Awesome yar...brought tears to my eyes the way you described each character's emotions, the pain...loved it that now both could be friends...cuddling friends 😉
Yup...1st part is awesome. The way you use the words to emote is fantastic...Waiting for the next portion... Hope you post soon. I'll out by tomorrow. Another stretch assignment.😉
Aha! Just saw it...2nd potion is in too...fantastic.