RagNa FF : A Forbidden Love Story (New Banner on Page 46) 5 May - Page 20

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Update plzzz Deepu Di... Waiting...
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DISCLAIMER : I do not own the characters of the show EK MUTTHI AASMAAN.. I only own the other characters Chahel, Shahanya and the upcoming ones that u will be introduced to 😊




AT THE SINGHANIA MANSION-
Raghav was in his room holding a picture in his hand. He had tears in his eyes. He looked at the picture. It was a picture of a beautiful girl in a green dress. She was smiling in the pic..

Raghav : Why Akruti why ?? Why did u leave me all alone in this world and go away ?? Why are u punishing me like this ?? Was my love not enough for you that you left me ?? Did I not love you enough to keep you happy that you went away leaving me in the darkness ?? Why Akruti why ?? Now I meet that twin of urs who so ponders into my senses making me remember our memories again.. Why do I have to meet her ?? You dnt know Akruti.. She looks so very much like you that I can't help but see you in her..

He wiped his tears away from his face. He looked at Akruti's picture again.

Raghav : I have to keep her away from me.. All she gives me is pain and nothing else.. She is not Akruti.. She can never be Akruti.. She is just like a shadow of Akruti..

He goes into a flashback of a girl getting killed by a group of animals.. His eyes burn up with anger..

Raghav : I will have my revenge on you beasts.. Akruti, I will take revenge on those beasts who killed you.. I dnt care if one of them was ur brother. I will take revenge on those werewolves Akruti.. They will pay for taking you away from me.. Yash Khuraana.. You will pay for you crimes..

Outside the room, Chahel heard what he had been speaking. Chahel had passed the room when he heard Raghav speak. Chahel had the power to look through doors and walls. He could see that Raghav was holding a picture in his hand. And Chahel knew very well that it was Akruti's. Chahel had enough so he went to his room. His wife Shahanya was sitting and reading a magazine. She saw Chahel's sad face..

Shahanya : What happened Chahel ??
Chahel (sitting on the floor near her chair) : Why does it have to be me, Shahanya ?
Shahanya (placing hand on his shoulder) : What's the matter Chahel ??
Chahel : Remember Shahanya.. My past with Maithili ??
Shahanya : I do Chahel.. What does that have to do with this ??
Chahel : I thought that after everything got over, we would lead a normal with our kids but it seems faterall that we really don't have a choice ?
Shahanya : Chahel, tell me what exactly happened ?
Chahel : I can't see my son in pain, Shahanya. He's in his room talking to a picture of Akruti, just like me.. I dnt want him to be like me. I suffered a lot before trying and making friends. I dnt want him to be like this.

At this Chahel's eyes started to water up. Shahanya hugged Chahel to her chest comforting him.

Chahel : Our son doesen't even acknowledge us as his parents. He thinks we are the reason he is away from Akruti.
Shahanya : Chahel.. He is just angry that Akruti wasn't saved. We did not choose to become vampires, Chahel.
Chahel : Yes. But we had no choice. I had to take that potion, else our son would have been dead. As a father, I cnt risk my son's life. I cnt live without my son and daughter, Shahanya.
Shahanya : Chahel, its ok.. Everything will be fine.. Shhh..

The couple sat down in each other's embrace resting in each other's comfort..

THE NEXT DAY

AT THE SECLUDED PLACE-

A man was going through all the pictures on the wall.. It was a spacious room will different kinds of pictures hanging on the wall. He came to the middle of the room where a large picture was hanged. It had two rose vases on either side and was decorated beautifully.. The man's eyes teared up by looking at the picture.. Another person came into the picture.. He looked at the man..

Person : Yash.. Its time to go.
Yash : Uh.. Haan yes.. I'll be there in a moment Kshitij..

Kshitij went away leaving Yash to stare at the photo of the girl..

Yash : Its been 80 years since you left and there isn't one day whn I haven't missed you.. My dear Aaku, today is your special day and you arn't here with us today.. But remember this dear, you will always remain in our hearts. Everyday I miss you wishing you were here with me, your brother. I miss you every second of everyday, my dear little sister.. And mark my words Akruti. I will not leave Raghav Singhania and his family. I will tear them to shreads for leaving you to die. And that Raghav will suffer the same death for leaving to to perish. He will definitely meet his death.

