Hamaari Prem Kahaaani......#6 Season 1 (complete) - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi;

Nice one

Really a proffessional way to handle the situation

nicely written

Expecting Paris POV for the next update as it is not given

Keep writing

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely.
Maan n Dev did everything so quickly.

Pari is saved.
But vikram is yet to be tackled.

I don't like detail Dev naintara part. Waiting for more of maaneet.


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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update, waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 67 - lovely part...marte marte aakhir me ayesha ne achcha kaam kiya...jo maan & uske dad ko vikram ke baar bata diya...and maan palnned very well to save pari..so new bod creating bet maan & dev...yes dev-nt ko bhi mila do aur vicky-pari ki shadi bhi karva do...cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 66 & 67

lovely updates
cute maaneet scenes in hospitals
geet scared how she would manage everything and maan assuring her 😊
maan trying his best to save pari
waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ayesha did THAT!!! I never ever suspect she would risk her life like that... It was like my goodness!!! She is a true grey character... Sometimes evil and sometimes angel... Although more evil then angel.. But it is present in there...
And dev .. Same body but different man... He is totally a new man... And its too difficult for him to face all especially geet... After what all happened... Too awkward nahi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear I reading regularly and commenting but I do no how I missed thread 6 after see it have read it all at once pls send me PM dear I really don't no how I missed it pls dear send me PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GeetMeet

Nice update dear I reading regularly and commenting but I do no how I missed thread 6 after see it have read it all at once pls send me PM dear I really don't no how I missed it pls dear send me PM



Added u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ifamanika

Waiting.. pls update soon



Writing will try n update as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago





Teaser



A sudden fear gripped my heart!



I made a dash to my room praying that Geet is fine as in all this chaos I hadn't been able to meet her since last night.I tried to turn the knob of my door only to find it locked. It was quite strange as Geet never locks the door, even while changing she prefers to change in the washroom or our dressing area. Losing all my patience I called out to her, hoping she hasn't dozed off.


"Geet...Geet please darwaza kholo!"


To my surprise the door opened immediately and I was braced with the sight of our dimly lit room but Geet was nowhere to be seen. I was trying to look around in the faint light when a pair of warm soft hands snaked around my waist and my innocent seductress plastered herself to my back. Her gentle, innocent touch caught up my breath!


Before I could calm myself her fingers started roving over my chest and slowly unbuttoning my shirt making me all the more nervous and scared!


Now what is she upto?


"Geet...tum yeh kya..."


"Sshhh..." She put her finger on my lip turning me around.


"Aap ke liye ek surprise hain!" She stepped close to me and whispered in my ears throwing away my shirt.


"Apni aankhen bandh kariye aur mere saath chaliye." She stated placing her palm over my eyes and all I could think was...


'Her surprises are dangerous!!!!'


Her one hand over my eyes and another holding my hand as we walked ahead. From the direction I could make out we were walking towards the washroom but the moment she opened the door and we stepped on the cold tiled floor a sudden strong smell hit me followed by a clutch of sneezes!


"Maan kya ho raha hain aap ko?" Bewildered by my continuous sneezes she inquired.


"Aap theek toh hain na.."


"Achoo...Geet... Achoo...yeh smell...Achoo...?" I somehow managed to query amidst my sneezes.


"Maan...aap ko pasand nahi aaya...maine yeh sab aap ko surprise dene ke liye kiya tha." She asked me expectantly only then did I look around and realized she had decorated the whole washroom, bath tub with red-white roses and candles.


"Nahi...bahot accha hain...lekin yeh smell..." I tried to ease her up a bit cos if her mood swings trigger off I've had it!



And my attempt did work and she held my arm resting her head on my shoulder she excitedly started enlightening me about her plan.



"Woh kya hain na Maan kal raat se aap bahar hain... bilkul nahi soye... itna sab kuch ho gaya... aap ko kitni tension hui hogi...aap kitne thak gaye honge na." She stated and looked up at me and then continued tapping her finger on her chin as if in some deep thoughts.


"Toh maine socha ke mujhe khud aap ko ek aroma treatment dena chahiye!"


"Kya??????"


Now I was getting scared!


"Haan!!!! Dekha aap ko bhi mera idea accha laga...hain na!" Her face lit up with joy and excitedly showing me around she added.


"Dekhiye yeh aroma candles, aroma oils aap ke tense muscles aur aap ki tired senses ko rejuvenate kar denge. Aap relax ho jaayenge aur aap ko ek dum peaceful sleep aayegi."



"Iske packing pe bhi likha hain aur scheme bhi hain ke,' if not satisfied then we will get our money back'! Issiliye maine aap ke liye specially order kiye hain" She declared proudly showing me one of the packets.


"ITNE..."


"Haan...kyun kam hain kya?" She queried clearly misunderstanding my reaction.


"Nahi..."


Taking a deep breath I calmed myself and slowly inquired.


"Geet ek baat batao iss treatment ke bare mein tumhe kisne bataya?"


"Woh Annie, Meera aur Pari aaj kale ek naye Spa mein jaate hain na, wahan yeh ready packs bhi dete hain jo hum ghar par use kar sakte hain." She innocently disclosed to me.


Yeh Annie pata nahi kis janam ka badla le rahi hain mujhse, Iska kuch na kuch karna hi hoga warna yeh mujhe Geet ke haathon hi shahid karwa degi!'


Before I could think of some good excuse to avoid this torture Geet ordered.


"Chaliye chaliye ab bahot time waste ho gaya hain, jaldi jaldi apne kapde utariye aaj main khud aap ko massage denewali hoon." For the first time I sincerely wished if I could just run out of this room.


The doctor had still not given us permission to get intimate, her innocent gestures and touches are enough to arouse me. How am I to control myself now. My traitor body is already on fire with the very thought of her dressed in this scanty knee length net nightie and giving me a body massage.


'My innocent seductress has no idea what I have to go through each day to keep myself away from her and here her innovative surprises are truly injurious to my health!'



Hope u all like this teaser
Update coming up soon!
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I'm truly very sorry for all the delay
Its been quite sometime I have updated but with my new job its really getting hectic and I can't login much from office


Will try and give shorter but quicker updates henceforth


Need all ur support
Love u'll and miss u'll too!
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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago

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