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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel0912

awesm start plss contt soon and PM me



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is ka time kab aayega madam?



Bus aa gaya samjho.šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: XoxowpdXoxo

di plz update this one also soon



Bus karne jaa rhi hoon. 😊 😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Pls cont with the fic



yes dear, going to do that

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thanks so much, wish u belated Happy Holi. šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Sorry guys for being so late.šŸ¤” šŸ¤” I know it has been more than a year and most of you have forgotten about this FF. šŸ˜› šŸ˜› Don't worry just read the Prologue on pg 1 and you will get the info about the FF as only prologue is updated till now, thanks to my greatness. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

So not taking much time, just enjoy the part one.šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰








"Mujhe to laga shayad tum nahi aaoge."


Rajveer smiled, "So I made u shocked?"


"Kuch had tak." And as soon as he finished. Sheetal jee and Kria rushed to him, " Bhaiya.." she hugged him. "I am so happy aap aa gaye."


Rajveer looked at Sheetal jee and touched her feet as usual, "happy anniversary, kaise hain aap?"


Sheetal smiled and lovingly strolled his hair, "Theek hoon aur tum se bahut naraj hoon."


Rajveer smiled and said, "Pata hai mujhe aap jyada der tak naraj hi nahi reh sakti hum se."


"Hum se matlab?" Sheetal asked.


Rajveer made a correction to what he said, "I mean mujh se." It came out of his mouth just like that as it was their habit but now the things have been changed.


Sheetal looked at him and said, "Mujhe pata hai abhi bhi dil se tum Naina k saath hi ho chahe kuch bhi kaho."


"Are haan mai to batana hi bhool gayi aap ko bhaiya Naina di bhi aa gayi aur ab aap."


Raj was surprised to here it. His eyes started searching for her. She was trying her best to hide in the crowd when Kria saw her and pulled her, "Are di vahan kya chup rahi ho yahan aaiye na." and this was the time for which Naina was dreading came. They were standing opposite to each other, both of them had a strange feeling in their hearts and it made them uncomfortable. They were unable to look at each other.

Jab saamne tum aa jaate ho..

Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai...

Kuch mil jaata hai, kuch kho jaata hai

Kya jaaniye kya ho jaata hai...

K D sensed the awkward between them situation so to divert the attention of people he said, " Are tum log baad me bhi mil sakte ho na, pehle cake cut karte hain. Meri pyaari beti ko abhi tak cake nahi mila hai aur mujhe lagta hai agar jyada wait karna pada to jaane kya hoga?" everyone looked at him.


Kria yelled, "Haan dad u should first cut the cake."


They all assembled around the cake trolley and first K D and Sheetal blown off the candles than cut the cake, whole hall echoed with loud sound of clapping and they feed the first piece to their daughter Kria and than to Rajveer and Naina. Raj was seeing Naina intently and when she found him gazing him, her eyes got froze for a moment.


"Happy anniversary mom and dad," and she gave them a hug once again. "To ab hai aap k liye ek chota sa surprise."


Soon all the lights got dimmed and v can see a spot light over a gal wearing a pink dress on the stage and a boy of age as same near about the gal standing at other corner of the stage.

(Here is the link of the dance of you tube dance video enjoy it)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EBpS-fVPUUo

All of them could see a sizzling gal dancing perfectly with a rhythm of beats. The song was enough romantic and sweet to make them gaga over these two.

Sajde me yu hi jhukta hoonn...

Tum pe hi aa k rukta hoon

Kya ye sab ko hota hai...

This song brought back the memory of the two people standing their trying to fight with their emotions. They were miles apart now and don't want to think about the whole past almost 5 years, two year of togetherness and now three years after being parted. Their eyes didn't leave each other for a single moment since when they met in the party. The moment when they first met and all these moments they spent together either in love or in quarrel.


Humko kya lena hai sab se

Tum se hi sab baatein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri duvaan


That boy was just perfect with his moves and all the lifts with Kria, and it seemed that they share a great chemistry more than being dance partners. For the first time K D and Sheetal have seen that boy but still it gave them a feeling that may be there is something hidden from them. The sizzling chemistry itself told volumes. Everyone could enjoy the performances except those two souls who were mile apart from each other mentally but still together.


Raj thought:- Tum nahi badali Naina, par kuch missing hai.'


Khuda Jaane ki mai fida hoon

Khuda jaane maim it gaya..

Khuda jaane k kyoun hua hai

Ki ban gaye ho tum mere khuda


Naina's thoughts:- Tum bhi kahan badle Rajveer, par aaj bahut antar aa gaya hai situations me. Kabhi socha nahi tha ki tum zindagi k us mod par mujhe chod k jaaoge jab mujhe tumhari sab se jyada jaroorat thi.'


Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Kadam Ke
Main Nishanon Pe
Chalun Rukun Ishaare Pe
Tu Kahe To Khwabon Ka Bana Ke
Main Bahana Sa
Mila Karun Sirhaane Pe


Both were engrossed in each other's eyes. Totally engrossed in past.


"Naina..., kahan ho tum?"


"Kya hua Raj?"


"Yahan aao na."


As she entered in their room she could see the whole room filled with candles and with sweet jasmine fragrance. She could here the tune of a song.


Ho Tum Pe Dil Ki Baatein Seekhi
Tum Se Hi Yeh Raahein Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Main To Jee Gaaya



"Raj ...kahan ho tum?" and she found him behind her. Holding her hands in his he made her dance to the tune of same music and song. One of their favorite songs.


