early..
Armaan : rohan careful..
Rohan : sorry coach..
Armaan : u missed u too buddy.. N this academy so I came early..
Go n do ur practice ill meet others n then ill come to u..

Rohan : ok coach..

Everyone has started their practice.. There were many coaches n pool guards teaching new comers n helping others to improve their swing skills..

Armaan went to each n every member to pool advised them to do the stroke properly guided them.. Showed them how to do n even motivated them..

A pair of eyes were constantly watching each n every move of armaan.. She smiled seeing how he taught little kids to swim..
How he took the 7 yr old crying girl in the pool n made her laugh... Her smiled vanished wen she saw him moving towards a group of girls who were n early 20's..!!

N a frown took over her facial expression wen he lifted one of those girl from her legs n supported her by keeping his arm below his stomach..


###
A wk passed..
that girl used to come every day only for armaan..
His smile his eyes.. His perfect build body.. His swimming strokes.. How he handle kids n teenagers in pool..Used to drive her crazy n she used to stare at him without blinking her eyes..

Like any other day she was lost in her own world.. In world of armaan...!!
She came back to the real world wen she felt everything moving vigorously..
She screamed..
: aahh bhuchalll...
Rohan : laughed holding his stomach.. Omg bua look at ur face... Aahh bhuchal.. (he mocked her ) hahaha...
Girl : wat yaar chotu aisa koi krta hai.. Itni zor se hilya mujhe..
Rohan : toh or kya krta kb se bula raha tha ap sun hi nahi rahi thi pta nahi kin khayalon main gum thi..Chalo lets go home..
Girl : kuch bhi... chaloo..


####

Late night..
Sleep was far away.. She was just turning sided n talking to herself..

Girl : mis ridhima gupta look at the time.. Its 2 n u are still awake... Dark circles ho jayengee.. Sojaaa...
(She huged her teddy.. N closed her eyes... Bt she opened her eyes with a jerk.. )

Ridhima : Kaise soun chotu ka vo coach he is haunting in my dreams... Kuch krna pdega nahi toh main pgl hojaungi... Soch ridhima soch...

After thinking for 15 mins she came she sat on her bed n shouted : idea... Kl subha hi dad or bhai se baat krti hn...

###

Next morning
Breakfast table..

Ridhima : good morning dad..(n hugs a elderly man from his back who was siting on a chair)

Shishank( shishank gupta father of ridhima he is successful business man married to padma who is a house wife) : good morning princes..

Then ridhima moved towards another man almost in early 30's.who was sitting next to her dad. N hugs him just like she hugged her dad..

Ridhima : gud morning bhai...
(Rahul gupta ridhima 's brother he is 10 yr elder to ridhima.. Is a busines man.. N wants to be sucesful as his father... He is very possessive about his sister ridhima..maried to muskan gupta how is a psychiatrist..)
Rahul : god morning ridhu..

She sat on the other side of her dad...
Ridhima (shouted) : mom bhabhi gud morning.. Jldi lao na breakfast mujhe ap sabhi se kuch kehna hai...

2 Voices from kitchen in a union : aa rahen hai bs 2 mins..

Rahul : ridhu tum yahan ho tra bodyguard kahan hai..?? Vo nahi aya..
Ridhima : bhai ap mere chotu ko kuch mt bolo... Araha hai apna bag pack kr raha hai vo..

Muskan n padma came with trays in thier hands...

Muskan : gud mornung ridhu.. (n sat on rahuls's side)
Padma : gud morning beta.. Kya hua aj itni subha subha itna hala..
(she went n sat opposite to shiskank)

Ridhima : mom dad mujhe swimming class join krni hai...

Rahul : wat.. (n started to cough)
Muskan gave rahul a glass of water n pated his back...

Muskan : rahul tum thik ho..
Rahul : yes im fine.. Ridhu u serious tum or swimming...
Ridhima : bhabhi bhai se kehdo main joke ke mood main nahi hn..
Shishank : bt beta tum swiming..
Rahul : exaclty my point ridhu tu kabhi bhi water park nahi gyi kunki tumhe dar lgta hai n tum swimming vahan to water park se jda deep water hota hai..
Ridhima : dad plz i want to swim.. Plz dad...
Padma : shishank mn bhi jaye achi baat hai na ridhima wants to over come her fear... Ise khushi ki baat kya hosakti...
Rahul : u are rite mom pr ridhima vahan akeli kaise..
Rohan came runing runing n sat with his bua..
Rohan : akeli kyu dady main hn na unke sath.. Wao bua sachi main ap mere sath pool main aoge kitna mza ayega.. Apko pta hai mere sabhi pool frnds ke parents bde bhai behan..pool main ate hai unke sath pr mere sath nahi ata koi...
Rahul : rohan vo islie taki vo tumhare frnds ka dhayan rakh saken.. Pr tumhari bua ko toh swiming nahi ati na..

Rohan : toh kya hua main rakhunga na bua ka dhayan...ap hi toh mujhe bua ka body gaurd bulate ho..

Rahul : pr beta...

Muskan : rahul ridhima ab bachi nahi hai jne do use.. Pool ke sabhi coaches n life guard bahut ache hai.. I have seen them.. Chote chote bachon ko smbhal lete hai or ridhima toh..

Rahul : pani main she is worst than a 2 yr kid..

Ridhima : bhai thats nt fair... (n pouted)

Rahul : dekha kaise bachon ki tarah muh bna rahi hai n tum bolti ho ye bdi hogyi hai..

Ridhima threw tisue paper on rahul

Ridhima : dad bhai se kaho mera mzak mt udai mujhe swiming jna hai n thats final..

Shishank : rahul.. Kyu paershan krte ho ise.. Agar ise jna hai toh let her go na..

Rahul : ok dad... Main aj iski registration krvadumga acadmy main...

Ridhima : yeppii.. Thank u dad...
Chotu jldi se khana finish kr hme shoping jna hai.. Swim suit lene..

###

Swiming Acadmy

Rohan : bua jldi chalo aj apne kitna late krvadia..
Ridhima : chal toh rahi hn.. Koi swim suit acha hi tha..
Rohan : toh abhi toh jldi chalo na...
Ridhima : chal toh rahi hn...

##

Rohan was about to enter the pool bt armaan stopped him..
Armaan : rohan u are late..
Rohan : sorry coach vo kya hai na..
Rahul : hey coach..
Armaan : oh hey mr gupta.. I was about to call u.. Main rohan ka name inter acadmy comp main dena chata hn isle i wanted ur permision..
Rahul : dont be formal coach 1 yr pehle maine ap pr pura trust krke iski responsibilty apko di thi.. If u think he can do it then y not..
Armaan : thats an honour for me mr gupta..
Rahul : aj main apko ek responsibilty dena chata hn.. Meri choti sister she wants to learn swiming to kya ap use..
Armaan : thats my job dont wory..
Rahul : ek problem hai.. Use dep water se dr lgta hai so..
Armaan : dont worry mr gupta hmare yahan le sabhi coaches n life gaurds trained hai...
Rahul : thank u coach.. Ill take ur leave.. Rohan bua ka dhayan rakhna...
Rohan : dont wory papa bodygaurd rohan bua ko kuch nahi hone dega...

