New Maaneet SS Kashmakash part1-11 & EPILOGUE @ PG84 updated

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Awesome. ..waiting for next update

I read Muskan's kashnakash..I liked it..now I want to read ur version. ..maza aayega

best luck. . 👏

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happydays30

@happydays30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Superb part
maan shud know more about his ignorance towards their relation
how geet suffered
waiting for next part

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

loved the update...
don't want Maan to get Geet easily...

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amrinderdhami

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: priya111111
jitna annie samajh payi geet ko utna bhi nahi samajh paya maan ne. wo khud apne hi zindagi jee rahe thay. aur ab jab sab kuch khoya tho ab usko uski galathi ki ehsaas hone laga hai. mere khayaal se maan's mother ko blame karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai. jab maan hi perfect hotha tho aisa kabhi nahi hotha.

thanx for the comment,mil plays a very imp role in ur life whn u live in a joint family,n had pammi not behave soo badly with her the things wouldn't have gone soo bad

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Mitu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Waiting waiting waiting so much
Update soon

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farzu3008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

very lovely update. as usual churail pammi. maan realising his mistakes. jewellery tamasha was indeed well placed in the story to make him realise geets sufferings and pain.

to make things more harsh was him overhearing annie and arjun talks.

so waiting to know how maan will amend his mistakes and convince geet that he has changed.

also waiting eagerly for geets entry

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change12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

awesome ... wonderful prespective from the maan's point of view ...love this update as much as i have loved the one written by muskaan's...

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

WOW!! that was beautiful... .maan in regret & his guilt is eating him up...hope geet's p.o.v. will also be there...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

hi thanks 4 da pm n emotional fab update! Beautifully written! Hate Pammi! Maan stops her frm giving Geet's stuff to Annie! Dadi confronts Maan! All that Geet has is frm her parenst! Maan n Pammi never bought her anything! Pammi only insulted n taunted Geet! Maan stunned! Bt Dadi shows him the truth! Maan shocked to kwn tht Geet lives al alone! Her parents have broken al relations with her! Maan reflects on wt Annie sed! She is happy tht Geet is leaving Maan! She deserves better! she will b happier! Maan shattered! he is feeling guilty! he has failed to keep her happy! update soon!