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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
<font size="4">awesome Tfs for pm👏</font>

thanks chithu dear

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: NehaVdian
woww nice start dii
so is trish or dipsy rks wife
n y he didnt accepted madhu yet
waiting to read more
quite different concept
plss update feel the love

sure neha after completing this ts, wil surely update feel my love. And thanks for liking it

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan
CONGRATULATIONS uma di for new story!!! 🤗
starting from story I thought madhu is dead then madhu came nd I got confused if she is here so why RK sounds so unhappy than finally it revealed that his wife is dead...
now eagerly waiting for nxt part as u said u will update so I m stalking!!!!

thank you so much suru dear, you will get answers for all your question by part 3 and some by part 2..

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL
RK is married to madhu but he doesnt like mayu calling madhuma. The portrait infront of which rk was standing is of mayu's mom.
</div>Is mayu really RK's daughter?Either she is his sister's daughter or his first wife's daughter. omg n he still misses her😡
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Nice story.👏waiting for nex.👍🏼

axww you are thinking beyond my imagination, but i didn't plan to stretch out that much.. Mayu is rk's daughter

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bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Nice n Interesting Start 😊😊

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bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Do update the next part soon 😊😛😳
Eagerly waiting 😳😳

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bhavnajaiswal

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thanks for sharing😊😊

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Sorry guys, i replied to some of ur comments, for others am replying here, running out of time, so sorry for not posting it yesterday. And again i have left u all without solving the mystery, but there was some clue in it, so read carefully.

Momi78 : Yup but he is blind with love

Shinyshreya : Thank u shreyu

Sanghita0000 : Thanks dear

Ronita03 : Girl how many questions, who she is, how she died will be cleared in next part, and these all are not stupid question, if am at ur place, i would ask more

aan-rish : Keep guessing, u will come to know soon

Tavam : Yes, that was my goal, to confuse u all, just kidding ya, wil clear everything soon.

4everlove : Most of them did have that doubt

Shriyakadge : Thats fine shriya, now u r free, so keep on racing with everyone, thank u shriya

AR_RK : Thanks dear

ananya2010 : Thanks dear, wil let u all know soon

drashtimeetu : Yup and No, are answer to ur first question, u will know how throu next chapter.

susan7 : Thanks dear

Deil_kriti : Thanks dear

bhavnajaiswal: Thank u dear, posted below

Thanks to all those who liked and commented on the previous chapy

mayuri103, Ponochka, 1234bar12, anujawreshwal, Insaneniyu, SNCC, Shayarana_rk,

AR_RK, snigdhamazumder, Grishu30, ashitha235, cuterockstar, ARMB, TAVAM,

malar3, bald, shalu1786, Sharoan, crazysakshi_19, shruthi14, _Angel-Juri_, momi78, noiseygirl, karamjeet, aan-rish, flowing_river, Crazy_Arshi, 4ever4love, GOODLUCKANGEL, NehaVdian,

drashtimeetu, madhurish, Abhiya4life, My_VivJaan, Hanishadevi, meenji22, susan7,

SHINYSHREYA, ananya2010, bhavnajaiswal, -ChitraRocking-, rima4ever

Here goes part 2 of the TS.

Everyone was gettting ready for the party, when RK heard a knock on the door and he opened it to find mayu standing there, he opened his arms for her and she ran towards him and hugged him, he caressed her hair and said "So what makes my mayu to come to papa's room, i guess you have a bigger demand this time?" Mayu pulled out from the hug and faked anger and turned to the other side and asked "so i don't have the rights to come and disturb my papa, hun?" RK smiled seeing her daughter, her each and every action, reminded him badly about his biwi, he missed her like a hell, however he tried to come out of the pain, little mayu unknowingly reminded him about his biwi. He came to reality and turned mayu and asked "You know that i can never say that to u, so tel me mayu, what my b'day girl want from her papa" She smiled and took his hands within hers and told " Dad i know, you have did a lot to me, but i want u to do one more thing for me" , and he immediately replied "Anything for u princess?" and she composed herself and with a confidence in her eyes looked straight at him and asked "I want you to move on papa, promise me, you will" RK looked at her confused, she continued "I know how much u love mom, but i have never felt missing her except those times when u look pale and exhausted, and ur teary eyes cause an unknown pain for me, and the time u spent in the room, pointing to the room where she met RK in the morning" she paused, and now both were in tears, "You need some one to be with u, a shoulder to cry, a hand to wipe ur tears papa, i want u to move on, u have lived all alone these years, but i don't want you to live with this loneliness anymore"

