Sandhir SS - terror to death.!! Updating soon - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

awesome fab lovely lovely superb

fab part.
love it. update asap.😃




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

It was scary
I luved it

Wtng for next
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Hey janu mast update.😊😊
Loved it. 😊
I tho8 those fishermen r aftr all this thngs.
Bt there iz sm 1 else. 😲
Gun shots!!! 😲
but u again gv d cliffhanger.
Nw my mind vl actually start 2 wrk😆🤣 wht/who can it be!!!

Waiting 4 d nxt update.
continue soon.

Love,
Mahi ❤️





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Amazing! The horrific treat you serve us with this story, is really emancipating and very interesting!
I am loving how sandhir is worried and paranoid about each other. And the sudden twists and turns you are treating this tale with, is really making me hell curious!
Continue soon! Can't wait any longer! Sorry for being late, I got stuck with work and have many PM's more to check!
Thanks for pm'ing and the awesome update.

Keep writing janavi,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3




It's okay karishma...! Thank you so much
Love you
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Posted: 11 years ago
Terror to death part 4


The next morning randhir woke ups and didn't find sanyu beside him..!! He got scared and looked all over the place..!! He went inside the woods and heard someone..!!


He opened the door of the house...!!!
And entered..!! He saw sanyu reading a dirty burnt diary..!! He kept his hand on her shoulder..!!


"There is a spirit on this island.. She spoke..!! Tears flowing from her eyes..!!
"Hey..! Have you read this? He asked wiping her tears..!
"Once I scrolled.
Her name is Coral. That is her grave there...She was a young girl and worked for the Tripangos in the 20's.
She lived here...One day, she stood on the reef to collect sea cucumbers ...and she stepped on a stonefish. The poison began to work ...
but they hit back at the coast.
And the boys of the company were waiting for her..! They laughed at her and raped her...Seven men.
There are seven characters on the wall there...She died...
- Okay?
"And since then, she takes revenge on all men who come here.
"And you believe this?
- Listen here randhir ..!!

And she showed hima page and read out loud..!!

Coral has a knife.
She uses it to cut sea cucumber. She was angry last night.
Jim.
Come on, are you serious?
What? Do you think it's funny?
"Of course.
Waiting to see the spirit Coral ...
I hope they give me a blowjob as the other.
And then further ... - Okay, here it is.
Coral gave us a visit last night, at least I think so.
I'm not sure if it was a dream.
She was very beautiful, I watched her all night...!!


" sanyu listen baby..!!

" shut up randhir listen to me..!!

""" I tried to approach her, but she disappeared...You really believe this. - Yes, indeed. It makes sense...It is not useful...!!! Look at everything that has happened since we arrived here.
What happened last night with those guys...Why she left so suddenly.
Where they shot at???

"They shot at each other. Of course. Said randhir ..!
"Listen to me. Later, Coral ...

Sanyu was crying and shouting..!!
"Listen to me.

"Coral was f**king with Bobby yesterday evening. A lot.
Serious thing. I do not know if he makes it...


She read out the diary..!! Randhur was worried for her condition..!!

"Okay, sanyu, someone wrote this ...
people like us for the fool. It's a joke.

" she is going to kill us..!! she is going to kill us..!!she is going to kill us..!! She kept on crying..!!

"Okay. A fool came here and thought it was a good idea to keep a diary to write ...that frightens people and then leaving the island for themselves...That is wrong.
And now people come there and write everything in...It's just a big joke...They even have a tomb placed.

Sanyu again took the diary and kept on reading..!!

"Listen, Hendo is missing. I can not find him anywhere.
I have searched all over the island ... - I do not hear...Many blood. - Please...What happens here, dammit?

"Can we discard? It bothers me now sanyukta..!! Just stop it..!!

But sanyu kept on reading..!!
"If you read this diary and you're on the island, there is a spirit here ...
and they will kill you. Get out, quick.

" Come on, it's ridiculous.
You should not be so upset about this.It's terrible what happened to her fate...If it happened...


Randhur was going to complete when she looked at him...!

"If it happened..???
" yaa how come you know it's true??

He was about to touch her face when sanyu interrupted..!

"Do not touch me...!!


And she ran from there..!! Randhir also went behind her..!! In the evening she was preparing food..!!


" randhir, how you want your fish cooked??How do you like your fish?
Put him in aluminum foil and make him so ready...


He kept mum..!! At night they were sitting when sanyu hugged him and spoke..!

"I'm sure they exist...I went to the shed and heard someone moaning.
Well, I also heard something.
"It was the wind.
"It was no wind. - Come on.
" I heard it. It was a person.
- No.
"I can understand why she wants revenge.
- What?
If someone did to me ...

"Would you murder innocent men?
Asked randhir



To be continued..!! Sorry for short one..!! But then the last part would have been really small..!! Pls do leave your reviews...!! And yaa next part will last one...
It's a five shots ... Sorry for being late
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Posted: 11 years ago
Moi came first yipee

I became so gud stalker so proud of me 😎

So the cat is out of the bag
So there's a ghost of girl on island who's doing all dis
Poor sanyu she's so scared
Rd not believing her

Next part will be last one

I m so eager to know how this will end
Update soon wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ress
UNRESS

Janavi...
Ur update is going scary n scary with every update😉👍🏼
Its interestingvery interesting 😃
Lovely,nicely n beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
thx 4 pm
lots of love🤗
Edited by Param_love - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update...
oh god so it was a ghost!!!
plz continue soon
last part😔
m eagerly w8ing to know wat happens to sandhir...
thnx for pm


with love
shreya
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Posted: 11 years ago


awesome dear... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it!
I am loving these mysteries and tragedies which are unfolding!
The way you wrote it, was superb!
Continue soon.
Thanks for pm'ing. Can't wait for the next part.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

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