Sandhir SS - terror to death.!! Updating soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So anyone interested for terror for death seeing the banner??
It would be dark thrill and scary...!!
And it would have a soft side too..!!
Emotional ..




INDEX

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Are yeh bi puchne ki baat ha
yeah yeah continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey! Janavi
Concept Seems interesting very interesting😃
Continue soon dear👍🏼
Love
Bushra🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Isse kehta hai dedication...
Yaar kitna accha likto ho aur update bhi itni jaldi
U are just awesome...
Aur Dark FF by you ab to I have to read...
Update Soon
Love u
Prishi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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For sure continue yr
Ye b koi puchane ki bt h bhaala

Would luv to read it

Jldi se proloug de do ab

Eagerly wtng

Update soon

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear.
Awesm prolouge!!! 😊 😊 😊
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Terror to death - part 1


"Swim baby...!!!


" oh god the water is so damn cold..!! I can't...!!


" baby ..!!


And she went closer to him and crossed her legs on his waist...!!!


" you are so heavy..!! Hippo..!!!


" shut up paani main heavy bhi light Hota hai..!! And I am not heavy..!!


" ohh really..!! My mermaid..!! Tumhe paani se kitna pyaar hai??


" tumse bhi zyaada...!!! Ab chalo...!!



And they both swim to the island...!!! He held her hand and spread a mat and pushed her on it..!!!



He came on top of her and digged his head in her neck..!! Her hands went upto his head and pulled his hair and pushed him more inside...!!


He kissed all over her face and her bracelet tingled on her hands..!!! He pressed his lips on her plumb ones..he left her layed beside and both breadth heavily ..



" chalo let's do fishing..!!

" hmmm... You go I will bring the equipments...!!



She went inside and he came with the equipments...!! They started searching for fishes...



" hey look there it's a snake kind of thing..!!!


" yaa just stay away from it..!! Stop..!!?


" what??? The guy asked confused..!!


" just don't move... And she bent down and brought something in her hand...


" wow baby you got a quite big fish..!! I think it's our dinner tonight..!!


" it can't be our dinner... This is one of the most dangerous species of fish..!! You looking at these spikes..?


" yaa..how is it dangerous.??


" because If someone steps on this fish then he or she will bed dead..!!


" hey .. If it's so dangerous then leave it..!!


The girl kept the fish inside again and they both went further... But didn't find anything and returned to the island..



they lay down on the sand and hugged each other..!!


" tum mujhe Iss sunsan island par Kyu Kai ho sanyukta??


" because there will be no one to disturb us randhir..!!!


They both slept for a while.. After an hour or so randhir felt sensations on his neck..!! He got up with a jerk and checked if something was there..



But there was no sign of anything..!!
Sanyukta also woke up and saw him..!!


" sanyu you told me that we are alone on this island then yeh foot prints kiske hai??


" I don't know..!! Yeh mere nahi hai.. Itne chote...!!



And they got up and looked at the foot prints..!!! They looked at each other and sanyu quickly wore her shirt..!!!


" I think some kids must have played prank on us..!!!


" sanyukta for playing prank kids hone bhi toh chahiye hai..!!! Come ok let's follow the foot prints..!!


" but why do you wanna see..?? Let's just leave it come one...!!! And she pulled him..!!



" let's set out tent...!!

" hmm...ok..!! But do you know how to set a tent?? Ms Farzi


" shut up..!! I very well know..!!


" oh really don't you remember jab hum Vardhan sir li wapas Lane Gaye the tab Maine tumhara tent lagaya tha...!!



" Haan Haan..!! Yaad hai..! Chup chap lagao aur fir lakdiyaan Lao..!!



They set up there tent and bring some wooden logs ..!! They lit fire and cook maggi...!! But do they know they are not alone..!!!!



They were chatting and remebering old days when they heard a woman crying...!!! Both widened their eyes in shock because there was no one except them when they went to take wood...!!



So here I end..!! If someone thinks that the story is similar to some movie so yeah..!! But it will change a little with our sandhir and also this is dark the other way..!! Like dark is always with hate between the couple but it's not like this one..!!! It would be haunted + dark + romance + thrill + emotional...!! So stay tuned and this ff will be updated once a week...!! And sorry no editing done so pardon me..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O M G
Im first...
I think Im dead let me pinch myself...
Di that was like awesome...
It does remind me of a movie...
I cant remember the name but ur FF is way better and way more interesting...
I just love it so much...
Ahhh I just cant be any happier...
Update soon di...
Love u so much and lets all pray for Harshita di...
Get well soon Harshi
Love u Janvi di
Prishi
Edited by ArshaParsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArshaParsh

O M G
Im first...
I think Im dead let me pinch myself...
Di that was like awesome...
It does remind me of a movie...
I cant remember the name but ur FF is way better and way more interesting...
I just love it so much...
Ahhh I just cant be any happier...
Update soon di...
Love u so much and lets all pray for Harshita di...
Get well soon Harshi
Love u Janvi di
Prishi





Thanks prishi..!!
congrats on coming first..!!
#get well soon Harshita di#
Edited by Paravi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg now this is what a unique concept

but would u care to tell me as u said that it is taken from some movie, which movie?

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