Armaan : so rohan apki bua kahan hai..
Rohan : vo change krne gye the.. Vo dekho vo rahe blue swim suit main...

Armaan's eyes fel on ridhima she was standing on the door of changing room.. She was wearing a dark blue swim suit frock stlye that came up to her upper thighs .It was half sleves. Her hairs were properly tied in a bun a covered properly with cap.. She was struggling to adjust the goggles over her bun...
Water droplets were running down her milky soft legs as she has just taken the shower...

Armaan was memorized by her beauty..
Rohan's shout brought armaan back in to his senses..
Rohan : bua jldi aao na...
Ridhima came towards the pool n was dam scared..
Rohan : comon bua get in pool.. Jump..
Ridhima : nahi i cant jump inside.. Its sacry..
Rohan : oho bua itna kam pani hai its nt even 3 feets...

Ridhima again looked in pool n closed her eyes with fear...

Armaan : hey open ur eyes..
On listen armaan's voise ridhima opend her eyes...
Armaan : wats ur name
Ridhima : ridhima..
Armaan : u dont wana jump..

Ridhima nodes her head like a small kid..
Armaan smiled seing her facial expresion..

Armaan : acha chalo come from stairs...

Armaan m rohan moved towards the stairs..

Armaan : comon hold my hand n come down.. Relax n just step in..

Ridhima gave her hand n his... His hold sent shivers in her body...

Armaan : ridhima dont look in pool here look at me.. N step down carefully...

Ridhima was lost in armaan's eyes n did wat ever armaan was asking her to do...
Finaly ridhima was stnding in side the pool..
Rohan excitedly hugged ridhima..

Rohan : waoo bua congratulation ap finaly pool main..

N this made ridhima realise her postion...
She held armaan's hand more tightly n fear was writen all over her face...

Armaan : relax ridhima.. Its just water we use it every day.. There is no harm...

Ridhima gathered some confidence n losen her grip on armaan's hand...

Armaan : 1 st task for u.. Just enjoy being in water.. Fell the water on ur body..

Armaan made ridhima stand holding a rope...

Armaan : ridhima hold this rope tighlty n move a few steps let n realx ur body.. Then we wil start with basic breathing exercise...

Ridhima did as she was told..
After half an hr.. Ridhima was feling beter being in water...

armaan : so ridhima i think now u are familar with water.. we will start with the basic breathing exercise.. its the called bubling.. take a deep breath move ur head inside water hold till u can n then start exhaling.. wen u are out of air come outt.. chalo now try it..
mere thought of being inside water made ridhima scared.. fear was writen all over her face..
armaan : comon hold my hand n try..
ridhima tried to the exercise bt she was nt able to be inde water for more than 3 sec.. n she came out coughing..

armaan pated her back n encourged her to do properly... after 10-12 atempts ridhima was improvong n she got the trick of doing.. armaan asked er to practice the same n he went to other people in pool...

a few days later..
ridhima had now very much learned the breathing exercise..
armaan : ridhima now its time for 2nd step in swiming.. as u lay on ur bed in the same way u have to make ur body lie on water.. hold the pipe...take a push from below n try to float..
wait ill show u how..

armaan showed her how to do n asked her to try..

ridhima tried doing bt her legs didnot came up.. n she came out coughing.. water had intered her mouth..
armaan gently rubed her back..

armaan : common ridhima try again..

this time armaan supoterd fer legs by pulling her upwards by her foot... bt still ridhima could not float..

armaan kept on motivationg her n even ridhima did not lose hope...

after 5-6 tries her she came up nt could nt hold her body for more than 2-3 sec.. she was about to come out bt armaan held her by puting his arm under her stoch n other oner her knee..

armaan's touch made ridima shiver n she was blank unable to anything.. n she forgot the basic rule of nt inhalinaling wen face is inside water...


###
a wk pased..
bt today rohan came alone..
armaan : tumhari bua nahi ayi..??
rohan : she is having fever...

Armaan got woried for ridhima

A : kya hua ridhima ko..??
Rohan : kuch nahi coach bua pehle toh kabhi kabhi crazy cizen krti thi.. Pr pichle kuch dino se bilkul crazy bnti ja rahi thi.. Raat ko she was trying to practice in her bath tub.. Or vahin sogi.. Abhi toh acha hua muma unhe chek krme chali gye raat ko... Pehle toh unhe pani main jna biklul psnd nahi tha.. Or ab jab dekho swiming swiming... Plz coach bua ko jldi se sikha pta nahi tb tk vo kya krengi..

Armaan was woried for ridhima.. He meet her.. See her..
Armaan (to himself) : kya krun kaise baat krun ridhima se.. Pgl ldki hai ekdm aise bath tub main kon sota hai... Cal krun kya..?? Nahi aise uske ghat cak krna nt a gud idea.. Uska no bhi toh nahi hai... Kl subha tk rohan ke ane ka wait krna pdega..

Armasn slept thing about ridhima..

####

Ridhima was siting in a cafe with muskan..
Muskan : ridhima btao mujhe kya hua hai...
Ridhima : bhabhi kya ap bhi mujhe fever hua hai thats it...
Muskan : ridhu shayad rum bhul rahi ho.. Main tumhari bhabhi hone sath sath ek psychiatrist bhi hn.. N i know u from from lst 11 years.. Spill it out now..
Ridhima : bhabhi vo..
Muskan : ridhu speak up.. Tumhe kb se pani se pyar higya.. Kisi frnd ne chalange kia.. Oh no wait.. Ridhu do u like some one...

Listening to these words clr of ridhima 's face changed to deep red..
Muskan : mujhe day one se doubt tha ause hi bina kisi reason tu swimung nahi join kregi.. Ab btao mujhr kon hai vo..
Ridhima:.bhabhi plz abhi nahi...
Muskan : ridhu u are like rohan to me obviosly like any other parent main bhi nahi chahungi ki tum kisi glt sngt main pdo..
Ridhima : bhabhi aisa kuch nahi hai he is nice guy.. Pr bhabhi i dont know he likes me or nt.. Bhabhi i promise sabse pehle apko btaungi.. Plz abhi nahi...
Muskan : fine bt promisr me koi glt kdm nahi uthogi and apne ap ko hurt toh bilkul nahi...
Ridhima : promise bhabhi.. U are the best...!!!

###

whole wk armaan missed being with ridhima.. to see her face.. the way she behaved in pool.. her childish expressions..

finaly ridhima has recovered n she will be joining pool again..
armaan : welcome back ridhima..
ridhima : thanks coach..

armaan gave ridhima tips n asked her practice.. leaving anoter coach with ridhima he moved towards a group of girls whi had joined pool in absence of ridhima..
ridhima insead of practiceing was constantly looking at armaan n those girls..
ridhima : has toh aise rahe hai jaise yahan swiming nahi comedy circus chal rahi hai.. huh...!!

