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Posted: 10 years ago

PART-2

Maan slept that night thinking about the next morning he was quite sure that next day morning he would go n get his geet his wife back,he thought all about it deciding that he would talk to geet about all this n will clear all the misunderstanding.he was very posirive about all this but poor boy didn't realised that it was not the end of his misery it all has just started,the pain n lonliness that he gifted geet in this relation has become the destiny of there relation n may be it was time now that he suffers with all that pain.

Next morning maan got up got ready n hurried to get out of the house at this point all he wanted to do was go n meet geet n clear all the misunderstanding,he ran towards his car n drove towards his destination where geet stayed.as he knocked the door n the land lady came she was a bit shocked to see him there,

Yes kisse milna hai apko??

Ji geet,m her husband n i wanna meet her

Sorry geet is not here

Not here?? Maan asked shocked wondering where could geet go this early

Okh toh wo kab tak ayegi can i wait for her here??

Sorry but she won't come here back as she left last evening

What do u mean by she left?? Asked maan getting angry on the lady n his situation

Excuse me mr. M not here to answer ur quesns

I don't know where ur wife is as yesterday evening she told me that she ll b leaving my room n i gave back her deposit to her,after that where she went i don't know

How can u say u don't knw where she gone she was living in ur house as pg n u saying u don't know about her asked maan loosing his patience

She was a pg here not my relative n when u being her husband didn't knew where ur wife was from last 4months than how can i know that where she has gone when m no one to her.said the lady n closed the door on his face

That sentences shooked maan thinking about the time when his mother dragged her out of there house n she left without a word without a penny n with no support even her family disowned her,where she would have gone in that situation,who she would have asked for help she didn't even knew anyone in delhi,how she would have managed all alone in this big city without anone beside her.once again he failed in fulfilling his responsibilities,once again he failed as a husband..he remembered her hopefull look that she gave him when his mother was dragging her out of the home,hoping may be he ll speak for her but no he was soo lost in his pain n his ego to have noticed her plight,her pain...once again he let her down

Maan came back to his car wondering where to find geet he knew no one from her office or any of her frnds who could tell him about her.

He sat there wondering what to do than decided to go back home n look for her any of her contact books may b he would find any of her frnds no. Who could help him regarding her.

Maan ran towards his room while his mom kept calling him but he ignored,today his main priority was geet he didn't wanted to loose her,no he won't repeat his mistake twice...but sadly he realised his priority quite late ,when today he realised who was his first priority she wasn't there anymore to see his care...he lost her

Maan went to his room n started looking in there cubord,drawers n everything n anything where who could find anything related to geet which could give him a clue about geet's whereabouts but sadly there was nothing no contact details...but while searching for that book he came across a diary..pink coloured diary which shook his existence n his life..it was geet's diary..

*Flashback ends*

Maan came out of his thoughts with the ring of his phn,he realised it was morning n he has sat there on his window pane whole night thinking about geet n the events that happened 6months back n the day when he lost his geet.he sighed n looked towards his ringing phn n realised it was one of his detectives whom he has appointed to search geet

He picked up the call thinking about getting sumthing positive about geet

Hello,what's the progress???

Sir ,we have still not managed to reach mam but yes here we have got few men who have seen mam here 4months back

What geet is there?? Asked maan again getting hopefull only to get his hopes shattered once again

No sir mam is not here anymore as these people have seen her 4months back

Where??? was the straight quesn

Here in pune, sir there is a company name malhotra enterprises ,i have talked to few employes here n they have given us info that mam was here 4months back coz of sum official work

Didn't u asked them about her company?? Or anyother thing

Yes sir we aked ,But they have denied to give any info as its against there rules to reveal about the info of any client,we r trying sir but still no one is ready to tell anything

Okh fine msg me the details of that company n the name of ceo ill find it myself

Maan kept phn aside being a lil hopeful about finding geet's wherebouts..its been 6months he is been searching her but got no success he has hired india's best detectives,he himself visited many places in a hope of finding get anywhere but he got nothing absolutely nothing,everytime he tried he came back home empty handed with no info about geet.

Maan was waiting for the msg when he heard his mother screaming his name asking him to go office,he got ready n decided to go office as wanted to stay away from home from his mother's bickering he was already soo pained n broken that all he wanted at this ponit was only geet n a lil peace of mind n he knew that the first one was far away from his reach while to get the second option he ll have to go away from home...

