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mahimesha

@mahimesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

awesome updates 😃

read in one go ...first i was confuse i thought look alike 😃

but now after 3rd part i m sure madhubala is mayu madhu mama 😃

and madhuri is dead 😳

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
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Unres yipeee first time first on ur update di party time for me 🥳Sure lets party varsha
So now mystry is little bit solved that they are twin sisters😊 Yup they are
Superb update di n happy diwali 😊 Thank u dear

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: madhurish
ARRGGHH!! my net ditched me!😡 Oh so sad
i missed my precious 1st spot 😭 Thats fine, u came second na
i thought to make hat trick but flop hogi!!😭 k u stil have a chance, so try from now on

okay coming to the yet another CONFUSING update!!😆 s u r welcome
Awesome update dear!! interesting twist!! i'm loving it!!👏 Thanks a lot
just answer me one question dear, can u confuse us anymore??? Am thinking of such possibilities u know , i agree we hd predicted many of ur updates even before u update but for that u r taking revenge on us LOL!!😆 No its not a revenge, this time am being careful
okay cool! let me make myself clear...
Madhubala & madhuri are twins!!😛 Yes they're
madhuri & Rk as feeling mutually!!😉 Right
madhubala has one side love on Rk😲 Exactly
Madhuri left the note to call him but that dumbo forgot it!! can't she rite her name madhuri instead of madhu knowing full well there is one more madhu who is looking the same like her?🥱😆 Thats because she doesn't want to get caught, if her mom answers the phone
Rk called at 7 & talked to madhubala thinking it as his madhuri!😳 U r right again
poor Madhubala mistakes & thinks Rk also loves her!!😭 Yup
Madhuri is clever than madhubala but MB is the one to get punishments!! Poor girl, she has to suffer, but madhuri wil again be there to save her sis
Madhuri takes her medicines with her but not madhubala! okay! but y medicine thing is specially mentioned?? did madhubala died in any disease?😕 U r the only one who got the point, but reason is different
okay! in person Rk loves madhuri but through phone he talks & loves with madhubala!!U got it, so he is in love with both?😲 Ha ha ha, how can he love both? now i wonder eye to eye love is greater or ear to ear love is great ?? LOL🤣 Think think
now my doubt is with whom he got married madhuri or madhubala??😕 That we have to wait and see
who is alive & who is dead? madhuri or madhubala? 😕 ditto, wait and see
who is Rk's wife?? i mean 1st wife if he married both the sisters one after the other LOL!!
who is the one sleeping with teddy one side & Rk other side LOL!!🤣
u could have given us a little clue by saying madhuri or madhubala anyone of them sleeping with teddy LOL!!🤣 wil give in later updates, read it carefully then, but then i won't mention it there.

i think madhubala is dead with giving regards to her lack of taking medicines LOL!!😆 & madhuri is alive & mayu calls her madhu ma as she herself wrote madhu in that note. she likes being called madhu.😉 U always put new ideas into my mind, but am clear with the track, so no change.

Rk loved madhubala more bcos he came to know more while they talk but in look he is quite confused ith madhuri & madhubala so i'm going by ear to ear love & logging Rk married MB & she died during pregnancy or some disease & he married Madhuri after all he had mutual feeling for her LOL😆 Lets wait for his POV

but contrary to the above i think madhubala is alive after all this is rishbala story & Not Rishri story!!
but if u are going to show Rk living with his deceased wife's memory forever & ever then kill madhubala & show madhuri alive!! or if he is gonna fulfill mayu's wish then kill madhuri & show madhubala alive after all she was his phone lover LOL & unite Rishbala & give happy ending!!😃Finally what's ur decision girl, u really confuse u and me

if i was in Rk's place i would married both even if there is anymore look alike then i'll marry them too bcos you have same face, same name... then what else one need?? i would enjoyed my life with maatraan sister LOL!!🤣 God, tel ur mom not to look any twin brother as ur groom, feeling pity for them now itself,lmao 🤣

i guess u'll sleep well after confusing us so much!! but i'm glad that u changes the ts to ss so i can read more from u!! thanks hun!!😛 Yes i can't reduce my blah blah, so changed it into ss

HAPPY DIWALI DEAR!!🤗

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: rima4ever
superb update

Originally posted by: rima4ever
thanks for the pm

Thank u so much Dia

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Hey everyone,

As promised, here i am with the next part of the story, thanks to all those who liked and commented on the previous chapter,

Selvakumari, jenny8891, h231087, Ponochka, LazyJane, abi_29, Insaneniyu, SNCC,

vasavi_sri, AR_RK, ARMB, lucygrey21, ashitha235, Umair001, Grishu30, TAVAM,

mahimesha, Sharoan, crazysakshi_19, Jyoraj, shruthi14, lathaprasad, SreeRK,

karamjeet, v.p.joshi, ankitashaw1996, tanuja.siri, aan-rish, shasha1989, PRATHA1, pari_goyal, Crazy_Arshi, NehaVdian, madhurish, Ni33,

sanghita0000, Abhiya4life, zoya789, My_VivJaan, -ChitraRocking-, rima4ever,

Madhuri is not essaying a role like deepali and she had left the note with the name Madhu, so that she won't get caught if her mom answers the call, thats her idea and she won't leave her sister to suffer alone at any problem, Here goes the next part

Part 4

So the next day, there was a sticky note saying "Meet me at 5 at the college door", he smiled seeing it and thought his girl was moving fast than him and he completed all his work and waited for her, as all students started to leave from 4, there was very less number of person moving here and there and some busy in playground, so he started to move towards the door, when he saw Madhuri and madhubala entering a car, he ran to the gate and he found a hand put before him from the car with a "Sorry" written in it and after moments, Madhuri put her head with a puppy face. He smiled and nodded and she understood that he was not mad at her, and she went home.