##

almost 1&half moth later.. ridhima had now improved her swiming she no longer feared of being in water bt seeing water from a hight was nt les than a horor film for her..

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Ridhima was in the changing rum...
She opens her locker n found a found a packet..
there was a note over that packet
"meet me in pool at sharap 7 in the evening..!!
-armaan.."

Ridhima open the packet there was royal blue swimig suit in it..

Ridhima was confused y armaan caled her there...

Ridhima : coach ne mujhe sham ko dubara kyu bulaya..?? Mera time toh 5-6 ka hai na.. Kya krun jaun ya nahi...
(there was a fight going beet her heart n mind..)
heart : are ridhima soch kya rahi hai this is only u wanted armaan ke sath time spend krna

mind : bt mujhe jna chahie kya..??

heart :coach toh bahut ache hai..

mind :pr kya main unhe trust krun..??

Heart :Or ridhima vahan jaye gin hi toh pta kaise chalega coach ne tujhe kyu bulaya hai...

mind :pr agar koi gadbad hogi fir..

mind : kuch nahi hoga ridhima.. tu dr kyu rahi hai.. remember u love him...

Ridhima : enough yaar tum dodno mujhe itna confuse kyu krte ho.. its decide main aj armaan se milne jaungi n unhe apne dil ki baat btaungi...

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7 pm

Pool side


Ridhima came out of the changing room
she wore the swim suit given to her by armaan it was royal blue suit that came up to her thighs.. bt it did not have the frock so she tied a scaf on her waist.. swimsuit was cutsleves.. with deep neck from back n had a cut on left side at waist..

Her hairs were tied properly n covered with cap...

armaan came towards ridhima wearing his royal blue swimming shots..
he forward his hand towards ridhima n which ridhima gladly accepted.. taking ridhima's hand in his he led her towards the stairs of the diving platform..
as they were about to step on the 1st strair.. ridhima held armaan's hand tighly asking him to stop..

Armaan faced ridhima holding her face in his palm..
armaan : relax ridhima.. y are u sacred main hn na tumare sath.. I wont let anything happen to u... comon..

Armaan took ridhima to the platform at a high of 5 meters above pool level... ridhima moved a bit forward n after seening water from such a high level she got sacred n closed her eyes n satred to move back..
armaan held her hand to stop her..
armaan moved towards ridhima.. he moved his free hand on ridhima' waist n removed the scaf..
while armaan was unting the scaf his hands brused ridhima's bare waist.. and it made ridhima shiver.. and she opend her eyes..
ridhima was lost in armaan's eyes.. his blues ocean eyes same as the clr of pool had something different in them n intence ridhima was unable top read his his n was looking at him constantly...
armaan after removing the scaf removed her cap n open her hairs which fel on her face... n spme haoir strands disturbed arman's view of her beautiful face..
armaan gently blew air on ridhima's face n tucked the stands behind her ear..
armaan : u look more beautiful on open hairs.. don't punish by pining them tight..

for ridhima it was a dream.. she was still lost in her own thoughts n just living this moment with armaan..

Armaan : (in a slow voice) do u trust me..??
ridhima noded her head in positive sub counciously...
armaan : kyat um mera sath dogi.. I want to show u my world.. aj main tumhare sath apne life ka sabse impo*nst part share krna chata hn..
just jump with me on count of 3..

ridhima came back to her sences wen armaan puled her towards the corner..
ridhima held armaan's tighlt..
ridhima : no armaan.. nahi.. its deep..
armaan : u trust me..??
ridhima : yes armaan bt..!!
armaan : aj no bts ridhima plz.. just hold my hand n enjoy this felling.. im with u main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... I promise...
ridhima : pkaa..??
armaan : haan baba pkaa... Just loose ur body n relax...I bet u will love it...


3


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1


And jump..

armaan ridhima were falling down the platform just like a cloth that ia falling down a high building...

Armaan was lost in ridhima.. n ridhima had closed her eyes due to fear.. bt her faced was relaxed.. her forehead did not show the lines that ridhima had on 1sy day of her swimimg clases

As they both landed in water with a full force water splased out n their body was moving down in deep water... armaan held ridhima's hand tightly n swam up to the surface as fast as he could...
on reaching the surface he puled ridhima upwards n made her stand with support of the side wall...

armaan : ridhima open ur eyes.. u are fine,.. look around..
ridhima slowly open her eyes n seeing the water all aound she hugged armaan tighly...
armaan : hey kya hua.. idhar dekho.. sab thik hai... main hn tumhare sath.. look up..

Armaan lifed ridhima's face with his palm... n got a paniced seeing tears in ridhima's eyes..
armaan : im sorry ridhima plz don't cry.. in cant see u like this.. plz ridhima.. I promise main aj ke bad aisa kabhi nahi krunga.. plz ridhima...

ridhima strted hiting armaan on his chest with her free hand.. armaan held her hand..
armaan : kya hua ridhima..
ridhima started to cry louder n tried to hit armaan with other hand with which she was holding the side wall.. n lost her bance..
armaan held ridhima tighly n lited her upwards...
armaan : ridhima.. realx.. we are n 6 feet deep water..
ridhima : I hate u armaan aise koi krta hai kya.. mere jan hi nikal di thi tumne jb main vahan upar se niche pool main dekha..
armaan held her arms tightly..

Armaan : shhh.. aise fir kabhi mt kehna.. jb tk main tumhare sath hn tumhe kuch nahi hoga... vaise ek baat btao maine glt kya kia.. swimming main jb tk diving na kro koi mza nahi hai.. or tumhe hi toh jldi se jldi swimming sikhna hai
ridhima : tumhe kisne bola main swimng sikhne ke lie join kia.. ( n bit her tounge..)
armaan : toh fir..?? yahan pool main nahane ati ho..
ridhima was speech les..
armaan : ab chup kyu ho bola na..!! soy it ridhima.. aj aise chup mat raho.. job hi hai dill bol do..
ridhima: (spoke as fast as she could) so that main tumhare sath thoda time spend kr sakun..
n hid her face in armaan's chest...
armaan : finally after * months le bad tumhare dil ki bat zuban pr aa hi gyi...kitna wait krvaya tumne..
ridhima looked at armaan with schoked expesions...
armaan : aise kya dekh rahi hoo.. jb tum pehli bar pool main ane se dr rahi thi shak toh tabhi hogya tha.. tumhare ye bdi bdi eyes kuch toh chupa rahi thi... jb bhi main tumhare pas ata that um ekdm conscious hojati thi.. itna sa bhi control nahi humhare apne is dil par.. hota bhi kaise armaan milik ke charm se koi nahi bach sakta.. fir mainr=e decide kia pta toh main lga ke rahunga akhir jo ldki kabhi water park nahi gyi.. sedha profeional acadmy ke pool main.. koi toh baat hogi.. or jb main baki ldkion ko train krne jta tha tumahri ye beautiful si smile kab=hin gum hojati thi or tum apne in eyes ko or bda krke un ldion ko aise ghurti thi mno kha jao gi unhe...
or vo tumhara chotu mera shak ko or confirm krdia usne.. "coach meri bua she has gone crazy.. bath tub main swimming..." fir maine tumhe usdin tumhari bhabhi se baat krte suna.. n I was 100% sure kit um swimming sirf mere lie ati ho.. u also fel the same for me jaisa main humare lie fell krta hn...
ridhima was listening to armaan carefully.. wen armaan said last line.. there came a difernt shine in her eyes...
ridhima : armaan ye tum..??
armaan : sach kehraha hn ridhima ek dm sach.. jb tumhe pehli bar delkha tha bas dekhta hi rehgya tha... apne 5sal ke carer main pehli bar I was attracted to some one.. or kb ye attraction pyaar main bdal gyi mujhe pta hi nahi chala...

