RagNa FF : A Forbidden Love Story (New Banner on Page 46) 5 May

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Hi friends.. Tis is me.. Veeranu, ur very own Deepika.. Well, lately I've been pondering over some ideas about writing a Dark FF.. Well, not exactly dark but in a way, yes.. Ad KI did hit the right spot.. I've got this rather wonderful idea and decided to put it into action..

And since u guys have given wonderful responses to all my previous works, I thought why not another one... I've never written dark FF or something on those lines.. So I thought, why not try my hand in it... I hope I get ur support in this journey...

THE CHARACTER SKETCH WILL NOT BE UPDATED.. LET IT BE A SURPRISE AND I'LL LET U GUYS WAIT UNTIL THE FIRST CHAPTER HAS BEEN UPDATED..


So I hope u guys will be with me through out this wonderful journey of mine 😳

INDEX..

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

NEW BANNER

PART 9

PART 10

PART 11

PART 12

PART 13

NEW BANNER 2

PART 14

PART 15

PART 16

NEW BANNER

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Of course dear waiting for your update 😛
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Hmmm yu have something real awesome for us!!! No sketch!! ;)
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A lonely human being who is deprived of love.. A love she hasn't got since childhood.. She waits for someone who would just whisk her away from the Hell Of Misery she is living and take her in his arms.. Her Prince.. A man who who would carry her away from the hands of misery and place her in then hands of the Goddess of Love.. And then he came...


This is just a simple jist.. Thought of updating so that I dnt forget it 😆
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This story is told mainly from Kalpi's POV

PART 1-
I walked through the streets of Dehradun in a hurry as to not to get late for my first day at my new workplace. I happen to get a job as a waitress in a five-star hotel at the party area. I was excited since I would be away from home. I looked at my old, tattered watch which said 8.00. Oh Heck.. I had to be there by 8.15. I was supposed to be there to know the rules and options of the job. I made a rush through the busy roads and walked as fast as my feet would carry me..
I reached the hotel atlast.. My mouth hung open at the hotel. It was very big and definitely very posh and beautiful. I told that watchman that I was here for the waitress job and he let me in. I walked to the conference room where the meeting was taking place. It was a long way and I lost my way thrice. Atlast I reached the room only to find that the option choice was almost over. Still I went to the hotelier. He took me around the hotel and frankly I was starting to feel tired due to the roaming around the hotel. The hotelier took me to the Bar. I was shocked at this. I asked the hotelier as to what was I doing there.. The hotelier told that it was the only option left. I tried reasoning with him to put me in another department but that man wouldn't budge and told that I may leave if not this.
I thought about the consequences if I go home without getting into the job. My step-mother would probably make my life hell and her sister's daughter would make it worse than ever. I agreed to the job feeling that if I could handle hell at home in the hands of two witches, then I can definitely handle this. The hotelier called out,"Vishal !! Come here." A guy some two years older than me came running to us. The hotelier said,'She is Kalpi.. She is new. Tell her about everything." The hotelier went away and Vishal introduced himself,"Hi.. I am Vishal Rathod." I introduces myself as Kalpana Jadhav. He asked me to follow him. We both went to a room and he gave me a dress and asked me to change into it.
I looked at the dress.. It was a simple waitress outfit that came until above my knees and exposed little cleavage. Well.. Nothing to loose. I got dressed and followed Vishal. He started explaining about the people,"Mostly parties for business purposes happen here. ANd men may oogle at you but you have to be careful about that." I rolled my eyes.. Wow.. Nice start.. Vishal continued,"Your job is to serve drinks to everyone. Are you allotted to anyone ?" I asked,"What ?" Vishal said,"Nothing. When Mistress comes, she will allott you ?" I asked,"Wht's tis allottment ?" Vishal said,"It means, if any person wishes you to serve him and work for him here, then he'' tell Mistress and she will allott you to him. Now I have to go.. C u later.. Bye."
I looked around and saw people drinking, dancing, some were even trying to hook up with girls.. I sighed.. I thought of my family. Family !!! Heck yeah.. Not much of a family but since I live with them, I call them family. I live with my step-mother Kamla and her sister's daughter, Pakhi. My mother died when I was 5 years old and my father died on a business trip. We weren't a rich family but we weren't poor either. My father remarried and this lady tormented me when my father wasn't around. My father went on a business trip where he died in a road-accident and from then on all I've experienced was HELL.. If my step-mother wasn't enough, she brought in her sister's daughter Pakhi. Her mother died too. I thought that would make us friends given the situation, but she turned out to be evil. She took away everything I had and along with my step-mother started to mock and torment me in every way..
Well.. That's my family.. Nice family, huh !!! I was called by the drink-server and was asked to distribute drinks to people. I found it uncomfortable since a part of my cleavage was shown aldready, bending down to serve made it even more uncomfortable. I could see lusty eyes on my cleavage but I chose to ignore them and went about my work. When my shift got over, I changed back to my comfortable dress and started my walk home..

PART 1 OVER.. HOW IS IT ?? MY FIRST TRY AT THINGS LIKE THESE ?? SO FORGIVE ME IF IT HAS FLAWS.. DO HIT LIKE AND COMMENT 😳
Edited by veeranu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story dear!
Continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm lovely wat hell kalpi is living hmm poor her superb do continue n plz update ur other stories plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg I love it. What a wonderful start and poor kalpi. Please update soon. And when t u updating arranged love also?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice and diffrent story, looking fwd to explore more of it😛

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