And as usual at 7, he called her landline number, but it went unanswered, so he tried after half an hour and this time also the same, finally he decided to try one last time, and called back around 8, and it seems to go unanswered but at the last ring, some one picked it up and he said "Hello" and there came a reply "Madhu" and she giggled with deep breath, he questioned her "What happen, u seem to take a break from a long Marathon" she giggled and replied "Nah Rishu, actually went to give send off to my mom, she is starting to native, either me or my sister would go and bring her back after a couple of days" RK didn't paid any heed to her words, he was in his lala land hearing the new name given to him by his madhu "Rishu.. Rishu...Rishu.." He said it 100 times after she called him with that name.

Madhu wondered whether the line got disconnected, as there was no reply and she heard Madhuri voice from outside so, she cut the call and went back to her room, Madhuri as usual, made big mess in kitchen, while making noodles and coffee for her and climbed on the dining table and watched the football match, and she sat there for hours watching it, she is big fan of sports, whereas Madhubala is all more interested in academics.

Madhubala completed the novel which she was reading and came to kitchen to prepare dinner for her and her sister, she was shocked seeing the mess in the kitchen and she angrily marched towards the dinning table, while Madhuri gave her a sheepish smile and said a sorry with a puppy face, Madhubala heart melted seeing her puppy faces, and she sighed and went in to clear the mess. Madhuri beamed with happiness that her puppy face is working out with everyone, and that is when she remembered about RK and she switched off the TV and rushed to her room, after informing that Madhubala to keep the food in hotcase in dinning table and to have her dinner, as she would eat it later.

Madhuri kept her alarm clock near her bed and took her mobile and went to gallery section and took her fav pic of RK and caressed it over the screen and she winked over the pic and said "Time to romance with my hero" and she typed a hi and send it to him, but on getting no response, she threw her mobile on bed and went to sleep. Here sleep is far far away for RK, he is still in his lala land after madhu called him Rishu, he felt touched with her voice, he didn't expect her to be so soft and easy going girl, he thought he wil have a tough time with her, but now everything seems to be a dream and RK was grinning and blushing recalling the phone convo and the way she called him "RISHUUU"

Thats all for this part, now time for ur likes and comments. I have read all ur comments for the preious chapter, i came today morning only, so little tired, will reply to all ur comments by tomo, and sorry for that again.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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Shriya kadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

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Finally i m 1st ! Yay

Coming 2 d update it was really awesome...Poor madhu...Rk spoke to her on d phone ..n she was finally hurt...it wasnt rk's fault as well...as he got confused ...hope everything gets fine soon

waiting for d nxt update di

Edited by shriyakadge - 10 years ago

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Swati

@PRATHA1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Part 3 Awesome update!
Madhubala & madhuri were twins! first i guess this, but then i get confused due to similar name! finally my confusion get cleared! So Madhuri & RK were in relation & Madhubala's love is onesided! I guess madhuri was died due to medical complications & madhubala took care of mayu! But my question is what happened during these 22yrs.! RK didn't feel anything about madhubala!
waiting for the next update !

Edited by PRATHA1 - 10 years ago

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Swati

@PRATHA1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Part 4 Nice update!
RK was himself confused between Madhuri & Madhubala! I think he was unaware about their same short name! Poor madhubala misunderstood the situation & get hurted! Destiny played very bad game with her!
waiting for the next update!

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Glad, i could manage to come in 1st pg LOL!!

nice update dear!! loved it!!

now i'm sure R is in love with Madhubala more than madhuri!! yes, ear to ear love wins LOL!! bcos he loved the madhu who called him as Rsihu!! i guess this is gonna be the turning point & Rk will find out his true love!! Rk will get confused with whom he talked in phone & with whom he romanced by seeing.

now again i'll predict so spare with me!!

hmm... Rk will get married to madhubala & he will accuse her for cheating him & marrying him & he will say that he loved only madhuri then our madhubala will call him "Rishu" in teary eyes then it will hit hard like a football in our dumb hero's head & get shocked to know that he went in lalala...land only bcos of madhubala & she calling him Rishu & not madhuri the one makes puppy face & mess the kitchen & watches match forgeting her 7pm plan LOL!!

hmm...looking at madhuri's body language , behavior, ... i don't think she is the one sleeping with teddy LOL!! i'm still with the teddy LOL!! but its our sweet bookworm madhu who used to sleep with teddy after dosing off by reading romantic novels LOL!!!

so my madhu...bala is Rk's wife, mother of mayu, & now waiting in heaven for her phone a friend husband but that idiot corrected her sister & living happily for 22 yrs without doing anything but staring at ur photo & find 8 difference with u & madhuri LOL!!

sorry yaar!! i've gone mad after reading this confused story so don't make me madder so better give next update soon...

thanks for the pm in advance LOL!!

i hope u enjoyed ur diwali in ur native with ur family!!

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago