~Opurnota~ A tale of dangerous liasions (Ch 2 updated in Pg 7)

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hehehe! I knew it!

It'd be Kriyo Swayam would go to!

And I absolutely louuu everyone in this story except Rey. But ohhh well. I dont think you created him to be loved at first sight.

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I read, I commented, and I shall read again... 😎

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

forgive me, but I can't comment...I really don't wanna write some remarks on THIS MASTER-PIECE and make a fool out of myself.. So, yeah, I read it, and reading again..and will read again..untill the next one is updated...
loads of love..

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

nice.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

why do u have to write with so much perfection...???muje kitna sochna padta hai cmnt krne ke liye...plus the addiction of ur works...kishi i hate u for dat...
swayam as mrityu vahini...i so loved the title...
reyaansh...dazzling...luxury uske khoon me basi hai...i can actually imagine raja reyaansh raizada...nd entertainment nd all...m all set"rubbing my hands"...
kriyoshi bai...i love you...
i so knew it ki swayam...no no...mrityu vahini...kriyo ke pas hi jayega...
loving the story more nd more...

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alex754

@alex754

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Yaar from do u get ideas
Sooo goood
I loved swayam character very much very interesting
Swayam and kriya character are very intriguing
Love to see them more
Waiting for kriyaansh meet
Very excited about that
Thanks for pm
Pls update soon

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elizabeth paul

@enigma1997

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

aah! you finally updated ... for a while i had thought that you had forgot about this particular gem!and now this pleasant surprise !!!

well,abt the story ... i absolutely loved swayam.. his whole persona was intimidating and wild ... just amazing!!!and i loved the boldness and strength that kriyoshi rrepresented and the little of the kriyam bond that we got to see was great too.

about reyansh sahib,no offfence but my impression of him was of a spoilt brat ... but then i felt a little pity for him as he really seems to haave no idea about how the britishers are trying to turn him against his country ...but i rather think you made his charecter like that purposefully !

neways i am not able to get proper words to express my feelings.will comment again when i a, back to normal!

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

adjectives mil jaen tou mujhe loan kardena, Ahmed. i am outta them.

holy SHIT though! for the love of all that is noble and pure, why do you so lou putting me high on a pedastal when YOU are already wayyy too good at handling words than i could ever be?! this is...stupendous! truly! such class imagination and the description of everything is just...waah waah waaah!!

Ahmed, i like the way you work!!

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: spicySugar..
adjectives mil jaen tou mujhe loan kardena, Ahmed. i am outta them.

holy SHIT though! for the love of all that is noble and pure, why do you so lou putting me high on a pedastal when YOU are already wayyy too good at handling words than i could ever be?! this is...stupendous! truly! such class imagination and the description of everything is just...waah waah waaah!!

Ahmed, i like the way you work!!

ALLAH TAUBA...TU KAHAN SE BHATKI YAHAN?? 😲 😲