~Opurnota~ A tale of dangerous liasions (Ch 2 updated in Pg 7)

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: spicySugar..
adjectives mil jaen tou mujhe loan kardena, Ahmed. i am outta them.

holy SHIT though! for the love of all that is noble and pure, why do you so lou putting me high on a pedastal when YOU are already wayyy too good at handling words than i could ever be?! this is...stupendous! truly! such class imagination and the description of everything is just...waah waah waaah!!

Ahmed, i like the way you work!!

I stared at the PC for a good five minutes trying to work out if it is really you or is my brain playing tricks on me... It happens often when my wistful self start conjuring images but no, This is you. Until some one hacked into your account or an alien hijacked your body. Sorry, I am rambling .I tend to ramble when I get too excited.
*tries to calm down*
*takes deep breaths*

Okay...I am good. About the pedestal part, that is because you deserve one. As to the why...You really want me to start praising you in my post???? Okay, fine. Here goes. I write stories. But I have to describe emotions and scenarios and sometimes it encompasses a paragraph or two.I spoonfeed emotions to my readers. Because I am not confident that I am good enough or talented enough to write lines that will say it all. I have yet not mastered that art . You however bowl me over with your subtlety, tact and portrayal of emotions. Each line says a story of its own.

Okay, enough now...I can go on and on but mera post he. Hmphf!!
You really liked it??? I am treating it as an independent fiction. This is what I was talking about when I asked you if you only read fanfictions...
Batool!!!! Tujhe mai bataa nahi sakti mere dil ka haal... Thank you for commenting...

I envy you tat line...It only sound good wen you say it. I have to come up with a tagline of my own. But honestly, I have loved the way you work ,Batool.
See, not so cool😕

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ..DamonCrazy..

ALLAH TAUBA...TU KAHAN SE BHATKI YAHAN?? 😲 😲

Becaaauuuse she loves me...*jeebh dikhaofies to shaz*

We are a happy loving bunch of biatches, na???

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: SanskritiS
nice one
beautiful
I cant comment more

Thank you so much dear.❤️ You can't comment more??? I was hoping you would . Keep reading...😊

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

aaah...apni post mein MERI inni saari tareef? 😳 keep up doing such stuff and I might actually fall for you..

since you don't particularly like my humility, I won't go about repeating the usual chant of, "but I am not that good~~" so you are spared of that. but fact hai, reading good fiction makes me want to write more and this tou has me itching to write chapter upon chapters of Rewrite but this stupid blank monitor is like a zaalim samaaj between me and my FF :'(

As for this particular piece of fiction..since it's me and my khurafati dimag, I am sooo shipping Swayam and Kriya!! the Assasin duo. one is literal and the other is figurative. gimme gimme gimmeee!! i can not shake the image of him standing outsidr her door, all tall and bleeding with his dark hair and her in her saree, a bit disheveled but still the stunning beauty..a little scared at his appearance, a little amused as well. their coded conversations and knowing looks and deep care masked with nonchalant demeanor...raat ka andhera and first aid ki proximity.

umm yumm yummm...am I drooling? guess i am.

Rey is a bit blah..I am not feeling Sharon much as well. arey ship these two to England and give me the sexy adventures of the Assasin Duo. gimme gimme gimmeee!!!

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: spicySugar..
aaah...apni post mein MERI inni saari tareef? 😳 keep up doing such stuff and I might actually fall for you..

since you don't particularly like my humility, I won't go about repeating the usual chant of, "but I am not that good~~" so you are spared of that. but fact hai, reading good fiction makes me want to write more and this tou has me itching to write chapter upon chapters of Rewrite but this stupid blank monitor is like a zaalim samaaj between me and my FF :'(

As for this particular piece of fiction..since it's me and my khurafati dimag, I am sooo shipping Swayam and Kriya!! the Assasin duo. one is literal and the other is figurative. gimme gimme gimmeee!! i can not shake the image of him standing outsidr her door, all tall and bleeding with his dark hair and her in her saree, a bit disheveled but still the stunning beauty..a little scared at his appearance, a little amused as well. their coded conversations and knowing looks and deep care masked with nonchalant demeanor...raat ka andhera and first aid ki proximity.

umm yumm yummm...am I drooling? guess i am.

Rey is a bit blah..I am not feeling Sharon much as well. arey ship these two to England and give me the sexy adventures of the Assasin Duo. gimme gimme gimmeee!!!

Sexy adventures of KriYam are in demand Kishi. You know what to do ☺️

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Ahha... I like Maisy so much... 😳

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Rini

@-bLEu98-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Mystique.Kishi

Me too likes men in dhuti. Especially when those men do moonwalks in dhuti. 😆Deadly Swayam has been on my mind since I wrote the os "Lost" for Kash. It was written with him in mind.

Kriyam...You know what is in store na??? Hahaha...I have discovered something . I really like to see you beg. *tharki smirk*

KriYam KriYam KriYam... they are like a dream... and yes I know... 😃

And yeah, for them, just for them, I'll give you what you like... 🤔 You'll see me begging more often.

And Bangali purush moonwalking in dhuti is sexayy... 😳 especially if the man has floppy hair and profound eyes.

And this is for you... 😉

Edited by -bLEu98- - 11 years ago

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

mrityu vahini...
I just loved it...
rey as raja...wowww...
swayam as swadeshi...awesome...
update soon..
thanks 4 d pm

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elizabeth paul

@enigma1997

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Mystique.Kishi

I am hoping you keep your word and come back and comment. I am gonna hold you to that. Muuuaaahhh!!!! Thanks for everything you wrote though.

i came back!!! :D

oh my sweetie -cutie pie(since you called me doll i am going to go all diabetic on you coz you need some sugar in your life ...just kidding i like your dark angty stuff way more than sweet nothings!),i am really happy had i had a part ,however little in inspiring you to update this ff.and what an update 😳... lele tu meri chumma lele !

let me begin with the leading man of my life-swayam.i had assumed that he would be portrayed just like he was in the series ... a cute passionate gentleman with the most purest of feelings towards sharon.. and as you know i had made a guess abt him being the leader of a rebel group... but wat i saw in ur update shocked me-it was the avatar of swayam i have always been fascinated by but which has never beeen explored.i expected river loverboy and i get this mystic being ...almost supernatural ,both intimidating and magnetic at the same time😳...i definitely would like to see howw sharon would react to the instant attraction- bordering -on- obsession that the vehicle of death has for her!(one request dear ...i wanna see a lot of passion filled tashan between them ... i love how mesmerisingly all the values and ideals of bot kr and ss collide-dangerous liasons indeed!)

abt rey raizada(one doubt is kriyoshis full name kriyoshi kumari gupta???😃)... others in this forum can explain abt him way better than i ever can but i would love to see how his charecter progresses and his clashes against kriya !and all your talk abt shades reminded me of my artisitic best friend who would prraise all the prussians and azures and periwinkles and what not and i would be deadpanning -its blue!but darling i get ur point ... its all in the layers!

i am not foolish enough to make further predictions ... the only guess i can safely ,make is that our polo lover(btw i am a polo lover too -the tofee not the sport) wont be getting a vacation in south of france any time soon😉...

bye for now dear and i hope this comment was long enough to make you update as soon as possible ... i would loose all faith in my ablilities if you dont!😃

ps: thnks for all chummas :D