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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update uma dear!! i loved it!!
very emotional & heart breaking!! feeling sad for madhu!!
hmm...though Rk sensed some differences i still feel him as a dumbo, u know y? madhuri called him RK & that's enough to doubt on her bcos the madhu with whom he talks over phne will always call in RISHU & Mb is a shy girl & she even refused to kiss him over phone or invite him to her place when their parents were out but here madhuri kissed him on lips in open & there was shyness, hesitance but only boldness & mischieve playing in her eyes!! can't these difference is enough for Rk to come to a conclusion??
haha...i know u ll make them wear pink color dress only & even i was ure madhu will wear homely type dress & madhuri some jeans & pink top LOL!!
hmm...last line... she cried till she hears a knock on the door & i think Rk was there to see madhu. then he will say he loves her ony & not madhuri & even madhuri will sacrifies her love for her sister as u said she is good & she is the one will help madhubala if she landss in trouble too!! then Rk & madhubala will get married happily & give birth to mayu & die due to some health issues & madhuri will raise mayu after all mayu is her sisters blood & she too loved Rk!! uff...i'm tired of predicting this confusing story dear!! so i'm stopping here & let u reveal the truth!!
hmm...nice song, apt lyrics but majority wouldn't have understood if u didn't give the translation in english...good!!
thanks for the pm which i didn't recieve yet but i know u ll send!!

happy birthday Neha dear!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update di...felt sad fr madhubala...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome and a heartwrenching update Uma di.

I thought it would be something like that. That RK would assume that he talked to Madhuri and Madhu would see the both of them. I do wonder when he will realise the truth. I won't write much this time, cause I have already given my predictions in the last comment.😆 I am just going to say. Arre RK use your brain a little. You do have one right?😆 If one is the exact opposite on what you have suspected then something must be wrong. Then it must be the Twin. Right. Now I am positive that Maya's mama is Madhuri and not Madhubala. Cause Maya was as bold as her mumma.🤣 I would really like to read the reaction RK would have when he saw his daughter doing the exactly the same thing to a guy like her mother did with him. Kissing him on the lips.🤣
Thanks for the update. And thanks in beforehand for the PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heart breaking update ...poor Madhu
Waiting for d nxt update di..update soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey everyone,

Thanks for liking and commenting on the previous chapter.


Here goes the next chapter,Wil mention Mb for madhubala, as there wil be more madhubala and madhuri scenes together.

Dedicating it to our b'day gal - Azra aka Azrazaidi

Part 7

Madhu was all in tears, but one thing she realized was, madhuri do had some feelings for RK, that was evident from her eyes, she wondered how she missed it in these days, then she realized, she was immersed in her dreamland when RK is before her and she failed to check the reality around her.At first, her pain seemed to be more heavy but later her guilt override it, it was guilt, that hurted her more, she came in between her sister's love and it was not right in anyway, her sister had done a lot for her and now she felt it was her turn. She cried fearing how she wil face her sister, what if she comes to know about the truth that she talked to her love, wil she ever forgive her.Wil she remove her from her life, there were 1000s of questions running in her mind, and her pillows cover was completely wet with her tears, but she never cared, she had loved RK , but nobody knows it, even RK, if he had loved her, then he would have not allowed her sister to kiss him, but she guessed that there was some misunderstanding in between, and she want to clear everything at first, after all it was all for sister happiness, though her mind instructs her to think this way, her heart cried out in pain.Just then she heard continuous knock on the main door.

Madhu composed herself and ran to check the person on the door, she smiled amidst her tears seeing the person on the door, she jumped over him, with her hands encircling his shoulders, and even he seemed to be in tears, she was confused seeing his tears, she came out of the hug and wiped her tears and said "PAPA". He wiped her tears and said "Don't cry baby, everything wil be fine, stop crying na" Madhu's tears stopped immediately with fear that how her father got to know about it, there was no chances for it, so it might be some other thing, so she looked at him and he said"Get ready fast madhu, your mom can't manage there alone for so long, i have even called madhuri,she is on her way, i have booked our tickets, we all are leaving to pune now, your granny wil get well soon,so stop crying and pack ur things that u might need for a week." and he left to his room