RK wiped his tears and he felt happy that his little mayu had grown up to such an extent that she started to care for her papa too, he wiped her tears, held her near him in a loose hug and said " Who said u am alone, U all are with me mayu" She told "I want u to accept madhu ma as ur wife, u should show the same love and care for her, don't she deserve it papa, think , she have given her whole life for me, for us, i want her to be happy now, am getting married in a week time, so i want u to promise me to move on, to accept ur new life, i want u to be happy papa, u had given me all the happiness in the world, and its now my turn, trust me papa, only madhu ma could give u that happiness"

RK left the place without any reply, maya didn't follow him as she knew he needed some time alone, and she knew very well where he would go and as expected he went inside the room and closed the door, he stood before her portrait and said "Why u did this to me, tel me madhu, why u did this to me? What can i answer to my baby girl, how can i reject her demand, why u left me, why u made me to promise that i should live til i settle maya,or else i would have left this world with u madhu, but see what she want me to promise, how can i give her the false hope on this. More than anything, how can i give your place in my heart to her? How can she become my madhu, and how can i accept it?" He broke down into tears before her portrait. After some time he calmed down and came out of the room, and found the enitre house dark, indicating that everyone had retired to the bed, he went to his room silently crossing maya's room, however he want to check on maya after the evening incident, but he didn't want to disturb her at this time, so he silently opened his room and lied on his bed, recalling all those sweet memories of him with HIS madhu.

I know its short, but if i write a single word more, it wil spoil the suspense, so time for ur likes and comments. And sorry for not posting yesterday, and disappointing u all, am not promising any time for next update, but will post it soon.

Pms later

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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jalebi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

yippieee!!! once again 1st to comment!! thanks to my stars!! when i log in ur were exactly updatin this story & i resed quickly as fast as lightening..., hehehe... coming 1st is joy which i can't explain in words LOL!!😆

okay now over to yet another confusing update LOL😆

nice update!!👏

hmm... 1st thing what came to my mind was "LOOK ALIKE" when he calls the portrait named madhu. so Rk's madhu is dead so she is the owner of the teddy LOL!!😆 then mayu is like her Papa's biwi madhu & not mayu's madhu mama... she yaar how confusing it is!!

Don't tell me mayu gave dipali - madhu's name so that she can consider her as her ma LOL!!😆

i don't know why but i always pull dipali in ur story whether she is really in frame or not LOL😆 but i cant be blamed only u have giving her mahaan roles in ur stories LOL!!😆

if Rk's late wife is madhu then u be single forever & ever in her memories itself Rk. No one can replace ur 1st wife. LOL😆 yes, i'm a hypocrite, if his wife was trish i asked Rk to accept madhu but now i know the portrait is madhu's so no second marriage or no shoulder to cry or no hands to wipe at this age. LOL😆 better u don't cry Rk then u wont need any shoulder or hands to wipe tears when there is no tears LOL😆 if it comes also u have two hands so u wipe urself man lol!!

hmm... what all posibility could be..?? who is this living madhu?? how can any one name twins the same name if they were? how confusing it will be that to call same looking person with one name?? so they are not twin!! but just a look alike...why oh why? u told the portraits name as madhu & increased my confusions...😕

wait... i'll try one last time... did Rk & madhu met with any accident & assumes madhu as dead & living with her memories but in real she is alive & he is not believing her as his wife... gah! how could i think something stupid... if someone really dies also we wont believe they are not dead then how Rk will think is biwi is dead when she is alive in front of him..?? so it not his wife madhu... i'm logging my answer that she is deaddd & this bossy madhu in his mansion is her sister... why i think they changed trish or dips name to madhu so that he will blindly believe her as his wife... wait... BLIND?? okay back to my accident whether in that accident Rk went blind & assumed his wife dead & dreaming with her but he can't see her in real as he is blind?? LOL😆

see not only u can confuse us even i can cnfuse u with my comment LOL!!😆

update soon & clearly my confusions.😳

one last thing... i guess Rk will not agree to accept madhu ma & he will live in her dead wife's memory forever & ever!! Cool!!!😉

thanks for the pm which i din't receive yet LOL😆

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago