Dhuaan ||Kria One Shot||

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wonderful and fantastic os... loved it

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

it was suprb...

I really loved the way U showed the emotions...

The pain that The Dancing Queen would never be able to dance again...

N lastly the hope that Rey gave her that she will dance no matter what...

Lovely...

Keeep Writing...

Love Aditi...

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

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anshika

@Kiarawinget16

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

really beautifuly written luvd it

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Such an emotional OS it was...

Nice choice of song & the words u used to describe it as well 👍🏼...

Liked how u described Kria's Pain , Rey's guilt , Their feelings ...

Do write more 😊

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

aww it was soo emotional and lovelyy!!!!!! kriya u will defintely win against anyone and will dancee like u always do!!!!!!!!!

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

So emotional!!!
Fabulously written!!!
Rey was just standing by d door frame!
To see her reactions dat she had masked!
To watch her let go of her emotions dat she had buried so dat no1 cud get a glimpse of dem!
Awesome!!! 👏