Abhigya OS : Dewar-Bhabhi Duology 2 : Gentle Rogue [Completed]

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow, this was really amazing👏
thoroughly enjoyed it😃
armaan's story was so sad😭
but i loved how everyone got closure👍🏼

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful. Wonderfully written 👏. Thank you for sharing this one.

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

STANDING OVATION AND CLAPS'

Oh my word.

This was so moving , so funny at times especially like : "Is it an elephant" 🤣

And then so painful and then so lovely and beautiful!

Wonderful transitions and the way you have emoted !

Simply wonderful! Do write more !

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Isha

@tereliyex

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

LOVE IT ! Absolutely beautiful work

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Lkb79

@Lkb79

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

What an amazing, original story! Thank you for sharing it with all of us. 😊

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

It was so good!! So emotional.. Love Armaan.. He was so sure that Abhi will be the one Pragya falls in love with..
I just could not stop reading it again and again.. It was so so so beautifully written.. Loved every word of it..

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Ashlaika

@Ashlaika

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Absolutely beautiful Short story!!!!

From the very beginning to the end you held my attention :-).

I dont wanna admit it, but I got chocked up and emotional reading the 1st part with Armaan's letter.

Absolutely loved the depth of your characters and how sure and strong Pragya was and how compassionate and emphatic Abhi was.

I loved them and I was so happy they found love in each other.

Original story and beautifully crafted. Please do write more for us.

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Pramila

@blue_rose1605

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome... fall in love with your writing..

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@rbb1

Elite

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow what an amazing story, it was beautifully written I like how the story developed and they feel in love, I hope we get to read more stories from you