I live u ridhima.. I really love u..

ridhima was on cloud 7.. from past * months she was waiting for this day..

ridhima : tumhe kisne kahan ki I love u aisa kuvh nahi hai.. or tum mera picha kr rahe the.. very bad..
arman : oh aisa kyat oh toh tum mujhe baki ldion ke sath dekh ke jealosus kyu hoti thi.. or jb bhi main tumhe touch krta hn tum ghabra kyu jti ho..
ridhima : aisa kuch naho hai..
armaan :acha toh mis gupta ko jhot bolna bhi ata hai.. pr miss gupta maine abhi tum se kahan tumhara apne dil pr bilkul control nahi hai.. dhayan se suno tumhari eke k dhankan uchal uchal ke keh rahi hai i love u armaan..

ridhima hit armaan on his chest n huged him tightly..
ridhima : tum bahut bure ho armaan.. tum jn bhujke mujhe tng krte the na..
armaan : sory jaan.. bt I promise aj ke bad main apni jaan ko kabhi tng nahi krunga... I love u a lot..
ridhima : I love u too armaan...

after about 10 mins they came out of the hug..
armaan : chalo bahar chalen thang ho rahi hai kahin fir meri jaan ko fever hogya jda der pano main rehne se fir..

ridhima did not move an inch..
armaan : bhara nahi chalan..
ridhima : jna hai pr tum mujhe bahar leke jao ge.. tum leke aio ho ho na mujhe yaha itni deep main..
armaan : as wish my high ness

Armaan puled ridhima towards himself.. ridhima wraped her legs around armaan waist n her arms around his neck...

armaan started to swim towards the corner slowly nt to scare her.. bt ridhima was in her mood.. she started to tickle armaan by nuzzling her nose on crock of his neck...
armaan stoped swimming wen he was sure that they reached shwlow end now ridhima could balance her self..

armaan : abhi madan ko dr lg raha tha or ab masti suj rahi hai..
ridhima loked at armaan with inconet face..
ridhima : maine kya kia.. maine toh chup chap tumhe pkda hua hai n waiting to reach out..
armaan : acha bachu abhi btata hn tumhe...
n strted to tickle ridhima..
ridhima: (unable to stop her laughter..) soory soory.. bas armaan plz chodo.. ahh... ( hahaha..)
armaan : dubara lo gi pnge..
ridhima : nonded her haed in positive n strated to splash water on armaan's face
armaan puled ridhima with towards himself n crashed his lips on hers...!!!

####

after 1 month AR got engaged n within a period of 6 mnths they got married . armaan did nt want to delay it bt he had to take his team for swing compition that he couldnot neglect...
ridhima's family was very happy with her choise as armaan was a nice man,.. sply rohan her chotu her bodyguard he was on cloud nine.. now his inspitarion his coach was part of his family..

ridhima was siting in her new room waiting for arm armaan .. half hr had passed bt there was no sign of armaan..
knock knock..
ridhima : istm kon aya or armaan knock kyu krnege ge..
as she opend the door there was no one out a packet was lying on the door step..

"jaan im waiting for u.. come soon...-armaan :-* "

ridhima opened the packet it had the same royal blue swim suit that armaan gave her on the day the confesed theior felings...

###
near pool
armaan was waiting to for his jaan.. after 15 mis ridhima came out wearing that suit.. her hairs were left open...
armaan was once again lost in beauty of his wife... some times he questioned himself y he never get tired of adimiring his wife.. he forget the entire world wen she comes infront of him nt always physicaly even in his thoughts...
###

armaan picked ridhima in his arms took her to the diving platform.. this time ridhima was nt even 0.001% scared as she kne she was with armaan for whom she was his world n arman would nt let any thing happen to her...

armaan : ready..
ridhima: tumhare sath kahin bhi jne ko im 24*7 ready... I trust u more than my self..
armaan : n I love u more than anyting thing..

3

2

1

N jump..
armaan n ridhima were n pool n made love to each other for the first time in pool...!!!


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Its just end of my OS.. nt AR jurney lie k new begning...
hope maine apko jda nah pkaya..!!!


it is a small thanku gift for all of u guys.. ap sabhi ne mera itn sath dia.. mujhe firse armaan n ridhima se milvaya..

mujhe pta hi nahi wen this jurney complted ine year.. jb maine 1st time progloe post kia tha if n blog pr.. i was very nervous koi pdhega bhi ya nahi.. koi mere work ko notice bhi krega.. pr ap sabhi ne mera itna sath dia n suport kia mujhe.. mujhe motivate toh kia hi to write n sath main mujhe itne ache frnds bhi mile..
love u guys alot...
🤗 ❤️


Edited by little_angle - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
yooo i m the first
reesss!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
unresss i diks yoo dekh aa i told u maine unress kar diya ok
yaar i missed u sooo much my rock star muahhh finally ur back i m on cloud 9
ok now yeh sab batein baad mein now coming to the one shot its really amazing ur back in a rock star style with a dhamaka *bang*
u loved the starting loved how u describes the school i mean academy every single details a view of the scene nd armaan ki entry yaar its wow so different nd perfect
loves his entry yaar sooo cool
loved armaan character too his same cool hot sexy adorable nd loveable
loved his bond with rohan
loved how u u shown ridhz as a secret admirer of armaan
loved how she follows no i mean her eyes follow him everywhere smile seeing him adore him nd frowns when sees him flirting with girls
loved how she admire everything abt him
so the girl i means ridhz is rohans bua loved how cutely she talk to herself in ni8
then in morning loved how everyone Pampers ridhz soo much specially rahul nd ridhz pamper rohan
so ridhz is scared of water nd then loved how rahul is si scared for ridhz nd even protective .
loved how armaan mesmerized seeing ridhz
loved rohan he is so cute ridhz bodyguard loved how he support her boost her morale all the time
loved ar first intro or can say interaction with each other how ridhz is scared nd armaan always help her ir calm her down nd how describes her the basic very calmly nd teaches her
lol loved the scene when rohan came alone nd when armaan asked abt ridhz the way he describes ridhz craziness its funny
loved hiw armaan is tense nd worried after knowing abt ridhz fever nd is getting restless to meet her
loved muskaan nd ridhz bonding nd their talk in the cafe how muskaan get to know abt ridhz feeling
ar first date nd kiss is in the pool they confess their feeling abt each other on the pool infact their first n8 is also on the pool
loved their moments its so magical
so armaan knows everything from the starting he knows she is attracted or can say love him nd he also heard muskaan nd her talk in the cafe
that's a overwhelming surprise
a Happy ending its a beautiful fantastic os loved reading it
aahh actually u know wat its the best os of urs till now all other is also good its the best
this os u write like a professional writer ur improving
its the perfect os the perfect title perfect storyline perfectly written
okay now i m sleepy
gotta go
bye take care love u
all the best for the exam cya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Hiyyaaa Diks...
Wohoo, another awesome and unique OS by you...
I enjoyyy so muchhh...
Pata hai, mujhe itna accha laga... I was thinking maine pehle read kyun nhi ki ehehehe...
Ab tumhe toh pata haina main aajkal kitni busy hoon...
Aur I was so damn busy writing TS last part hehee...
Chalo at least maine padli na...
Ab OS ke baare mein tohda baate hojae...

