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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update. So truth is released next update. I am waiting. Thank you very very much for pm me. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update Uma di
So next update is the truth
Waiting eagerly for next update
Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Uma di.👏
I guess Madhuri will wear that pink anarkli and RK will think he talked to her all this while. Madhu will stay quiet and let the two marry and have a child. Later Madhuri will die and Madhu will take up all her responsibilities including some regarding RK. She will still love him but won't say anything to him, in respect of her twinsister, RK and their love. Alas she sacrifies her own love and somehow her own life for them, since she still hasn't married anyone. How can she marry RK if she is already married to someone else? Maybe she felt happy that way, feeling content. She was still around RK, but not in the sense like her sister. RK won't know the actual truth that he had those conversations with Madhu and not Madhuri. If it is an happy ending then somehow RK will find out and they will marry. If it is a sad ending well there are possibilities.😆
Okay that was only an analyse, no fun. Sorry for that. 😆
Uma di and Sudha, you know I always laugh. I refer that to my post for your PM list Uma di. I know why I wasn't in it. So don't take my crying emotiocons seriously. I do not cry, I laugh. 😆 Even in the thoughest the times I laugh. Well mostly ironically. 😆 But still no crying only laughing. Hey, I am laughing just writing this. 😆
Thanks for the update and for the PM. Will be waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update loved it Tfs for pm 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Short update ... boo hooo! But cute one! Waiting to know what happens the next day.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi,awesome update.i like to have every day update,bcos i love ur plot,cant wait toknow wat will gonna to ckme dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update uma...continue soon..
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
i want the fast track mode Uma...this story is getting more and more interesting..so want to know it all soon..
and i'm in the list...yippieee...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello everyone,
Thanks to all for liking and commenting on the previous chapter


I have read all ur comments and wil reply to all soon, once am free, so here goes the next chapter.

And this chapter is dedicated to the b'day girl Neha

Part 6

The next day, RK rose up from the bed before the sunrise and was waiting for it, he got ready and was waiting for the clock to struck 8, as he can run to college to see his angel, each minute was passing like years for him, he sat on the bed realising he has half an hour more to start for college,and he closed his eyes and jumped into his dreamland

Oh penne penne song from the movie Vanakkam Chennai,
(Just heard this song sterday, and i feel it suits to the situation)

un kaigal korthu
unnodu poga
en nenjam than yengudhe
dhinam uyir vangudhe


I wanna hold you
lie on your shoulder
you're all i see when i dream
you're the air that i breath

He could see himself, holding hand with his madhu,and both with happiness all over, smiling at each other.

un tholil saaindhu
kan moodi vaazha
en ullam alaipayuthey
ayyo thadumaarudhe

girl just close your eyes
put your hand with mine
and let the world fade away
here is just you and me

Slowly madhu put her head on his shoulder, and he pamper her cheeks, feeling her, beep beep.


RK was brought back with a beep sound from his mobile, he checked and it was from sultan, he ignored it and found it was time for him to start, so he started early from his house, shocking his mother.He entered the college and his eyes was scanning everywhere for her, and at last he found her with her sister, both in pink suit, madhuri in pink tanky top and blue jean while her sister in pink anarkali suit, his eyes was focused on madhuri, but unknowingly he turned towards madhubala too, he ignoredthe thought thinking, it was just because of his fav color dress.Both the girls waved a smile over him, whereas madhuri's smile was filled with mischief, while madhubala's was filled with shy.


All the girls went inside their respective room to get ready, when madhubala was in her dreamland waiting for the clock to struck 6, he heart ws fluttering, she could feel the butterflies flying inside her
stomach, suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and she turned and found madhuri standing there shouting "Madhu, what happen to u, how long am calling u to help with my hooks" madhubala came out of her dreamland and got ready for her performance, Madhubala was performing a role in a drama with her friends, whereas madhuri was performing a folk dance with her friends.

RK tried to concentrate on all the happenings around him, but his thoughts remained only on one thing and its madhuuu. He scanned the entire hall, but she was not there, he turned and found her going alone to canteen, he smirked and left to that place in a lightning speed. Madhuri got ready for her performance and was waiting for her friends to get ready, then she realised that she skipped her breakfast, adn she was hungry, so she went to canteen to have some light snacks, she bought a pizza and a coke and turned around and dashed with some one and she dropped everything on the floor, she closed her eyes tight on the fear of hitting the gorund, but she felt a tight grip on her shoulder from a manly hand and opened her eyes to see RK holding her.


She just smiled at him, there was no blush, no shy, she was so bold, RK just ignored it and made her stand on the floor, and she was about to turn around, when she felt pulled,and she landed straight on his chest, she smiled and patted him and told " RK, its time for my performance, i need to go" But RK didn't leave her and pulled her close to him, "Leave me RK" she said, he smiled and said " I will, but not before.." he was about to say a kiss please, atleast on my cheek, but he was shocked by the kiss landed on his lips,and she ran away just like that.

RK was confused, he was totally confused with her behavior today, she was different from what he has assumed about her, and he left the place without seeing the girl standing behind him, who was in tears, her tears would have made her completely wet by this time, her eyes were blood shot, and pain was all written over her face, she was about to collapse, but she didn't, she don't want to express her pain before every one, she reached her house by an auto and the moment she reaches her room,
she cried out in pain, she cried and cried really for hours, until she heard a knock on the door.

Thats all for this update, now time for ur likes and comments.

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow that was so heartbreaking...
wonder what will happen next... RK seems to sense a difference in their attitude... maybe he wud eventually realize that madhubala is the one

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