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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TAVAM

Nice update dear. Get madhu soon! !!



Thank you 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: PRATHA1

<font color="#0000FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Nice update Meghna! I hope RK will find out madhu soon!
waiting for the next update!</font>



Thank you Swati
He will 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Angel-Juri_

awesome update Meghna...
hope RK find Madhu soon..



Thanks juri
He will 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya4life


And then those bracelets can lead to a house of candy owned by Sullu Ullu Ullu 🤣
Then he will try to make her and Champ fat... 😆 then RK won't be able to carry them 🤣
I did laugh...a lot...that kid will be a legend...so be it 😆
I just got promoted to super insane because I make fun of my own stories 😃
Less than two years...college...hmmm 😆 that's all I can say
I'm vegetarian btw...so I couldn't eat you even if I wanted to 🤣
I'm not a cannibal 😆

Naw, poor RK he would have to get a wheelbarrow to transport them. Or lure them with candy. 🤣 But I am afraid if he holds the candy infront of him making them run for it, he will loose his hand in the process. They will Think it's a part of the candy. 🤣 I feel sorry for him now. 😆 Our poor RK.
Hopefully that kid won't go around saying I am Legend.🤣 You understand that reference don't you? Or he would go around saying it's legend...wait for it ...ary. Legendary.🤣 I promise you that kid is so going to be an arrogant douchbag no matter how much I bless him with good wishes.🤣
Wait, you just got promoted now?😲
Congratz Chotu.😆 I thought you were promoted a long time back.😆 But that was my mistake.😆
Less then two years. Hmm... That's when I am finished with my studies.😆
So that only leaves Champ to eat me. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm Meghana n for this interesting update 😃 waiting for nexttt one 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mydrashti

Thanks for the pm Meghana n for this interesting update😃waiting for nexttt one😛



Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


Chapter 6
(Madhu's POV)

I was put into a dark, cramped area. It was hazy all around. Champ was nowhere to be found either. I was put on my knees, hands tied behind my back and my mouth gagged with a rag. My legs were bound tightly together. It was pin drop silent. I looked around to find someone, anyone.

No one.

I tried to move around on my knees, but my legs were bound so tightly that I risked falling face first on the dirty floor. Then I heard footsteps. Slow, but loud footsteps. Like they were coming straight to me. Menacing. I looked up to see my kidnapper. Those green eyes sparked recognition. Sultan.

"Back again I see?" He kneeled down to my level. I tried to free myself. He laughed.

"Try all you want, Madhubala...but you won't be able to escape from here." He pulled my gag off. I breathed heavily and spoke.

"You are so disgusting Sultan? What had those innocents done to you?!"

He grabbed my hair and tugged it hard. He glared at me, a deep murderous glare.

"I want revenge! They took my family away from me, and they destroyed my life!" He hissed. He threw me back against the barrels lying behind me. "And you will get me that revenge." He said, as he walked away, slamming the rusty door shut. It became darker. The lonely darkness was far too creepy, especially in an unknown area. I needed to get out of here, or else I was lose my mind.

(RK's POV)

My first priority was finding the rat that gave away our arrival. Once I found him, I could get to Sultan. It had to be someone from our group, because no one else knew of our position. My suspicion was mostly on Viren. I specifically told him to stay with Madhu at all times, but he let her go another direction. Without informing me of it sooner. He even went to make a discreet phone call before we left for this house. But it wasn't enough to prove him the culprit. I needed to catch him red handed.

I told Mukund to gather everyone, to discuss a plan I thought of. We huddled together. The area was steamy from the doused flames.

"Those men left clues of their identity. With that, we can track them down..." I explained the details of this plan. Then once everyone disbanded, I waited for Viren to make a move. Some effect showed when Viren sneaked outside. I saw him out of the corner of my eye. I followed him.

He walked cautiously to the back of the building. I peered around the corner as I waited for his next action. He looked around frantically and punched in a number into his phone. He tapped his foot while he waited for someone to answer.

"Hello?...RK has found a way to get to your men. Get them out quickly, else he'll find Madhu and our whole plan will fail."

My suspicion was right. He was the traitor. Luckily the plan I told everyone was fake. I went back to the others and gathered them.

"When Viren comes in, surround him and hold him at gunpoint."

"RK! What is this?" Mukund asked.

"He's in cahoots with Sultan." Was all I was able to say. Viren came back, and everyone pulled out their guns and surrounded him.

"Uhhh...W..What's going on?" He said, trying to act innocent.

"Stop pretending and tell me where Sultan is." I said. He froze.

"What are you talking about RK? I don't have any knowledge or information on his location." Sweat beaded on his forehead.

"How about you listen to this..." I pulled out my phone and played a recording of his conversation with Sultan. Everyone gasped in disbelief.

"Anything you want to say now Viren?" He stayed silent, and chose to glare at me. "Now tell me where he is!" I yelled, slowly advancing towards him.

"No."

"Tell me or else I'll beat it out of you!" I roared.

"Do what ever you want...but I won't say." He pulled out his gun and aimed it at me.

"Oh really? We'll see about that."

Luckily, I had Mukund stationed outside. I signaled him through the window. He stood at the doorway, and shot the gun at the back wall. Before Viren could retaliate, I shot him once in each leg. He fell to the forums on his knees, grasping his legs to stop the bleeding and pain.

"Go take him to the van and lock him in there, and keep a close watch. And give him some first aid. I don't want him bleeding all over the van." I tossed the keys to one agent. He left with the other two, while dragging Viren along with them.

"I'll get something out of you Viren." I said.

(Madhu's POV)

I found a knife buried by a barrel that was behind me. And thankfully it looked sharp enough to cut me out of these ropes. The only challenge was to actually get the knife from under there. I scooted back slowly on my knees, to avoid getting noticed by the men watching over me. The slightest sound could send them over here in seconds. My fingers just grazed the knife when suddenly the door slid open.

"Boss needs you two. I'll take over." He said. The two nodded and moved into the other room. The new man looked at me and laughed.

"You poor thing. Don't worry, your misery will end very soon. And our mission will be complete." He snickered.

He reclined on this dusty chair near the door. I finally managed to grasp the knife with my fingers, while making sure he wasn't looking. I moved it against the rope as hard and fast as I could. The rope loosened as I got deeper into my bondages. Soon they were off, but my wrists were cut. I quickly untied my gag and my legs. I felt very weak from crying and not eating anything for hours. I kept watch on the man and slowly inched away from my spot. I tried to look for another way out, but in vain. My only means of escape were that door. And he was guarding it like a hawk. I needed a weapon. Any kind of weapon. I just needed to knock him out and quietly escape.

(RK's POV)

I sat Viren down in the interrogation room and bound him to the seat with some handcuffs. He glared at me, his nostrils flaring. I took a seat in front of him. With a gun in my hand.

"It's simple Viren. Just tell me where Sultan is...and now one gets hurt."

"I will never tell you."

"Really?" I took my gun and poised it at his thigh. "Do you want another bullet in you?" My finger was on the trigger.

"Do whatever you want RK. I won't say anything."

I thought of another method. I took out a box of tranquilizers from below the table and administered one to him, despite all his struggling. He was out cold.

"RK! What did you just do?!" Mukund asked. I unlocked Viren's restraints.

"Just wait and watch Mukund. A dog always retuned to his owner."

I unlocked the door and took Mukund and the team with me. I told them to get in another van in about 2 hours. I had parked in such a place that Viren wouldn't see it. If he wasn't going to tell me, he would lead me there himself.

"I'm going to foil all your plans Sultan, and get Madhu out of there." I vowed.

(Madhu's POV)

After much quiet searching, I found a metal rod lying against the side wall. But how was I going to get it without him noticing. I needed something else. I heard the door slide open.

"Is the bomb ready?" The man asked.

"Almost. Once it is we will move forward with our plan. That girl will be beneficial to us."

I listened to more, but soon it became inaudible. They started to whisper things to each other. What plan were they going to execute? And why did they need me for it?

