tum sirf meri ho-part 25 pg 67 - Page 4

I loved the 3rd part. Even though it might not happen in this show, it is nice to see Rk togetther.

Loving it.......more i want more.....OMG they actually got marrried......excited.......plz continue...waiting despertly

aila.i m so happy dat they are married.yipeeeee.waiting eagerly. 😳

davia 👏
excellent

Thanks for marrying off RK. hope creative team will read this and do something similar to this 😉
robbie kidnapping and marrying her awesome

you did what we all wanted but still RK are fighting, thats ok they will be fine.

the best part was having "preview" and "promos"
🤣
waiting for the next part.

thnks for all ur support and repliess... u all made me happy by replying .... which was not there for my first ff.. but i am soo hapy for this.. next part soon .

let me give ur all a promo to cheer-up more..

promo:press comes to roobbie's house.. devika get shocked..

hopeing u all will support me to write more.. ideas are welcomed..

davia

Originally posted by: davia389

promo:press comes to roobbie's house.. devika get shocked..

Even you promos are as exiting as the serial promos
way too go 👏

gr888 going davia
i m very enjoying
plz do cont soon

thnks for all ur replies here is the next part expecting comments from readers like for the previous part...

ideas are welcome and sorry for mistake..

4.she says pls muje chodiye mein khud chalijavoongi.. he was like yaa ofcourse.. u shd go alone to ur house and in ur life.. as u have become my wife but u wont be really.. as I want u to suffer as I am … because of ur dhoka…. Dhoka ??meine aapko dhoka diya??????balki aapne muje dhoka diya hai……he was like meine tumein dhoka diya.. how mean u are… u r the same typical middle class same old kasturi.. jo chand paison keliye kuch bhi kar sakti ho.. for examples the 15 lakh … kasturi was shocked… .. and was like she sayss aap muje galat samaj rahe hain kyunki aap sacchayi nahi jante.. baat ye… he stopss her by saying I don't want to hear ur lie and I am not going to believe u.. as I have seen the proof with my own eyes.. and after today no one believe u… that what I want… because I hate u as u betrayed me… kasturi says the truth will come out one day and u will suffer.. and he grins let me see who will suffer .. and then she turns and goes back to her house … she walks and sees no taxi was coming soo she runs walk and goes fast … to tell them the truth…

in the house everyone was very angry.. excspecially kasturi's father and her dadaji.. alka was adding ghee to the aagg… and was blabbering and saying wrong on kasturi.. raunak was trying to find out where she was and was searching in the car with kasturi's brothers and was not able to find.. kasturi then sees a car coming and ask lift a women was driving and she says can u drop me .. she accepts and leave to her home.. she comes to her home.. and all were shocked as alka sees her first.. kasturi was about to step forward and her father sayss wahii rook javoo… she was like bauji… woo he sayss aaj tumen muje sabke saamne sar juka diya by going away from the mandap… alka notices her mangalsutr and sindoor .. and says kasturii puttar ye kya tune shaadi karlii kisi aur se.. and pointes towards her mangalsutr.. that make her more worry.. and she triess to say pls meri baat to suniyee .. alka stops there and taunts her.. her dadji comes and asks tumne aise kyun kiya … ???? pehle because of u we coudnt show our face in the society and now because of u we ashamed that ur born in this house alka was enjoying it and was very happy.. dadaji sayss aaj se tum hamareliye margayi ho…. She says meri baat to suniye.. ab bhi kuch sunna baki rahgaya????..pls meri baat to suniye.. but alka thinks noo I shd stop her and starts to speak il.. kasturi mom was crying and was helpless..

alka sayss kasturi puttar pehle ye bataoo kii tumne shadi kiske saath ki?... itna sab kuch hone ke bavojoot raunak tumari saath shaadi karnekeliye taiyar taa phirs kiske saath.. ..haan aur ye ms kiske naam ka hai.. woo chachi.. mein batatahoon Robbie comes from behind raunak coming on other side hears it… come kasturi darling itna kya sharam aan putting hands around her and sayss tell them that we got married.. afterall we both love eachother.. kasturi was shocked.. and Robbie was smiling.. .. and says darling itni der lagarahe hoo maiyka se vida hokar aane meinn.. I will wait outside for u.. waise we have got married just before sometime and I cant wait u see.. and sayss woo kya haiina I and her were in soo much love that we decided to move one.. I just sked her to come back to me.. she came too me all running from her mandap.. this make all get shocked.. and he leaves smiling devilish saying jaldi aan.. and goes.. kasturi mom come infront of her and gives a tight slap on her face and she says maa she slapps more all were shocked as she have not even raised her voice against anyone and today.. she was slaaping her.. she says margayi teri maa.. itna hone ke bavojoot u married him she was trying to speak but sh e slaps again.. and takes her hand and drags her opout and throws away from her house saying aajse hum sab tumhariliye margaye hain aur tum hamareliye and closes the house all were shocked.. ..

kasturi was crying… raunak who was seeing it goes away when robbies says he married her …. Kasturi goees and bang the door to open but it was no use as kasturi mom says no one will ope the door and she is dead to us.. and goes to her room… she bands and feel down saying darwaza koliye maa .meri baat to suniye.. .. and slowy gets up and goes out and when she comes out of the gate she hears robbies saying hi dear.. kahan ja rahi ho..she turns and he was sitting over the car engine having bear bottle in his handle and smiling.. kya hua.. they kicked u out of the house.. bahut dard horaha hai… even it was like that to me.. and have a nice time.. if u want I will drp u were u want to go.. she just goes away.. and keeps on walking walking and suddenly she faints in the road.. few min later she open her eyes to see herself in a room and gets shocked..

preview:robbie's father hears kasturi conversation with divya..

promo:press arrival and devika get shocked as she was out of town due to some reason..

davia

davia389,

Awesome!!! Too good!!! 👏 👏 👏.

I read the whole part in one breath!!! Its amazing how well you have written the dialogues. It feels Kasturi, Robbie, Alka chachi - all of them would have behaved exactly as you are saying. Amazing!!!!

Hayyeeeee, How I wish you were the creative director for Kasturi!!!

Cannot wait for the rest. Please post ASAP 😊.

really nice davia...i just read all four parts of your fanfic and it is really very good. pls continue soon and also pls try to make it longer(if u have time).