tum sirf meri ho-part 25 pg 67

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Posted: 18 years ago
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my first ff as i dint get much reply i stopped it...

this my next ff thinking i will get good repliess to write...

it will be called tum sirf meri ho..

this ff starts when kasturi agrees for the wedding due to her parent's pressure and was getting ready in her room the marriage was too take place in a grand hotel.she was lost in her thought and sad songs were played in backround and imaginess robbie in the dulha dress and both were getting married and imagines it and sees it in the mirror but then she get rememberss it is only a dream and soon she will be another person's wife.her friends and sisters leave saying abhi ayii and she was all alone and was correcting her earing when suddenly robbie aapear from back... and she says it is only my imagination.. ye sach nahi haii chali javoon yahan se robbie and closes her eyess and robbies says par yahi haqqeeqat hai and she open her eyes and sees him and tears were already falling down .. and when he realizes some one may come when she was about to say he just put a cloth over her mouth and nose and she faintss and he lifts her and goes away carrying her... and without knowing to anyone she climbs down in the back way of hotel and goes to his car and places kasturi in the seat and goes and starts to drive and goes away...

kaise laga???pls comment.. then only i will be able to think to continue or not...

part 1-pg 1

part2-pg2

part3-pg 3

part4-pg6

part5-pg8

part6-pg11

part7-pg13

part8-pg15

part9-pg19

part10-pg22

part11-pg25

part12-pg29

part13-pg30

part14-pg35

part15-pg38

part16-pg41

part17-pg43

part18-pg45

part19-pg47

part20-pg48

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ek bi reply nahi... kyun itni bhuri thee meri ff...
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ek bi reply nahi... kyun itni bhuri thee meri ff...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, the beginning sounds really nicee! 😳 👏

Please continue, I'd love to red the rest. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good one Davia389!

I am all for keeping RK together! Please write more!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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2 replies not bad..

preview:pandit ask to bring down the dulhan.... and kasturi was not there all get shocked.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesom davia plz continue ..atleast in ur ff RK r 2gether.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great begining..is he actually kidnapping her.. 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice FF Davia389, 👏 👏 robbie kidnapp kasturi..wow
please continue... don't stop like old FF.
i also waiting for your old FF..
Edited by pop77 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pop77

nice FF Davia389, 👏 👏 robbie kidnapp kasturi..wow
please continue... don't stop like old FF.
i also waiting for your old FF..

i agree even i m waitin 4 d old one...

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