Starting was super awesome... Wow Swimming Academy...
Something really unique...
Even I love to be in Pool hehehe...
Jab main Malaysia mein ti, six years before, tab maine first time pool mein gayi hehehe...
Uske baad jab family ke saat Lanka gayi, tab every day we used to go pool as jaha hum reh rahiti waha pool ta...
and we was the only people in there at the moment...

Is boy koh dekh ke toh pakka yakeen hai yeh Armaan hi hai...
Hayye, usko dekh ke toh koi bhi behosh hojaenge hehhe...
OMG, Armaan is a coach in that academy... Cool...
One of the best Coach ... Wow...
I just love Armaan bonding with kids...

Yeh Koan hai jo Armaan koh follow kar rahi hai aur admire kar rahi hai...
Heroine in hi hogi hehehe...
Ahaa, jealous bhi ho rahi hai Armaan koh dusri ladkiyon koh dekh ke...
Dekhte hai saamne kab aate hai...

A week past... Alreadyyy???
Ahaan, yeh ladki sirf Armaan ke liyeh aa rahi hai yaha...
Shamelessly she is checking Armaan, phir toh pakka Riddhima hi hogi...
Ayye Hayye, unknowingly, Armaan is making her go crazyyy...

Hahaha, omg...
The way Riddhima scream hahaha...
I can imagine her expression...
Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga Armaan ne usko aise staring karte pakadliya...
But yaha toh Rohan hai...
Bua??? Yeh Riddhima ke nephew hai??
Yeh kaise hogaya... hmm aage padna hoga na..
Chalo chalo jaldi badte hai ehhehe...

Yeyyy... I was righttt...
Yeh Riddhima hi hai... Hayye bechari ki neend bhi chura liya Armaan ne...
Ab dekhte hai Riddhima kya ne kya socha hai...

Ahaan, finally Gupta's ke introdcution bhi milgayiii...
So Riddhima has a brother and woh Rahul hai who is married to Muskaan and their son is Rohan...
Wohoo, Rahul is ten years elder to Riddhima and businessman like their father where else Muskaan is Pyschiatrist...
Coolll... Gupta's always love Riddhima alot...
Ab only girl hai toh possessive and over protective toh hogi hi hehehe...
When Rahul said bodyguard, main soch rahi ti yeh koan hai...
Aur Riddhima ke bodyguard woh bhi gharpe hehee...
Phir Ridz ne chotu kaha toh I guess its Rohan right...

Hahaha Rahul, bechara shock se coughing shuru...
But Ridz koh swimming karna hai toh problem kya hai...
oooh toh yeh baat hai... Ridz koh paani se dar lagta hai hehhe...
Ab Ridz bhi kya kare... Jisse pyar huva woh toh swimming coach nikla...
Ab uske saat zyada waqt rehna hai toh apne fear se bhi ladna padegi na...
Accha huva Padma ne Ridz koh support kya...

Wohooo... Permission milgayiii...
Ridz ke saat saat Rohan bhi excited hai hehehe...
Dono nikal gayi jaldi jaldi shopping ke liyeh...
Ab yhe dekhna hai Armaan ka kya reaction hoga Ridz koh dekh kar...

Love Armaan and Rahul conversation...
How Rahul blindly trust Armaan will take care of Rohan and Now With Riddhima...
Accha huva Rahul ne pehle bata diya Ridz paani se darti hai ehehe...

Atlasttt... Armaan eyes fall on Riddhima...
Wohooo, Ridz is looking super hot in that swimming suit hehe...
Armaan ka toh hosh udgaya Ridz koh dekh kar...
Jaise Ridz use to check out Armaan, now its Armaan turn to check her out...

Lolz, Ridz is scared to jump but Armaan haina...
Kaise Armaan ne help ki Riddhima koh paani ke andar jaane ke liyeh that too keeping her busy with his charm...
Ayye hayye ek touch se Ridz koh aur zyada paagal kardiya yeh Armaan..
Love the way Armaan make Riddhima relax and follow his instructions...
Hahaha poor Ridz, Armaan ke touch se hamesha sab kuch bhul jaate hai...
Cool Ridz is learning slowly the basic things...

Oh ho, yeh kya...
Riddhima toh bimar hogayi...
OMG, Rohan is right...
Yeh Riddhima toh sacchi mein paagal hai...
Bath tub mein practise hahah... Aur waha sogayi uff...
Sahi hai, pyar mein log paagal hi hojate hai...
Poor Armaan is so worried for Riddhima... hmm lagta hai kuch kuch hone laga hai Armaan koh bhi...

Mujhe laga Riddhima was waiting for someone...
but yaha toh Riddhima Muski ki saat hai jo uski bhabhi hai...
Love Riddhima and Muski conversation...
How Muski get to know about something or someone bothering Riddhima which was making Riddhima do crazy things from last few days...
Awww, Muski loves Riddhima so much...
Itna toh bata diya koi hai Riddhima ke life mein...
Accha huva Ridz ne kaha woh Muski koh bataenge when she get to know whats in Armaan heart for her...

Hayye, yaha Armaan Riddhima koh miss kar raha hai...
Riddhima ke childish and innocent behavior ne Armaan ke dil mein knock karhi diya hehehe...
Yeyyy, Riddhima is back...
But yeh kya, Armaan ne usko tips dekhe chala gaya hawww...
Armaan toh usko miss kar raha ta na... Toh yeh sab kya hai :/ Kuch toh chal raha hoga Armaan ke dhimag mein...
Lolz love to see how Riddhima was jealous seeing Armaan with other girls and they laughing with him...

Arey wah, one and half months hogayi aise...
Wohoo, Ridz got over with her fear being in water...
Ab kyun nehi hogi, Armaan ke pyar ke chakkar mein Riddhima koh paani ke andar jaana hi pada...

