New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

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Mitu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Part 10

Ok pammi is still didn't understand well some tails
Never can be straight so leave them is only option
Lol more villan or I say so called civillized cs came into the picture
Still they had guts to leacture geet ... same cetgory as pammi
Geet did right .., they didn't deserve her
Family means who can hold us at our bad time
But they dig her hold more deep and left her in it to make sure
She naver come out in this life but when maan at last manged to get her bqck
Rhey are back with their own logic
Maan gave them nice lesson
So finally rano hot little bit lesson but still I can forgive pammi for once but not geet parents

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Last chapter + epilogue

So finally this fantasy journey came to its end and followed by a sweet epilogue
Oki loved how geet made a move to pull maan out of guilt of past sins
Maan was all lost in her but finally they moved
In epilogue Geet took advantage of maan softness and made him run on his toea heheh
Well some thing never changed and that is pammi the mummy heheh
Let it be who cared we had Dadimaa annie
Ok so finally maaneet baby arrived Armaan and once agai maanett lived in their nestle happy nd safe
Thia journey is always attract me ... and u did something which I always want a extened veraion of kashmakash

Congratulation for one more successful piece of work came to the end

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Mitu

@Mituag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Finally done with all comments part 8 to last chapter hope u like them
Thanks for beautiful piece of work

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

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Part 8

Ok so maan had started to think from geet point of view finally
I must say this man is putting extra effort to make everything perfect
I felt this maan as toddler like when he comes to know his mistake
He tried all ways to mend it ... to make everything ok between them
Geet to reciprocated his feeling which made me 👏 applause for geet
She forgave him ... just confession is left
He gifted saree to her

I am sorry I am late but festive season my fever ... hope u Dont mind as I didn't cut comments
When I gave them in bunch to ... I m posting separate comments for each chapter
I know ... being late is also disappointed writers...
But I told everyone that I will be very less active till Diwali</font>

thanx alott n its absolutely fine,i knw u were not keeping well so takecare of urself

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: -Mitu-
Finally done with all comments part 8 to last chapter hope u like them
Thanks for beautiful piece of work

thanx for all ur lovely comments 😊

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 10 years ago

#526

part 10
awesome...
poor Geet...
but Maan this time stoop up for her and supported her and also loved her so much that she forgot everything else...
Daadima too was very supportive...
seriously this Pammi still blaming Geet...
and her parents grrr...

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Deepa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#527

part 11
last part
awesome dear...
lovely...
finally Maan moved on from his past...
Geet made him to do so...

epilogue
nice...
lovely...
Geet got back everything from Maan...
and Pammi didnt change at all...
but she her kids and Maan and Daadima...

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

finally maan came to know about handa's act. thank god iss baar geet ne uske saath sab kuch share kiya. and now both are happy in their life. but still maan's gulty conscious is not allowing him to take next step. and this time geet made him come out of his guilt and in true sense both became wife and husband .

geet is now happy as maan gave her love and care which she always wished to have from maan. and now they both are even blessed with kid. and completed their family. loved dadima how she gave support to geet.

waiting for u new work dear