~Opurnota~ A tale of dangerous liasions (Ch 2 updated in Pg 7) - Page 6

Originally posted by: -bLEu98-

OMGGG...

reading it right away!

Finally kardi tune update! 😡

EDIT

I don't like this! *stomps*

This frightened me

I don't like how I cannot read the goddamn thing at once!

Why can't you just write all the chapters and relieve me.

*relieved sigh* Well, you know na how much I love teasing you??? *bites lips*

Now I'll have to wait for another update... and I CAN'T! 😒

Awww...how about this, as soon as I get four pages worth of comments and the ones who have resed unres their comments , I will give you the new chapter

Okay I love Swayam! I'm so glad he is a swadesi! Did I tell you that in the last chapter Swayam was reminding me of Sabyasachi- the Uttam Kumar film. 😛 He is a revolutionary, and a deadly one at that... Mrityu Vahini!

Whoa! And his swagger... ahh.. does he wear dhoti-kurta? Please say yes. 😆 I have a thing for Bengali men in dhuti... 😳

Me too likes men in dhuti. Especially when those men do moonwalks in dhuti. 😆Deadly Swayam has been on my mind since I wrote the os "Lost" for Kash. It was written with him in mind.

And like I said earlier, this is an epic. It is grand.

Reyansh...

The man is a synonym for luxury, just how I like it.

I love the little details of his character, which though small, are crucial.

That one line: 'he was left broken-hearted, but certainly not broke' I like it.

I thought the line will sound a bit too nonchalant and will make him seem like a brat but I am so happy it worked for you. And to be honest, he is bit of a brat.

Reyansh is a dazzler- he always was, and his being larger than life is the only way to do justice to his character I think. You nailed it there. 👍🏼

I can't imagine him any oter way. But anki shona writes nerd Rey brilliantly. I however can't take such risks.

And let me say this- I was sure Swayam would go to Kriya. I knew it.

I am soo predictable

The perfect place to seek shelter is Kriyoshi's abode.

Eeep! Okay I'm eeping on KriYam but I love them so friggin much!

She was not ready to let him die yet! 😎

And lastly, have mercy on me and please update the damn thing sooner this time!

-Rini ❤️

Kriyam...You know what is in store na??? Hahaha...I have discovered something . I really like to see you beg. *tharki smirk*

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Hehehe! I knew it!

It'd be Kriyo Swayam would go to!

And I absolutely louuu everyone in this story except Rey. But ohhh well. I dont think you created him to be loved at first sight.

Originally posted by: anki_22

forgive me, but I can't comment...I really don't wanna write some remarks on THIS MASTER-PIECE and make a fool out of myself.. So, yeah, I read it, and reading again..and will read again..untill the next one is updated...
loads of love..

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

why do u have to write with so much perfection...???muje kitna sochna padta hai cmnt krne ke liye...plus the addiction of ur works...kishi i hate u for dat...

No , you love me. 😛 And achcha he naa, thinking is good and it helps in the proper cultivation of one's imagination. Ahhh!!!!! Thank you!!! Thank you!!! Thank you !!!!
swayam as mrityu vahini...i so loved the title...

I love the title as well. Kuch to sai niklaa dimaag se
reyaansh...dazzling...luxury uske khoon me basi hai...i can actually imagine raja reyaansh raizada...nd entertainment nd all...m all set"rubbing my hands"...
kriyoshi bai...i love you...
i so knew it ki swayam...no no...mrityu vahini...kriyo ke pas hi jayega...
loving the story more nd more...

Originally posted by: alex754

Yaar from do u get ideas

Well, I have a wonderful bunch of girls who function as my personal idea generators. But shshshsh...don't tell anyone.
Sooo goood
I loved swayam character very much very interesting
Swayam and kriya character are very intriguing
Love to see them more

You will see them a lot more if I have my way. But the thing is doll, if you will like seeing them...
Waiting for kriyaansh meet
Very excited about that

I am excited as well but that will probably have to wait till I properly establish all the characters.
Thanks for pm
Pls update soon

Originally posted by: KReyAS

nyc updtd

Originally posted by: ..DamonCrazy..

ALLAH TAUBA...TU KAHAN SE BHATKI YAHAN?? 😲 😲

Originally posted by: enigma1997

aah! you finally updated ... for a while i had thought that you had forgot about this particular gem!and now this pleasant surprise !!!

Doll!!!! I was hoping you would comment and I am really glad that you did not disappoint.😛 And how can I forget this piece??? I have a mob of ferocious (wonderful) ladies who for some reason like to read this and I really don't want to be at the recieving end of their wrath. And your pm was also thorougly encouraging. Muuaaahh!!!!

well,abt the story ... i absolutely loved swayam.. his whole persona was intimidating and wild ... just amazing!!!and i loved the boldness and strength that kriyoshi represented and the little of the kriyam bond that we got to see was great too.

I love my Swayam as well. I might ave a teeny weeny crush on my Swayam.. He is awesome , is he not??? About Kriyoshi, well you know how much I love her. Meri heroine he woh. Kriyam ...yea, I love them as well and I intend to explore them a lot more in my fiction.

about reyansh sahib,no offfence but my impression of him was of a spoilt brat ... but then i felt a little pity for him as he really seems to haave no idea about how the britishers are trying to turn him against his country ...but i rather think you made his charecter like that purposefully !

Yes. Yes, I did. I firmly believe in character developement. A story should involve growt of characters to not make it stagnant. And Rey, he is a brat but no one is single dimensional in this world. Shades..It is all about shades

neways i am not able to get proper words to express my feelings.will comment again when i a, back to normal!