Armaan ne bhulaya... waaahhh...
Ab toh pakka kuch kuch hone wala hai hehehe...
Love the fight between Ridz heart and mind...
Lolz, bechari Ridz, tang aakhe kehdiya woh milne jaaenge aur apne dil ke baad bhi bataenge hahaha...
it was so coool, I was laughing so much hehehe...

Wooowww... Armaan gave her such a hottt swimming suit...
Yeh Armaan karne kya wala hai...
Of course Ridz trust him... She knows he wouldn't let anything happen to her...
Ayye hayye, Armaan make Riddhima forget everything by his touch...
Love AR moment...
How Armaan remove the scarf and cap from her hair opening it...
How Riddhima getting lost in Armaan eyes... and Armaan moving hair from her face which disturb his view...
Love the way Armaan ask if she trust him as he wanted to show her his world...
The way Riddhima asked cutely to make sure if nothing would happen and he would take care of her...

And they jumppp... Together...
Here Riddhima was scared and Armaan was admiring her as she had her eyes closed...
Woohhh... Both ended in the water and the way Armaan pull Riddhima out with him, hayye such a loveee...
OMG... Riddhima is crying...
Awww poor Armaan , kitna dar gaya yeh dekh ke...
Hahaha, Riddhima started to hit Armaan...
Uff bechara, kissi ke liyeh bala karne chala aur maar kaa raha hai hehehe...

Armaan have a point there...
Swimming main diving nehi hoga toh maza kaise aayenge...
But even I don't know how to swim hahahah... But I love water ;)
Ooopss, Riddhima ne bata diya woh swimming seekhne nehi aati hahaha...
Hayye the way Armaan ask her to say whats in her heart and Riddhima tell she come to spend time with him...
Hawww, yeh kya... Armaan did this purposely just to make Riddhima confess ...
Waise baat toh sahi kaha Armaan ne...
Jo ladki paani se darte hai but phir bhi swimming seekhne aayi hai...
Aur ajeeb ajeeb harkate karte hai jiski wajahse bimar padte hai...
Armaan koh dusre ladkiyon ke saat dekhte un ladkiyon koh murderous look dete hai toh what else could it be other love hehehe...
What??? Armaan ke shak yakeen mein badla when he heard her telling Muski that day she loves him...

Awww finallyyy, they confess...
It was such a cuteee confession, unique and sweet...
There cute talk was cherry on top...
Love their moment in Pool, then how Riddhima asked him to carry her out as he is the one who bring her in the water...
Yeh Riddhima toh naughty bhi hai hehehe...
When Armaan was swimming back with her on his back, she was getting naughty...
accha hai Armaan ne badla liya tickle karke...
and the kiss hehee, wasn't expecting but good way to punish her , its call sweet punishment ;)

Areyyy wahhh, After a month AR got engage and itni jaldi shaadi bhi hogayi...
Accha huva Gupta's didn't have any objection...
After all Armaan was a nice guy and Rahul also trust him from years...
Sabse zyada toh Rohan koh khushi huva hai ehehe... Kyun nehi after all uske inspiration jo hai Armaan...

Shaadi ke raat Riddhima akele...hayye...Yeh Armaan kaha rehgaya...
Sahi hai Armaan kyun knock karenge...
Arey wah, Armaan is waiting for her... Phirse swimming suit de diya Armaan ne...
Armaan toh different shades ki bas blue swimming suit de rahi hai...
Lagta hai tumne sab kuch blue blue kardi isbaar hehehe...

Armaan ka wait khatam hogaya...
Riddhima aagayi aur like usual Armaan got lost in her beauty...
Ayye hayye, jab dono ek dusre koh dekhte hai toh zari dhuniya koh bhul jaate hai...

Ab Riddhima koh dar kyun lage...Usse toh apne Armaan par pura trust hai woh usko kuch hone nehi denge...
Hayye, love the answer Riddhima gave to Armaan when he asked ready and Armaan answer after her answer to his question...
Wohooo, dono saat saat jump ki... Aur hoga kyun nehi, After all Armaan was carrying his Riddhima...
Ayye Hayye, after that they make loveee and story end but it was new beginning of AR life...

It was such a cuteee OS Diksss...
Love and enjoy every bit of it...
I m sure tujhe meri comment padke pata chalega how much I love it hehehe...
Bore toh nehi huvi na...
Sojana mat okeyyy hehehe...
muwaahhh Love u so muchhh...
Take care...

Wohoo, u complete one year...
many many congratulation Diksss...
Tum itne acche acche stories likhenge toh hum toh apna pura support denge foreverrr...
*hugs tighttt*
Muwahhh Love u lotsss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: palakajenian

unresss i diks yoo dekh aa i told u maine unress kar diya ok
yaar i missed u sooo much my rock star muahhh finally ur back i m on cloud 9
ok now yeh sab batein baad mein now coming to the one shot its really amazing ur back in a rock star style with a dhamaka *bang*
u loved the starting loved how u describes the school i mean academy every single details a view of the scene nd armaan ki entry yaar its wow so different nd perfect
loves his entry yaar sooo cool
loved armaan character too his same cool hot sexy adorable nd loveable
loved his bond with rohan
loved how u u shown ridhz as a secret admirer of armaan
loved how she follows no i mean her eyes follow him everywhere smile seeing him adore him nd frowns when sees him flirting with girls
loved how she admire everything abt him
so the girl i means ridhz is rohans bua loved how cutely she talk to herself in ni8
then in morning loved how everyone Pampers ridhz soo much specially rahul nd ridhz pamper rohan
so ridhz is scared of water nd then loved how rahul is si scared for ridhz nd even protective .
loved how armaan mesmerized seeing ridhz
loved rohan he is so cute ridhz bodyguard loved how he support her boost her morale all the time
loved ar first intro or can say interaction with each other how ridhz is scared nd armaan always help her ir calm her down nd how describes her the basic very calmly nd teaches her
lol loved the scene when rohan came alone nd when armaan asked abt ridhz the way he describes ridhz craziness its funny
loved hiw armaan is tense nd worried after knowing abt ridhz fever nd is getting restless to meet her
loved muskaan nd ridhz bonding nd their talk in the cafe how muskaan get to know abt ridhz feeling
ar first date nd kiss is in the pool they confess their feeling abt each other on the pool infact their first n8 is also on the pool
loved their moments its so magical
so armaan knows everything from the starting he knows she is attracted or can say love him nd he also heard muskaan nd her talk in the cafe
that's a overwhelming surprise
a Happy ending its a beautiful fantastic os loved reading it
aahh actually u know wat its the best os of urs till now all other is also good its the best
this os u write like a professional writer ur improving
its the perfect os the perfect title perfect storyline perfectly written
okay now i m sleepy
gotta go
bye take care love u
all the best for the exam cya





bunnyyy love u giril for inda wada wala coment.. :-**
i mised u guys alot.. pr kya krun ye pprr..
aww thank u soo much bunny.. even freindship main no thank u.. bt still say it.. coz tre ko mera os itna psnd aya..

armaan hot sexy ni hoga fir or kon hoga.. :-P
armaan was nt flirting.. vo baki ldkion ko sikha raha tha...

family wala part maine likhna start kia tb apne ap agya dimag main pehle maine sirf AR scene hi imagine kie hue the..

armaan is superman.. use sb pta tha...


sachi sachii u made my day wuth ur coment...
i was in tnsn regading my exam to aise hi i thought mail chek krti hn thoda tm pas ke lie.. vahan pr notification tha of my os.. so i just opend it n tra coment pdhke i was soo happy n mera adha tnsn hurr hogya,...

profesional writer.. *blush**blush**blush*

love u bunny..
tight hugg..!!!🤗🤗
🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Hiyyaaa Diks...
Wohoo, another awesome and unique OS by you...
I enjoyyy so muchhh...
Pata hai, mujhe itna accha laga... I was thinking maine pehle read kyun nhi ki ehehehe...
Ab tumhe toh pata haina main aajkal kitni busy hoon...
Aur I was so damn busy writing TS last part hehee...
Chalo at least maine padli na...
Ab OS ke baare mein tohda baate hojae...