Maan sat on an empty bench n the same garden where he use to spend many days n nights waiting for any info abt geet,this was not the first time in these 6months when he skipped his office it has been his rutine to miss office n sit here in this park n wait for any call about geet or to go searching geet in different cities after lying his mom abt sum business tour as he knew about his mom's dislike for geet,he cursed himself to have never realised it until that day when after knowing all the truth in that diary he was completed broken has gonne to daddima to share his pain his grief n the way his mother screamed blaming geet for her son's misery blaming her for everything n anything while in reality it was he whoo was responsible for her pain

N when he tried to go in search of geet his mother stopped him again cursing geet,it was only daddima in the whole family who was really worried for geet n her wherebouts...that was the day when he realised it that even after having everything infront of his own eyes he never saw the pain in geet's eyes that she endured living in his house hearing his mothers baseless talks n taunts,she lived with that pain daily n he was busy ,busy in making money in his office,

Maan remembered that how the same office that was once his life the work without which he couldnot live,which use to give him peace started haunting him 6months back the day he realised that somewhere this office was also a reason for the distance between there relation he clearly remembered those line from geet's diary

"today i soo wanted to talk to maan wanted to share things with him i even initiated talking but all i got in reply from him was his famous hmmm,as he was busy reply his mails n msgs.."

"Today again i tried i kept talking n talking but when i looked towards him he was not even listening to me he was all lost in his files"

"Today i wanted to ask him abt joining office but i couldn't musterup my courage i was feeling scared n nervous about his reaction but after mustering up my courage i finally asked him but again all he had to say me was his famous hmm n nothing more even though i was shocked n surprised as i havn't expected his such cool response but still was that hmm enough was that only the thing that he could have said"

There were many such entries were geet expressed about her feelings that she wanted to share but couldn't do it coz he never had time to hear what his wife wante to say but the biggest blow was the last entry that she made

" i had taken maan's appointment to meet him at office,u know i had to wait 1 month to talk to my own husband n when got there he still didn't had time for me,he asked me to leave but today i had decided that ill have to tell him wht i was planning for soo long but guess what he didn't even reacted..i told him i need divorce i expected every type of reaction from him his anger,screaming may b hitting me but not the one he gave me his silence he reacted as if nothing happend n asked me to leave,was it such a small issue that all he has was to ask me leave he closed the door of his conference room on my face but today i realised that may b i n our this realtion matters nothing to him,after i took this decision i had been dying every day bit by bit just thinking about going away from him he had nothing to say about it,he actually closed the door on my face,actually he didn't closed door on my face but on our relation today i realised that how least important i m in his life he actually made me realised my place our realtions place in his eyes...below below everything But still it hurts hurts a lot to think about my broken marriage my broken heart n my broken realtion" u must b thinking why i mentioned MY in it coz it was all mine juist mine coz had it been ours he would have felt the same pain,he would have reacted but sadly he didn't n with it he broke my last hope of continuining this realtion"

Maan's thoughts broke with the beep of the msg that he received,he has finally got the address of the company n CEO...

That was the day that he realised that till how far he has ignored geet there relation,n till how far he made her insecure about there relation

It wasn't like he didn't cared or he didn't heard what she said it was all about he didn't knew how to express his feelings how to share his thoughts n sadly he didn't even tried n that all today has taken away his wife his geet way from him n the lonliness that he once gifted geet is now a part of his life. He looked at the address n decided to go there himself n findout about geet,he was still hopefull that one day he ll manage to find geet n will bring her back,...


okh guys that's it for now

here is the Second part of kashmaksh n its pretty long more than 2000 words.

so the faster u all will give me lotts of likes n long coments i ll update the next part..

will b waiting for ur response,pls press like n comment if u like the update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update

I had a wish ... could u please add a scene where maan come to know the effect of his slap ... 5 yrs ago.
How cruelly he behaved ... I want to see his reaction when he read and recall that part ... please please if you can
Or else my whole life ... I will think about it


Now come to the update

Awesome idea about diary ... hmmm so Geet left him finally no counciling session here
He at least comes to know his mistakes here
At least he knew what is bothering to Geet
At leaset he knew ... now what he need to mend in their relation
At least he knew the reality of his mom..
Now he knew everything ... about Geet broken status


Lets see who is ceo... well my wild guess ... it could be yash ... and Geet was doing a job in his home from last 4 moths
Something like that ... let's see ... what is store for us ... don't mind ... I love my fav stories ... guessing. 😆
Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Beautiful part...


I liked the idea of geet's dairy...😉 There should be some or the other way for maan to know about her sufferings...😡



I really want maan to answer back his mother atleast once..😆



Do continue soon...😳
Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely and emotional part...we will come to know the value of some one when we loose them...same happen with maan ...still i hope he will get some clue about her...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update ... brought tears to my eyes not for maan but for geet ... maan deserve all of it ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsemm update good that you bought geet diary in this ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.i hate pammi..feel bad 4 maaneet
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
u r writing geet side is very emotional while readig it i cried
it is starting i get so emotional in coming updates what i will do
u r writing is so nice waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously you have described Geet's feeling perfectly as it shows this marriage was only hers and hers not maan's coz he was nowhere related to it...

how could she have felt every second seeing his so far yet so close and finally she left and he is shattered wanting to search but has nothing to find her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesme update
worried for geet..whr is she????
Hope maan vl find her soon...

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