Saying this he went out to join Kshitij. There were other people waiting there too. Yash wiped his tears and went out leaving Kshitij and Pompeii.. Pompeii turned to go after him but was stopped by Kshitij.

Kshitij : Let him go, Pompeii.. He needs time.. Its the DAY today. Let him go.. We'll go later.
Pompeii : As you say, Master.

AT THE SINGHANIA MANSION-
Neetu was sitting on the couch twirling her hair. Chahel and Shahanya had gone out to hunt. Raghav came down.. He was going out.. Neetu knew better than to not disturb him. She knew that it was the DAY today and she didn't stop him. Raghav rushed out of the house and out of the forest. He reached an abandoned graveyard. He pushed open the gates. He passed numerous graves before he reached one. He knelt down infront of it. It was dusty. He gently wiped the dust away. It read

Akruti Neelima Singh Thakkur
Born 22 February 1917
Died 19 July 1935

Raghav looked lovingly at the grave as he wiped it gently with his hands. Tears immediately formed in his eyes and he wiped them away..

Raghav : Happy Birthday Akruti. There hasn't been a day when I haven't thought of you. You are in my thoughts, Day and Night. You are my life and happiness.. My only wish was to have you beside me to celebrate this wonderful birthday of urs.. I am giving you my word Akruti.. I will take my revenge on those werewolves for killing you.. Mark my words..

He bent down and kissed the name Akruti Neelima Singh Thakur. He placed a charm bracelet near the grave. He went into a flashback..

Akruti : Raghav..
Raghav : Haan ??
Akruti : What did you bring me for my birthday ?
Raghav : Wait, let me think..
Akruti (Smiling widely) : Haan ok..
Raghav (after a few moments) : Yes. I've decided..
Akruti : What are you giving me ?? 😃
Raghav : Nothing 😛

Akruti's mouth opened in a round 'O' and she started chasing Raghav with Raghav shouting Akruti to stop it. They both lose balance and fell on the bed with Akruti on top of Raghav.. Raghav wiped away a few strands of hair from her face while Akruti closed her eyes. He holds her hand and she blushes. She felt something slip on to her hand. She opened her eyes and saw a beautiful charm bracelet on her hand..

Raghav : Happy Birthday my love..
Akruti (Hugging him) : OMG Raghav.. This is so very beautiful.. Thankyou very much..
Raghav (Hugging her tightly) : Am glad you like it.
Akruti : Raghav, will u fulfill a wish of mine ?
Raghav : Ofcourse Love.. Anything u ask for..
Akruti : Will you gift me charm bracelets for every birthday of mine ?? I love them
Raghav (laughing at her innocence) : Ofcourse yes Love.. I promise to gift you a charm bracelet for every birthday of urs..

Raghav came back to the present. He smiled gently at the memory and looked at the grave..After stroking it for a few moments, he left the place. After a few moments, Yash entered. He went towards Akruti's grave and stroked it gently. Placing a flower bonquet on the grave, he sat beside it..

Yash : Happy Birthday my dear little sister, Akruti. You were and are the cutest sister anyone could ever have. Wish you were here today. We could have celebrated like olden times when we used to go to the poorest homes and distribute sweets and play games. He went into a flashback..

Yash was taking Akruti somewhere with her eyes blindfolded..

Akruti : Yash Bhai.. Where are you taking me to ?
Yash : Shh. Aaku.. Its a surprise..
Akruti : Hmph.. Theek Hai Bhai.. But I cnt wait..
Yash : U have to dear.. No other go..

He took her to a room where her's and Yash's friends were waiting with happy faces.. Yash unfolded the blindfold from her eyes. As soon as she opened her eyes, everyone shouted HAPPY BIRTHDAY.. Akruti jumped in joy and hugged Yash for such a beautiful surprise. Yash took her to a table filled with all goodies. Akruti smiled at it..

Akruti : Bhai, can I ask you something ?
Yash : Ofcourse Aaku.. Its ur day today..
Akruti : Bhai, you spent a lot for my birthday, but I dnt really need all this..
Yash (confused) : Then what do you want dear ??
Akruti : Bhai.. A day out with you..
Yash : Pagli.. Do you have to ask this ?? U could have just ordered me. I would have come..