Starting was super awesome... Wow Swimming Academy...
Something really unique...
Even I love to be in Pool hehehe...
Jab main Malaysia mein ti, six years before, tab maine first time pool mein gayi hehehe...
Uske baad jab family ke saat Lanka gayi, tab every day we used to go pool as jaha hum reh rahiti waha pool ta...
and we was the only people in there at the moment...

Is boy koh dekh ke toh pakka yakeen hai yeh Armaan hi hai...
Hayye, usko dekh ke toh koi bhi behosh hojaenge hehhe...
OMG, Armaan is a coach in that academy... Cool...
One of the best Coach ... Wow...
I just love Armaan bonding with kids...

Yeh Koan hai jo Armaan koh follow kar rahi hai aur admire kar rahi hai...
Heroine in hi hogi hehehe...
Ahaa, jealous bhi ho rahi hai Armaan koh dusri ladkiyon koh dekh ke...
Dekhte hai saamne kab aate hai...

A week past... Alreadyyy???
Ahaan, yeh ladki sirf Armaan ke liyeh aa rahi hai yaha...
Shamelessly she is checking Armaan, phir toh pakka Riddhima hi hogi...
Ayye Hayye, unknowingly, Armaan is making her go crazyyy...

Hahaha, omg...
The way Riddhima scream hahaha...
I can imagine her expression...
Ek minute ke liyeh mujhe laga Armaan ne usko aise staring karte pakadliya...
But yaha toh Rohan hai...
Bua??? Yeh Riddhima ke nephew hai??
Yeh kaise hogaya... hmm aage padna hoga na..
Chalo chalo jaldi badte hai ehhehe...

Yeyyy... I was righttt...
Yeh Riddhima hi hai... Hayye bechari ki neend bhi chura liya Armaan ne...
Ab dekhte hai Riddhima kya ne kya socha hai...

Ahaan, finally Gupta's ke introdcution bhi milgayiii...
So Riddhima has a brother and woh Rahul hai who is married to Muskaan and their son is Rohan...
Wohoo, Rahul is ten years elder to Riddhima and businessman like their father where else Muskaan is Pyschiatrist...
Coolll... Gupta's always love Riddhima alot...
Ab only girl hai toh possessive and over protective toh hogi hi hehehe...
When Rahul said bodyguard, main soch rahi ti yeh koan hai...
Aur Riddhima ke bodyguard woh bhi gharpe hehee...
Phir Ridz ne chotu kaha toh I guess its Rohan right...

Hahaha Rahul, bechara shock se coughing shuru...
But Ridz koh swimming karna hai toh problem kya hai...
oooh toh yeh baat hai... Ridz koh paani se dar lagta hai hehhe...
Ab Ridz bhi kya kare... Jisse pyar huva woh toh swimming coach nikla...
Ab uske saat zyada waqt rehna hai toh apne fear se bhi ladna padegi na...
Accha huva Padma ne Ridz koh support kya...

Wohooo... Permission milgayiii...
Ridz ke saat saat Rohan bhi excited hai hehehe...
Dono nikal gayi jaldi jaldi shopping ke liyeh...
Ab yhe dekhna hai Armaan ka kya reaction hoga Ridz koh dekh kar...

Love Armaan and Rahul conversation...
How Rahul blindly trust Armaan will take care of Rohan and Now With Riddhima...
Accha huva Rahul ne pehle bata diya Ridz paani se darti hai ehehe...

Atlasttt... Armaan eyes fall on Riddhima...
Wohooo, Ridz is looking super hot in that swimming suit hehe...
Armaan ka toh hosh udgaya Ridz koh dekh kar...
Jaise Ridz use to check out Armaan, now its Armaan turn to check her out...

Lolz, Ridz is scared to jump but Armaan haina...
Kaise Armaan ne help ki Riddhima koh paani ke andar jaane ke liyeh that too keeping her busy with his charm...
Ayye hayye ek touch se Ridz koh aur zyada paagal kardiya yeh Armaan..
Love the way Armaan make Riddhima relax and follow his instructions...
Hahaha poor Ridz, Armaan ke touch se hamesha sab kuch bhul jaate hai...
Cool Ridz is learning slowly the basic things...

Oh ho, yeh kya...
Riddhima toh bimar hogayi...
OMG, Rohan is right...
Yeh Riddhima toh sacchi mein paagal hai...
Bath tub mein practise hahah... Aur waha sogayi uff...
Sahi hai, pyar mein log paagal hi hojate hai...
Poor Armaan is so worried for Riddhima... hmm lagta hai kuch kuch hone laga hai Armaan koh bhi...

Mujhe laga Riddhima was waiting for someone...
but yaha toh Riddhima Muski ki saat hai jo uski bhabhi hai...
Love Riddhima and Muski conversation...
How Muski get to know about something or someone bothering Riddhima which was making Riddhima do crazy things from last few days...
Awww, Muski loves Riddhima so much...
Itna toh bata diya koi hai Riddhima ke life mein...
Accha huva Ridz ne kaha woh Muski koh bataenge when she get to know whats in Armaan heart for her...

Hayye, yaha Armaan Riddhima koh miss kar raha hai...
Riddhima ke childish and innocent behavior ne Armaan ke dil mein knock karhi diya hehehe...
Yeyyy, Riddhima is back...
But yeh kya, Armaan ne usko tips dekhe chala gaya hawww...
Armaan toh usko miss kar raha ta na... Toh yeh sab kya hai :/ Kuch toh chal raha hoga Armaan ke dhimag mein...
Lolz love to see how Riddhima was jealous seeing Armaan with other girls and they laughing with him...

Arey wah, one and half months hogayi aise...
Wohoo, Ridz got over with her fear being in water...
Ab kyun nehi hogi, Armaan ke pyar ke chakkar mein Riddhima koh paani ke andar jaana hi pada...

