The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 101

Amazing story...it transported me to the year 1922...the images you create are so vivid...just too good...

that was brilliant...just loved it

amazing teaser jenny..
arnav was such a confused soul..khushi pass ho..to problem..na ho tav v problem..he himself dnt know wht he want..
aww poor khushi..she is became silent..nd let go her doll??
egarly waiting 4 monday..
continue soon:)

Nice update. So much is going in Arnav's life all together!! Hmmm
Khushi is so small and cute.. :) I jst love it.
End part of update made me curious. Is that lines hint to Brothrel?! :/

something bad must have happened for khushi to have given up the doll and even avoiding khushi. poor her! very very very eagerly waiting for the update

Awesome Teaser.

Did Khushi give her doll to Gardener's Daughter or her MIL Pressurized her.

Poor Khushi..no choices given to her..she probably does't even know that one can decide for themselves..Arnav liked having Khushi's attention..he must have if he has noticed that she is unusually quiet and not talking much..is he sure that she is upset about giving up the doll only and it's got nothing to do with what he said to her and now he is feeling remorse and has he got more than one reason to feel remorse about ?

Jenny waiting eagerly for the update.
Thanks for the teaser.

Omg Jenny such a powerful update
Firstly Arnavs started to notice khushi
Then he feels different seeing khushi with his little bro ...is he jealous???
Then after his fight with his father he takes it out on khushi
Poor lass was sent there too innocent to understand anything
N now he has gone to seek a prostitute to stop what he feels for khushi taking over
Will he be able to go through with it ??? Will he keep seeing her eyes whilst he is trying to finish his task ??? How will he act with her afterwards if he does finish his task will he feel guilty ?????
N what will they do to make khushi a women ??? I hope Arnav doesn't hurt her anymore the poor lass just wants to be loved
I applaud Arnav for not wanting to ruin her childhood but he's hurting her other ways instead
Looking forward to next update to see what's happening next
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon


As for teaser looks like khushi has taken his words to heart n is trying to be a woman so she has given her doll away
Am I reading right is Arnab missing khushi ????? What will he do now once he finds her????

Awesome update Jenny like the way you show Arnab emotion and frustration and poor Khushi was the one at the receiving end who witness his turmoil I must say you write historical stories so well. do continue soon

great update jenny 👏