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Next Mass Update- Nov. 23rd 2014
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Posted: 10 years ago
Meghana 🤗
Hw r u doing?
Now coming to the update.both rk n madhu povs were written brilliantly.rk caught viren n nw he will lead them to sultan,madgu is also trying to free herself.thanx fr pm.
Edited by vmpy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay I am offically declaring myself as a busy and a tired moron.🤣
You made me laugh Chotu as always and made me Think at the end on what they were planning. But I am tired nor have the time to write my predicitions. And I Think there might be some loss of words along the way. 😆 Both here and the other comment. Am lazy to read through it, so you have to guess what meant. By the way I'm a little mad.😆 You teased us about a new story and I expected it to be up along with your other massupdates but nothing.🤣 Well, well, hopefully next time it will be posted. By the way so I won't forget, for the next mass update there will probably be short wala comments.😆 And I found my countries to write a paper about.🤣 Marilyn Monroe sang diamonds is a girl's best friend.🤣 Wonder if that should be out title.😆 I am so suggesting it tomorrow.😆
Okay over to the update.
Awesome and funny update.
Of course Champ. What else could a dog lover first thought be if not for her precious dog. I wonder when Rishbala will fall in love. Going with the pace of the story that will never happen. Only with their dogs. 🤣 Madhu is afraid of the Dirty floor. 😆 She isn't worried about she is kidnapped that much, but about the Dirty floor. Like she could possible get more Dirty than what she already is.🤣 They shifted her from one Place to Another. So it is bound to happen that she gets Dirty. And some Dirty floor won't make her any less Dirty.😆 By the way one Little question that popped up in my mind.😆 Isn't she needy?😆 I am mean doesn't she need to use the bathroom? It's been like one long day, and not even once has she gone.😆 Maybe she Went right Before she found that bomb, but you would have written that. And that something something would have notice it as well.🤣
Sultan wants revenge because something happened with his family?😲 Hmm interesting. Different scenarios but don't have the time to write them down. Sorry.
Rat? ROFL The snitching rat.ROFL Godfather triology here we come.ROFL
Of course it was Viren. It couldn't be anyone else. 😆 Morons, they got surprised. Huh. With whom does RK work with? They can't obviously connect the dots. I feel bad for RK. He work with some incompetent people and at the other side, we have Madhu who gives her all attention to those dogs. 😆 Why Chotu? Why? ROFL Please write in some intelligence in some characters besides RK. Okay I admit Madhu has some intelligence but it gets overtrown with her love for the K9 species.😆 And of course her having the heroine complex like RK has with his hero complex.😆
By the way Chotu where exactly did Viren get shot in his legs? Not kneecaps right? Because he would have trouble walking back to Sultan. ROFL By the way, I like how RK's thinking process about Viren would lead them back to Sultan. But he has to make it hard on him. It can't just be he Went straight there, he would know there would be a reason why the door was left unlocked and no one around. Let them lose their trail on him, when they are shadowing him. And then pick it up, thanks to that GPS tracker that every governmental vechile has. Just a suggestion.😆 Yes, I know too much.ROFL And how do I know this.ROFL Too many Movies, shows and documenteries. 😆 Question answered.😆
Okay bleeding all over the van. Great Point. Dark.😆 I would have guessed that he wants him alive, ergo not bleeding out so he can get out some information from him. But like the first option better.😳 Returning to his owner. 😆 Doggy lover. 😆 I see. He isn't as free as Madhu, so only uses those doggy refrences.😆
How can Madhu find a buried knife. And that to behind a barrel? Is she psychic?😲😆 Never mind, she found one and wasn't as apprehensive using it like when she saw that Dirty floor. I think she would like some cleaning utesils like a mop or something so she could scrub the floor Clean.😆 Or those goons faces.ROFL
So she became hungry but not needy for a toilet.ROFL You know she could go the doggy way if she was thirsty.ROFL Of course before she uses the toilet for something else.ROFL
Awesome and hilarious update Chotu.
Forgive me if I sounded a bit harsh or something like that somewhere.😆
And I told you for next time, short wala comments.😆
Thanks for the update and for the PM.
By the way. I cam second.😆 Yay, hurray Nina.ROFL
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update.
so it is Viren as expected. HopwRK's plan works.
Madhu's efforts of escape well described.
Read the update before getting pm but you wil send anyways.
Thanks.

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