Armaan ne bhulaya... waaahhh...
Ab toh pakka kuch kuch hone wala hai hehehe...
Love the fight between Ridz heart and mind...
Lolz, bechari Ridz, tang aakhe kehdiya woh milne jaaenge aur apne dil ke baad bhi bataenge hahaha...
it was so coool, I was laughing so much hehehe...

Wooowww... Armaan gave her such a hottt swimming suit...
Yeh Armaan karne kya wala hai...
Of course Ridz trust him... She knows he wouldn't let anything happen to her...
Ayye hayye, Armaan make Riddhima forget everything by his touch...
Love AR moment...
How Armaan remove the scarf and cap from her hair opening it...
How Riddhima getting lost in Armaan eyes... and Armaan moving hair from her face which disturb his view...
Love the way Armaan ask if she trust him as he wanted to show her his world...
The way Riddhima asked cutely to make sure if nothing would happen and he would take care of her...

And they jumppp... Together...
Here Riddhima was scared and Armaan was admiring her as she had her eyes closed...
Woohhh... Both ended in the water and the way Armaan pull Riddhima out with him, hayye such a loveee...
OMG... Riddhima is crying...
Awww poor Armaan , kitna dar gaya yeh dekh ke...
Hahaha, Riddhima started to hit Armaan...
Uff bechara, kissi ke liyeh bala karne chala aur maar kaa raha hai hehehe...

Armaan have a point there...
Swimming main diving nehi hoga toh maza kaise aayenge...
But even I don't know how to swim hahahah... But I love water ;)
Ooopss, Riddhima ne bata diya woh swimming seekhne nehi aati hahaha...
Hayye the way Armaan ask her to say whats in her heart and Riddhima tell she come to spend time with him...
Hawww, yeh kya... Armaan did this purposely just to make Riddhima confess ...
Waise baat toh sahi kaha Armaan ne...
Jo ladki paani se darte hai but phir bhi swimming seekhne aayi hai...
Aur ajeeb ajeeb harkate karte hai jiski wajahse bimar padte hai...
Armaan koh dusre ladkiyon ke saat dekhte un ladkiyon koh murderous look dete hai toh what else could it be other love hehehe...
What??? Armaan ke shak yakeen mein badla when he heard her telling Muski that day she loves him...

Awww finallyyy, they confess...
It was such a cuteee confession, unique and sweet...
There cute talk was cherry on top...
Love their moment in Pool, then how Riddhima asked him to carry her out as he is the one who bring her in the water...
Yeh Riddhima toh naughty bhi hai hehehe...
When Armaan was swimming back with her on his back, she was getting naughty...
accha hai Armaan ne badla liya tickle karke...
and the kiss hehee, wasn't expecting but good way to punish her , its call sweet punishment ;)

Areyyy wahhh, After a month AR got engage and itni jaldi shaadi bhi hogayi...
Accha huva Gupta's didn't have any objection...
After all Armaan was a nice guy and Rahul also trust him from years...
Sabse zyada toh Rohan koh khushi huva hai ehehe... Kyun nehi after all uske inspiration jo hai Armaan...

Shaadi ke raat Riddhima akele...hayye...Yeh Armaan kaha rehgaya...
Sahi hai Armaan kyun knock karenge...
Arey wah, Armaan is waiting for her... Phirse swimming suit de diya Armaan ne...
Armaan toh different shades ki bas blue swimming suit de rahi hai...
Lagta hai tumne sab kuch blue blue kardi isbaar hehehe...

Armaan ka wait khatam hogaya...
Riddhima aagayi aur like usual Armaan got lost in her beauty...
Ayye hayye, jab dono ek dusre koh dekhte hai toh zari dhuniya koh bhul jaate hai...

Ab Riddhima koh dar kyun lage...Usse toh apne Armaan par pura trust hai woh usko kuch hone nehi denge...
Hayye, love the answer Riddhima gave to Armaan when he asked ready and Armaan answer after her answer to his question...
Wohooo, dono saat saat jump ki... Aur hoga kyun nehi, After all Armaan was carrying his Riddhima...
Ayye Hayye, after that they make loveee and story end but it was new beginning of AR life...

It was such a cuteee OS Diksss...
Love and enjoy every bit of it...
I m sure tujhe meri comment padke pata chalega how much I love it hehehe...
Bore toh nehi huvi na...
Sojana mat okeyyy hehehe...
muwaahhh Love u so muchhh...
Take care...

Wohoo, u complete one year...
many many congratulation Diksss...
Tum itne acche acche stories likhenge toh hum toh apna pura support denge foreverrr...
*hugs tighttt*
Muwahhh Love u lotsss...



didu im on clould 9 reading ur coment...
koi na der aye darust aye..
i know ap ajkl kafi busy hoo..

me too i love being in water.. bs nahi psnd toh mere hairs ka rough hona with clorine water..
maine 6th standard main swiming clases join ki thi.. jaise mujhe instructer ne sikhaya tha sabse pehle bubliing then float maine apne experiance AR ki journy main dal dia.. :-P


armaa ki entry jb tk dhamaedar na ho mza nahi ata.. :-p

os hai na islie bahut jldi jldi leaps mare.. 😆😆

armaan ko aise chek out krne ka right sirf or sirf ridhima ka hai..

ye shout wala scene maine last min pr dala.. n me too laughed imagining it.,...
ahhh bhuchalll. 😛

ridhima ko pameperd child dikhana tha toh gupta ko extra sweet bna dia dher sa buter khilake..

rahul ko toh heart atack nahi aya bechara ko shock lga bde wala uski sis jise pani nahi psnd tha seda swiming... kya kre pyaar bahut kuch krvata hai..😉😉

ridz ka water main na jump krna maine apne experance dala mujhe toh bahut dr lgta hai divinng se.. n the way rohan ask ridhima to jump same mere choti sis mujhe bolti thi jb hm swiming clases jate the...

pta hai maine bahut socha aisa kya dalun jise ridhima ka crazynes for swiming dikhaun.. finaly idea mila bath tub main sula deti hn..😉😆

muski ke physactrist hone ka kuch toh fayada bnta hai...

heart n mind wali fight alomst har person experiance krta hai apni life main wen mind on -ve n heart +ve.. jaise serials main dikhate hai one angke n other evil...😉😉

armaan har time bazi marlta hai serial main bhi toh he was always the mastermind behind all pranks.. yahi toh armaan ki khasiat hai..

bechari ridhma ne itna saha armaan ke pas rehne li lie apn bigest fear ko over come kia toh armaan ki thodi si pitai toh bnti hai..

i did nt want ki itna over sweet family end main AR ki life main vilon bne toh maine ftak se shadi krvadi...

ek toh blue mera fav clr upar se title toh sab kuch blue blue hona chahie na...
aj blue hai pani pani pani

(thank) LOVE u soo much diii..
is thank u se gusa nahi hona...
na me bilkul bore nahi hua coment pdhke infact i enjoyed reading itt..!!!!
me itna sara wala happy apko ye os itna acha lgaa...

yup yup one yr kb nikla pta hi nahi chala mujhe..

tight wala huggyyy...🤗🤗🤗
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