Forever and ever final part on page 90 updated on 13/2 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update uma...
like wht lazy said i dnt wnt madhu to lie for her sis...
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
when u will update..!!
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome update 😃

now i m sure about madhu she is the one ...😃

then how the tail got twisted 😳

i am in the list 😃 thaknx for pm 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 6 that was so heartbreaking... 😭

wonder what will happen next... RK seems to sense a difference in their attitude...

Rk madhu is the one 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 😃 part 7
just like puzzle 😆 i think RK and madhuri will get married and madhuri will die 😕

but I think RK is in love with madhu 😃

thankx for pm 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesome part 8😳

think Rk think ...you are intelligent😳😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part1- Aahhh... A new story from you! Feeling good to read your stuff after so so so long Sis! Thanks for the dedication!
Well, I got little confused as the paragraphs switched to one another so swiftly... But I got the plot a little by now and it's too good!
You have gone too far in this story now... I really need to buck up now... Lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 2- Ok! So it's Madhu who died and it's Madhu who is alive... Lolzz... Look alike thing! Or is it a twin thing! I guess it's twin sister's story! Certainly I maybe wrong. Madhu ma spent her entire life for them... Might be Biwi died at younger age and Madhu Maa came to take care of them as Maasi of little Maya and then she became Madhu Maa... Story is quite gripping Sissy... Lovely!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent update yaar👏
plZ do PM me when you update.😃
read all the parts in one go😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys,
Sorry for not updating the story for past few days, i was quiet busy with my son's admission in school, ok i always have some excuse, so here goes the next instalment of the story.

Thanks to all those who liked and commented on the previous chappy

Dedicating this part to all those who have waited for it. Spl dedication to our birthday baby shuvra aka noiseygirl

Part 9


RK remained as a confused soul, as the girls have not returned from Pune for the past 10 days, and with the information he got from Madhuri over phone made him clear that they might come straight to the exam, as Malik has left for his work and padmini alone can't manage everything there. His confusion grow more and more with each passing day, He was talking to Madhuri on phone lately and slowly he realised that the girl he romanced over phone was not the girl who was talking to him now, there was much difference between both the girls.As a result he started to ignore most of her calls. And he clearly realized that madhuri was really how he had expected, she is a bold, outspoken, sincere hard working girl, going crazy on silly things, but the girl to whom he spoke was a shy, intovert, and a blushing girl. RK wanted to find out the girl, but he was left with no clues, he can't ask madhuri, his next suspect is Madhubala and he want to speak to her and clear his doubt, as he had caught her twice staring at him, but apart from that he had never initiated a conversation with her and he was scared, what if his suspection was wrong and madhuri gets angry for suspecting her sister and leave him, he was not prepared for that, he couldn't leave madhuri, he love her so much, but whenever he says the word love, a deep and low voice from his mind disturbs him saying "RISHU". He was confused, whether it was a misunderstanding or some one playing with his feelings,whatever it may be, he wanted to clear it first.

Madhuri and Padmini was not able to find the indifference with Mb, they were more concentrated on their own worries, padmini about her MIL and madhuri abt her RK. So Mb was in her own depression, but she was firm with her decision that she wil not distub her sister life and she wil not let anyone know that she too loved RK, she had seen madhuri talking over phone many times and even heard her saying RK, so she was clear that it was better for her to step out of this. Her only console is her father, who knew everything about this matter.She wiped her tears which were freely flowing at the instant she thinks about her broken heart. She said to herself that " Am sure papa, i can do this" and she closed her eyes remembering what had happened a week ago.

After madhuri and Padmini was sent back to home, Malik came to Mb and put a hand on her shoulders, she just wiped her tears and looked around for her mom and sister and on not finding them, she turned to Malik, who said that " I have sent them home, as i want to speak to u" She smiled a little realising her papa had got some clues about her, so she waited for him to continue. She firmly told him that there was nothing disturbing her, but Malik was more firm than him saying she was hiding something from them, and finally she broke into tears and fell on her knees and told about her love and RK's phone convo and how she realised that he was in love with her sister, who was head over heels in love with him.

Malik just consoled her saying that the only solution to this problem is direct meeting between all three, but Mb refused saying that, "I wil never disclose my feeling for RK, and wil not come in between Madhuri and RK, as I could see the love they have for each other in their eyes." Malik could see the pain in her eyes and asked "So what about u?" for which she replied "I have u for my lifetime papa, who can understand me without even saying a word, who wil give me a shoulder to cry whenever i want wihout me asking for it, and who would forgive me for all the mistakes i commit"

After that Malik tried to make her understand that this is not the right solution, but Mb was firm on her stand and she refused to talk about it further and made Malik Promise to her that he would not let anyone know about it at any situation.

Thats all for this update, i know u all are angry for maintaining the suspense, but trust me, from next update, i would start revealing one by one, now time for ur likes and comments.

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