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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: newmoon18

The update was awsme
Luved it

The story is intrstng

Sandhir alone on an island spending quality tym
N sumthing weird hppng
They r not alone
Really superb yr

Eagrly wtng for next
Update soon

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊





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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

Hey janu fab update dear.
Vry different n innovative idea. ā­ļø šŸ‘
loved it

so they r on a creepy island.
N they r alone bt nt so really.

Wndring wht gonna hpn nxt! 😲
Update nxt part soon.

Love,
Mahi ā¤ļø




Thanks mahi..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wow yaar awesome update and I love thrills continue soon😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Janavi
Awesome n amazing start dearšŸ‘šŸ‘
All in one story😳😳
It's going to be interesting very interestingšŸ˜‰
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
BushrašŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Param_love

Janavi

Awesome n amazing start dearšŸ‘šŸ‘
All in one story😳😳
It's going to be interesting very interestingšŸ˜‰
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
BushrašŸ¤—




Thanks bushra...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36



Terror to death part 2



They were chatting and remebering old days when they heard a woman crying...!!! Both widened their eyes in shock because there was no one except them when they went to take wood...!!


" what was that?

" I have no idea...let's look in the woods..!! Come..


He held her hand and they both took a torch and went inside the forest...
They searched for a while but didn't found anything...randhir went a little forward and sanyu checked the other side..!! He found a small hut in the middle of the woods..!!

He went near it...he was about to open the door when he felt a hand on his shoulder..!!! He turned with a jerk...


" what??

" you scared the shit out of me...!! Don't do this ..


" ok..I didn't meant to..!! Let's go...!! There's nothing...!!


"We should go fishing tomorrow.

" okay...!!


They went to there tent and slept...!!! In morning they went for fishing after eating the breakfast...!!sanyukta was busy fishing when randhir cake from behind ...!!

"Listen to this. - What are they?
"Old bones.
"May I look at it?
"I found them in the woods. What are they?
"Well, no bird bones. They are too big.
"But there are no large animals on this island.strange Are we on our guard against big chicken?
"Maybe.
"What will you do with all those hours?
"That's a secret !! chipped randhir...


They went back to their tent and unpacked their things...!! Sanyu looked at Randhir...!! He was looking confused ...!


"What is wrong?
"What do you mean, what's wrong? "The two sleeping bags.
"Yes, one for me and one for you.
"No way...!!!
"Yes, it's like in the 50's. I have my integrity.
"No, we sleep together.
"Really? - Yes, really.
" shut up and sleep..!!! Shouted sanyukta...!!!


They both slept peacefully...!! They were holding each other's hands and randhir was caressing his thumb over her palm..!! Suddenly their was a sound...!!


" randhir , what is it? Did you hear that?
" It's the wind chime ..!!! I made it using those bones...!!
"But there is no wind.
"It's nothing. Come on.


Suddenly they heard the crying
Voice again...!!! Both got up and took their torch...!!

"Did you hear that?
"What was that?
"I don't know.
"That sounds like mockery thrushes.
"Come on, let's go back to bed. It's nothing.



They both slept again and ignored the sound...!!! In the morning they heard the birds chirping and the waves making sound...!!! They got up and went outside the tent...!


Sanyukta went to her bag and looked that her clothes were missing..!!! She went ahead and randhir followed her...!!


"Someone has gone through my stuff.
"What do you mean?
"They have hung in the tree.
"What?
- All my tops..!! Randhir Look, these are the same footprints as before.
Come on, come forth.


They went inside the woods again to look if someone was there...!!

"Hello? Is there anyone there?
We know you're here. We find you.
"Hello?"
"Hello?"
Come on.
Hello? - Hello?
"It was a monkey. I'm sure. Sa is randhir tired of looking...!!!
"There are no monkeys on this island.
"Maybe some children.
"Yes, that would probably scare us
"Yes, they are doing well.


They went back and prepared food...!!!! They were enjoying to the fullest on the island alone...!! But to Their dismay they again heard those creepy sounds which freaked the hell out of them..!!

"What was that?
"I do not know. Come on.It sounded like someone crying.


They went inside the woods and saw a small hut...!!! They were shocked because they crossed this point before too..!! But their was no house ...!!

"How come we have not seen before?
"Not a clue.
"Hello?"
"Hello?"
"This place is so old. Smell.All these pieces of the 20's., come and see this...!!
"What's the matter?
"Yes.It seems like it is here for an eternity.That hut must have been left behind by the Tripangboeren.
"Yes, there are some interesting pictures hanging on the walls.
"Cool. - Yes.


They went back to their tent ...!!! Sanyukta hanged on his back and hummed a song...!!

"Randhir Where is the camera?
Have you seen it?
- No.
"It is not where it normally is.
Here it is. That's odd.
"Are you sure you're not using it?
"No, I'm not using it.
"Come here to watch...What is it? All you've filmed?

"I'm such a moron giggled randhir
" You're an idiot smirks sanyu
" I love you too he replied and kissed her nose...!!
" this is all I shooted...! Hey What's This?
"what? Oh god...!!!
" randhir ..!! Cried sanyukta...
" who the hell shooted this...!!!!


TO BE CONTINUED...


So here I end..!! This is a five shot...!! Not an ff...!! Because most of you don't know the movie I am writing ..!! So I will end it soon but the ending will be different...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Yess!!! Ibthink i am first..
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Loved it!!! Hawww! Who shooted it????
Next part asap..
.
baishali
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: baishali1234

Yess!!! I think i am first..
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Loved it!!! Hawww! Who shooted it????
Next part asap..
.
baishali




Congrats on being first..!!
Thanks baishali.. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
its really superb awesome fab lovely lovely lovely.
you describe everything fably.
and who shooted it?
love the part. fab.update.
love you.keep smile.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

its really superb awesome fab lovely lovely lovely.

you describe everything fably.
and who shooted it?
love the part. fab.update.
love you.keep smile.😃



Thanks anu..!
And shoot pata nahi kisne kiya

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