Akruti smiled in joy and the both of them went out. On the road, they saw few children sitting on the road hungry. Akruti looked at the children with a sad face and felt sorry for them..

Akruti : Bhai. I have everything whereas these children don't. Dnt they have a home to live ?
Yash : Aaku. They are orphans. They have no family.
Akruti : Then we give them a family.
Yash : What do you mean Aaku ?
Akruti : Bhai.. Since its my birthday, I want you to promise me one thing.
Yash : Go on, Aaku.
Akruti : Bhai. I want to start a home so that I could shelter these children and give them a family and good education.
Yash : You are really a very sweet person, Akruti..
Akruti : The home must go one ever after I die, Bhai.
Yash : Pagli. Y are u talking abt death now ?
Akruti : Bhai, am not like you. I dnt live forever. So please Bhai, promise me that you will take care of the home..
Yash : I promise you Aaku..

The flashback ends and Yash comes back to the present. He stroked the grave and leaves. He reaches a large mansion. On the outside, its written AKRUTI BRINDAVAN.. He goes inside the mansion and is greeted by the caretakers there.. He gives them the provisions and chocolates and confectionaries as it was Akruti's birthday. The caretaker was pleased..

Caretaker : Yash. You are really very nice. Even after her death, you are doing this. She must be really happy..
Yash : Haan Kranti.. I am doing this for Aaku. She wanted this and so this will happen.. Now, I shall take leave Kranti.
Kranti : Yash. I want to tell you something.
Yash : Go no Kranti.
Kranti : Vo one day, early in the morning, I saw a girl in the car..

Kshitij interrupted the conversation. He looked at Kranti and gave a smile..

Kshitij : Yash. We are leaving. Do come..
Yash : Ah yes Kshitij. I'll meet you later Kranti..

Saying this, Yash went away along with Kshitij and Pompeii..

Phew... This chapter was really hard to write.. I recently conducted a poll asking as to which actor did you want to see as a character in my FF.. And since most of votes went to Gurmeet, I've decided to make him a character and here he is.. As the very dashing Yash Khuraana 😎 And I really was missing Abhay-Piya and so included a scene for them 😳 So we see more of Akruti here.. And some more secrets coming up... Raghav's revenge and Yash's vengence.. There's more to the secret than wht meets the eye which will come out in the much later chapters.. This is the longest chapter I've ever written.. I've worked hard on this chapter.. So I definitely want LIKES and COMMENTS.. Am definitely expecting more than 30 and 35 LIKES and some two to three pages full of COMMENTS..
Edited by veeranu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yipee!!! M first ...Suprb update Deepu di... Feeling bad for rags... And coz of yash my raghav.. I m my heros twin is in pain... 😉 ok.. Update nxt chappy soon
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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

Yipee!!! M first ...Suprb update Deepu di... Feeling bad for rags... And coz of yash my raghav.. I m my heros twin is in pain... 😉 ok.. Update nxt chappy soon

Hero's twin ???!!!! 😕 I haven't introduced Raghav's twin yet 😛 I haven't even made any idea on that. I only told that if I ever introduce Raghav's twin, i would make u his pair 😳 I have to make up a character sketch for him and then his entry 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really awesome update poor rag was remembering his akruti he so much in pain his parents also n hash want t take revenge from rag n Vis versa hmm interesting poor rag suffering
Update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update dear
Flashback was nice dear loved it
Rags is so much missing aku
Want to know what had happened to akruti
Update next part soon dear
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Superb update. ..
Raghav is so much in pain. ...He is remember old day with akruti. ...loved FB scene. ...
Yash also miss her sister. ..I think there is misunderstanding in between raghav n Yash. ...
Update soon. ...
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If u can wait 3 weeks then this is a res 😆
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Lovely update. Both Akruti's brother and her love have not forgotten her ! Very touching ! Hope both their wounds will be 'healed' with Kalpi's love and care !
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awsome update
so there is a misunderstanding b/w yash & raghav
did yash know that kalpi look like akruti??
update soon

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