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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko!!! Waah kya update tha yaar!!! Loved it!!! That Radha krishna part was so awesome!!!! Uloopi and Iravan, I mean kaise!! Don't tell me Iravan is Arjun's son!!! I will die!!! Awesome cliff hanger!!!

Thanks Yagya. Happy that you liked it! And the Iravan secret, I will reveal it! Just wait for sometime!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are giving us Awesome pe awesome pe awesome parts!! What are you made up of??
The update was mind-blowing!!

I loved it... I want to read more about Ulupi...

It was awesome!! Poor Radha... I hope she doesn't have to go through the same pain which she went through in her past life...

Thanks for the pm and Please continue soon!

Thanks Ani!😳

@underline - Of cells!😆

I am updating today. And now I can surely promise daily updates.

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Texie
God di sometimes u kill me with ur cliff hanging updates . But that is what makes it more special . Sorry for being late god this school and then dewali . It was a fantastic one and waiting for ur next one do not forget u promised to update everyday

Thanks you very much Sam!😳 I remember I promised daily updates dear!😉

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#604

Hi all check the first page! Updated it! Links to all chapters added and PM list made. Do check it once!😃

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#605

Thanks to the very talented starry.phoenix for such a lovely banner!

Chapter 29 : The Joy Of Celebrating!

"Panchi are the lightings done?" Vrushali asked intently. "I told that to Paarth!" Panchi replied. "Oh great! Now where is Paarth?" Vrushali asked. "I know, he might be doing the light on the terrace!". "Okay, just go and check Panchi ! And while coming down ask Shubhi about the diyas! And then..." Vrushali kept on lining up work. "I guess, it is, then breathe. Right?" Panchi asked jokingly. "Panchi, do you think I am in a mood to tolerate jokes! Go. We have to complete all the decorations today itself!". "Okay okay captain! Clam down! I will catch all the fishes for lunch!" and Panchi made her exit, laughing. "Good Lord!" Vrushali exclaimed.

Panchi came up to the terrace. Looking around in amaze to the beautiful lights that the terrace was decorated with, she smiled on the efforts by her love. "You look quite happy to have us alone!" Paarth called out from behind. Panchi, alerted by his voice, turned to answer. "Alone!". "Yes alone, mam!". Paarth smirked as he took a step forward. "Stay away!" Panchi commanded. "Well mam! Not today!". He slowly embraced her, tightly. "Paarth, leave me!" she requested. "Not that easy mam! Well not until I get what I want!" he said with a smirk. "What do you want?" Panchi asked with fear. She knew that Paarth had a whole lot of things he could asked for. Paarth slowly whisper something in her ear! "What! You want..." . Panchi's eyes popped out. "Give it or stay here!" . He warned her. "I am not giving to that!" she yelled. "Okay then!". he proceeded forward to close the door of the terrace. "Okay! I'll!" she called out. "Now, that's smart!" he said, smirking. "You are a mad man Paarth!" she scolded him. "Yes, I am. mad in love with you!" he replied smartly. Paarth slowly dimmed the lights off and said, I have something in heart, for you !" .

Panchi came down the stairs, blushing. "Panchi! Have you seen Paarth?" Vrushali asked her. "Oh he is on the terrace changing clot... I mean light!". Did you speak changing clothes?" Vasusen asked. "On! I said changing light!" she smiled and took leave. "Vasusen, changing clothes? What stupid question was that?" Vrushali said. "Okay. Wans't she going to speak clothes!" he replied. "Obviously liked they were doing something on the terrace!" she said with frown. "Maybe they were!" he said with a wink. "Shut up, Vasusen!" she shouted. "It Diwali tomorrow! Atleast shut up with your talks today!" she burned with anger. "Right! Like Diwali has some rule that we cannot joke!". "God! You are just... aaagh!" she took leave. "What did I do?" he thought.

Panchi stepped out. She was still blushing in what Paarth asked for. She looked up at the terrace. Paarth winked at her. Giving a try-to-forget expression at him she moved ahead. On moving some steps , she saw Ulupi. Remembering what Paarth said, she ignored her. Until, she saw another man with her. She felt something fishy. Deciding to follow the two, she went to the garage to get the car out. Chasing them with get care, not to get spotted, Panchi ended up in front of a big mansion. "So this is where she live!" Panchi thought when she saw Ulupi entering into the mansion with the man. Taking out something from the car to cover her face Panchi, decided to enter the mansion. The minute she kept her first step into the mansion a sound echo into her ears,"Arya...!".

TBC

Edited by Angela_Grokes - 10 years ago

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#606

Aah, these guys are so desperate!!! Paarth tujhe to mai!!! I know what these guys need to stop...good lashing!!! Awesome update, angela!! Loved it!! But now what is mystery?

@ Navu...Don't be so innocent!!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#607

Wow! I'm so happy you've updated finally!

Awesome, so now what's the mystery?😲

And to save the best for the last, that was something dear!

What did Parth ask of her?😉

Update soon!😳

Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni
Aah, these guys are so desperate!!! Paarth tujhe to mai!!! I know what these guys need to stop...good lashing!!! Awesome update, angela!! Loved it!! But now what is mystery?
@ Navu...Don't be so innocent!!

😆 Yagya full on mode!😉 Now maybe she is really not acting innocent!😲

Anyways thanks!

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Angela Grokes

@Angela_Grokes

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Posted: 10 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Wow! I'm so happy you've updated finally!
Awesome, so now what's the mystery?😲
And to save the best for the last, that was something dear!
What did Parth ask of her?😉
Update soon!😳

Thanks dear...😳

My old get the cliff hanger technique!😆😉

Like you don't know!😆