~Opurnota~ A tale of dangerous liasions (Ch 2 updated in Pg 7)

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: spicySugar..

what's there to not like about me? 😆

This is just a reiteration of the sentiment... hence we moved from TBP to D3. And I think we interacted in Paanch as well. 😆

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Well done. The writing style is truly commendable. You all are doing a fabulous job.
Thanks a lot for the PM.

Short comment. Fracture!

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kirti

@Kunta_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

RES , i will unres soon. thanks for pm

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

This misfit be the first story... Where the romance has not yet started but I'm reading it again and again!

I just love the story... It's is perfect!

Please update soon... I wanna just go on reading this.

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hi!!

I came across this story while going through the forums!! And i am so lucky that I did!! Actually the title is too catchy, its really difficult to ignore!!

I don't think I am even eligible to comment on what you have wrote!! As cliched as that might sound, but you are amazing!! I can write so many more adjectives but I'll not be able to tell you how I feel being a reader, reading this absolute master piece...

This is my first read about KR and SS together, infact I have never read anything on KR!! Kriya's character is so strong and so inspiring!!Strong headed women at that time are a treat to learn or read about!!

Swayam is way too out of his league!! I just love him, being rebellious and a fighter!! Plus the name you gave him- Mrityu Vahini!! OMG... It sounds so dangerous but righteously!!

Sharon is the delicate one and she is expected to be...

Rey's description too is really good...

All 4 characters are all so different to each other... well may be except Kriya and Swayam!!

After reading it a couple of times only, I came to write this comment!! And this is not even 1% of what I am feeling write now!!!

I don't know what's with me and stories with the backdrop of Kolkata!! They just mesmerise me, actually leaving me breathless!!

Please continue soon!! And please PM me!!

During that time maybe I'll read your other works... I am so sure they are as great as this one!!

P.S. Love the banners...!! Good Job to the one who did it!!

Edited by acceptng_lyf - 11 years ago

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agirlhasnoname.

@agirlhasnoname.

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Kishi Bai... :'(

Update Pleasshhh!! :'(

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Mahnaz Gul

@FrozenTeardrops

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Please update... Waiting desperately. ;(

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Update... 😒

you had promised you'd update sooner this time...

I can't wait to meet Kriyo again.

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-Spriha-

@-Spriha-

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Wow...wow...really amazing!
Such a grasping story...thnx for the pm..!! 😊

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Its amazing!!!
Kriyoshi is working wid swayam!
Sharon is against d whole ordeal of making ppl work for her!
N she replied d guy in a sickening sweet tone giving him a taste of his own medicine!
Was d whisperer swayam??? Was it? Was it? Hopefully it was!
Continue soon!!!
Just so u knw i m hooked wid d story so try n update really soon plz!