New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

wow lovely emotional heart winching update..te way my maan ki restless , his guilty making him to drown in his sins was lovely emotional..te way my maan heart crying wen he came to know tat his geet was living all alone for 4 months, was emotional..te way my maan searching his geet and hiring detc was lovely..te way my maan reading geet ki dairy and he feeling wat his geet was going thru as his wife and wat he did to her opps no wat he didt.. her each words pierecing his heart like a arrow was lovely emotional heart winching..so now my maan know where is his geet is, now his mission to win her back, but for tat he have to work hard..i love te update so much

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Ami maan se khub mehnt krwana geet ko search krne me

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: nikkirocksss
finally i m here...sorry for late cmmnt ami

awesome updates ami...
really loved it...
love d way u write kasmakas in ur style... mujhe b lagta tha k maan ko b ehsaas hona chahiye geet ki suffering n pain ka...n use b ehsaas hona chahiye k usne apne n geet k relationship ko kitna ignore kiya h...n i love ur both updates
geet ki dairy wala idea tho suprb h...n i wish k maan ki mom ko b realized ho apni mistakes ka
eagerly waiting for nxt update

thanx alott yarr.mera bas chale toh mai toh uss pammi ki band hi baja dun

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shalu1786

@shalu1786

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

nice emotional one

where is geet? what hapnd to her?

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aashi14

@aashi14

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

nice part,so geet left her job n everything n maan is searching fr her frm six mnths,i really want maan to realise his mistake of slapping geet.

waiting fr next

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Tabassum Fatima

@tabassum_tabbu

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: -Mitu-
Res

fab update i loved it the way u hv turned the story it's nic. geet ka pov n all nice work plz.cont.

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

awesome ud

maan now feel alone he can't share his pain with his mom

and knows how much his mom hate geet and his wife to suffer

becoz of his ignorance maan searching fr geet from 6months

maan found geet dairy and knows about her suffering

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Superbly written! Maan tryn 2 find Geet nt no luck! six months have passed! So he has her diary! Maan will nw knw hw much he hurt her n hw she suffered! Hate Pammi! Maan cannot share his pain with her! update soon

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Nikita

@nikkirockssss

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: amrinderdhami
thanx alott yarr.mera bas chale toh mai toh uss pammi ki band hi baja dun

same here ami wo pammi ne kaam hi aisa kiya h k uska band bajane ka mann hota h...i just hate her

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Awesome update...

Bahut achhi tarha se likha gaya hai...Geet ki dairy ka plan bahut hi achha hai...Geet ne jo Saha hai ab Maan ko sab pata chalega...aaj woh bhi wahi se gujar raha hai jaha ek din Geet khadi thi...aisa lagta hai ki hum padhte hi jaye aur aap bas likhti jaye...update kaha khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala...next update jaldi dena...plz

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