After an hour, madhuri came back and she packed everything and she consoled Malik saying nothing wil happen, and she turned towards Madhubala, and said "Madhu, why u left so early, and what happened to ur performance?" Mb found it difficult to face her sister, so she replied looking at the floor " It got cancelled at last minute, so i came back home" . Madhuri found something different with Mb, so she came towards her and hugged her saying "Madhu, what ever may happened, don't think about it, let it be, we can't change anything happened in the past, lets face the outcome together, i wil be there for you at any time and at any situation, just relax" MB immediately hugged her sister and sobbed a little, Malik entered the room and thought the duo were crying for their dadi , he smiled and asked them to get into the car, Madhuri ran into her room and came back with a box, she smiled and said, due to continuous crying,we all may get cold, headache and fever, here i have brought medicine for all, and even i had taken one dose, so i won't get those, she said making sulky faces.

Malik snatched the medicine box from her hand and gave it to Mb to keep it inside,and told "Madhuri, how many times i have told u not to tak medicines like this, we should take only when there is need" for which madhuri replied "Papa, not now, its already late" And they all started to railway station to catch the next train to Pune.

Rk was literally confused, madhu didn't came to meet him, he tried calling her number, but it went unanswered, he called sultan and shouted at him, for not getting back his mobile, which he had given to sultan to give it to service, which was very close to sultan house, and it was going to be 3 days now, and he didn't get back his mobile, sultan replied back that he wil be there at his house within half an hour with his mobile. As said, sultan returned back with the mobile, RK just glared at him and was about to turn back, when Sultan said "I met trishu on the way" RK very well knew about sultan's attraction towards trishna, who is a close friend of madhuri, he sighed away, not in mood to listen anything, but then sultan words made him run near him, sultan said "Madhu, asked her to pass this letter to you" RK readily snatched it from him and read it.

RK,

In a hurry to pune, my dadi is sick and is in hospital, wil return back around the next weekend.
Sorry can't inform you, wil try to call u once i reach there.
But can't promise, as both mom and dad wil be there with me.

By the way you didn't tel how it was (and there was lipmark on the paper)

Take care Love
Madhuri

He grinned reading it and looked at sultan, who was glaring at him for his sudden mood swings, sultan raised his eyebrow and said "Bother to explain?" But RK just gave a pat on his shoulder with a sly grin and said "Thank u sultan" and he went back to his room. Sultan left to his house cursing himself for running for RK's orders.


Precap : RK, the confused soul.


Thats all for this update, time for ur likes and comments.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part... Madhuri and her taking medicines unnecessrily you have mentioned it twice... wonder what is the connection there... her using medicines caused problems or madhu not taking medicines caused her health problems.. my vote is on madhuri i think

Edited to Add:

I might be in the minority who want Madhu to be the dead one... because, even though unknowingly RK did give her hope by talking to her on the phone... and even though, RK thinks her to be Madhuri, he did feel a connection to Madhu, which he did find missing when Madhuri kissed him... So I guess they should be the one getting married😳😆

Edited by book.worm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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3rd place I really need to work hard
Di ur story make me puzzled from the beginning 😕
just like bhool bhulayia 😆
Ok I think RK and madhuri will get married
But same time I think RK is in love with MB😳
Di it's really mysterious⭐️ Fabulous job👏👏👏
I came b4 pm
and thanks foe pm😊


Edited by noiseygirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update!!
so the knock at the door was made by her papa & not my hero Rk LOL!!
haha...MB was crying for her jodi but her papa thinks she as crying for her dadi LOL!!
okay! again the medicine thing comes!! madhuri is taking unwanted pills & i think she will die due to som reason relating to over consumption of drugs may be brain tumor LOL but she will die after marriage & after mayu's birth LOL then madhu will take are of mayu & Rk!!
hmm... precap confused Rk - great!! he deserve to be confused after all we were hell confused & cribbing our head for the past 7 chapters LOL!!
soon i'll turn a chameleon LOL bcos for one one update i'm turning my color (side) from madhuri to madhubala LOL!! now whoever dies i don't care bcos there wont be much difference lol!!
waiting eagerly for next update dear!!
thanks for the pm but resed before it LOL!!
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a superb update Uma di.
Number one of my prediction came through.😆
Sorry for the short comment, have just a Little time.
Thanks for the update and for the PM.
Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update n i think madhuri vl die

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