New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome Amu...jus read both d parts...
geet jus suffered a lot in dis relation..good she left a dairy behind...atleast maan wld know how she was leavin a life in hell...nd sorrow...
fab emotional update...u penned it very beautifully..cont soon..
waitin for next part..

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

nice part..

geet left the place where she is staying n maan in search of her for last 6 months

now he realisedhow she stayed alone with every one ther in mansionn more of his mothers bickering..

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

i din get a chance 2 read Muskan's kashmakash... but i noe it wld hv been out of the world..

hoping to get a glimpse of Muskaan..tats y m sooo mch eager to read urs!!

nyc update!

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

its sad that when she was infront of him...trying to communicate with him...he was not paying attention...and now that she is gone...he is trying to locate her...!! geet had a diary...atleast that gave him a fair idea of her suffering...and longing...!! waiting to see what more is awaiting maan...

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

very painful . the pain which now maan is facing is nothing when compared to the pain which geet faced for 5 long years where no one is there for her to share her pain. exept the diary and the same diary making maan realise his mistakes what he did with geet.

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Emotional part..
maaan searching for geet
geet left

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: -indu-

Beautiful part...

I liked the idea of geet's dairy...😉 There should be some or the other way for maan to know about her sufferings...😡

I really want maan to answer back his mother atleast once..😆

Do continue soon...😳

thanx dear n that tym will also cum when maan will take a stand for geet but u ll have to wait for that

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: sdlife19
Seriously you have described Geet's feeling perfectly as it shows this marriage was only hers and hers not maan's coz he was nowhere related to it...

how could she have felt every second seeing his so far yet so close and finally she left and he is shattered wanting to search but has nothing to find her

thanxx alott m glad u liked it

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

finally i m here...sorry for late cmmnt ami

awesome updates ami...
really loved it...
love d way u write kasmakas in ur style... mujhe b lagta tha k maan ko b ehsaas hona chahiye geet ki suffering n pain ka...n use b ehsaas hona chahiye k usne apne n geet k relationship ko kitna ignore kiya h...n i love ur both updates
geet ki dairy wala idea tho suprb h...n i wish k maan ki mom ko b realized ho apni mistakes ka
eagerly waiting for nxt update