Yaad hai na Naina ye humara fav song hua karta tha?' His eyes said.


Sab yaad hai mujhe Raj kuch bhooli nahi hoon na bhool sakti hoon.' Her eyes responded.


Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda


The couple Kria and Reyaansh her friend were dancing as if no tomorrow. They were so romantic and passionate. The intense look in their eyes made it another story. Anyone who was present in that room can sense something grewing up between them just because of their intimate dance. Bus parents can always realize some things in a better way and exactly same thing was happening with Sheetal who was noticing some changes in Kria.


"Tumhe lag raha hai KD ki humari beti bus dance kar rahi hai?"


KD smiled at his wifey's question, "aap kya poochna chahte hain?"


"Mai vahi poochna chahti hoon jo aap samajh rahe hain KD."


"Sheetal, aap apni beti pe shak kar rahi hain?"


"Nahi KD, ye shak nahi hai. Mai janana chahti hoon ki itne badi ho gayi hai apni beti ki ho sakta hai us ki zindagi me bhi koi aa gaya ho."


Their entwine fingers were expressing the feeling as if they won't be separate ever. Every time he spin her he took her in his arms back safely as if he wanted to protect her from the whole world.


Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum
Panahon Mein
Ke Daar Hai Tum Ko Kha Doonga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko
Na Nazar Laga
Ke Daar Hai Mein To Ro Doonga

"Raj, he is just a friend na?"


"Mujhe to nahi laga." He said making a face.


"Oho aisa kuch nahi hai. Actually we met after a long time almost after six years when we were in college so both of us were excited to meet each other." She said happily.


"Pata nahi," and he pulled her possiselvely in circle of his arms, "par ek baat acchi tarah se samajh lo Naina ki I will and I can never share you with anyone and I will never let you go away from me." And he captured her lips for a passionate kiss.


O Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se
Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum Se
Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua


"I promise you too that I will never leave you alone and will always be with you." She promised him after the kiss broke.


Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda


"Raj tum mujh pe shak kar rahe ho?"


"Shak hi nahi proof bhi hain mere pass."


She was shocked, "Kaise proof?"


He gave her an angry look, "Sharm aani chahiye tum ko Naina ki mujhe is case me harane k liye tum ne itne ghatiya tactics use kiye."


Naina also fumed, "Kyoun aani chahiye mujhe sharm? Kia kya hai maine? Bus ek begunaah ko saza se bachane k liye aur insaaf dilane k liye ye ladai ladi hai."


"Is tareeke se?"


"Mera tareeka bhale hi thoda galat kyoun na ho Raj par mai aur mere irade galat nahi the."


"Tum ne ek baar bhi meri aur mere parivaar ki izzat k bare me nahi socha?"


"Tab tumhari aur tumhare parivaar ki izzat nahi jati jab un ka beta aise logon ka saath de raha hai jo murderer and rapist hain?"


"Nainaaa", he screamed and was about to slap her when he stopped him.

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai


"Raj tum ko jalan hone lagi hai mujh se."


"Oh come on Naina, mujhe tum se uncomfortable and jalne ki jaroorat nahi hai tum se." he gave a scarstic reply.


"You are jealous, tabhi tum mere saath itna rudely behave kar rahe ho."


"Nops, it's not because of that. It's because of your own behavior."


"Mai kab se koshish kar rahi hoon ki humare beech sab theek ho jaye par tum to lag raha hai jaise mind set kar k hi baithe ho ki meri koshishon ka response nahi doge."


"Jab mai tum ko samjhana chahta tha ki is case se hat jao tab tum maani?"


"Oh to it's all because of that case." Naina was amused.


Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua


"Mai ghar chod k jaa rahi hoon Raj."


"Jahan jana hai jao, I don't care."


"Jaa rahi hoon phir vapas na aane k liye."


"Accha hai mujhe sukoon ki zindagi naseeb hogi."


"Tumhari is sukoon ki zindagi me ek din itna akelapan aa jayega ki tumhe ehsas hi nahi ho payega ki tum ne kya khoya hai?"


Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai


"Ye tune kya kia Raj?"He was silent. "Tumhare jaise samajhdaar insaan se mujhe ye umeed nahi thi."


"I think sir hum dono k liye yahi theek tha."


KD was shocked to listen this, "Theek tha ye?"


"What the hell Raj? Tum ko apna ye foolish decision sahi lag raha hai?"


"Ho sakta hai sir aap ko aaj mera decision foolish lag raha ho but jaldi hi aap ko realize hoga ki mera decision sahi hai. Ek saath reh kar ek doosre ki zindagi ki narak banana se better hai ki alag ho jaayein hum."


"Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki aise baatein tum keh rahe ho Raj? Vo insaan jo Naina se itna pyaar karta hai vo aise kaise keh sakta hai?"


"A correction here sir, karta hai na karta tha." He said with scarsm clear in his voice.


Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda


"Bahut samjhaya sab ne mujhe par pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe? Tumhare jaane k baad pata nahi kab tak mai apne ego me jeeta raha. Par Naina tum ne bhi to kabhi mud k nahi dekha. Tum abhi bhi vaise bhi ho stubborn and rigid."


"Kaise dekhti Raj? Tum ne mere liye koi option bhi nahi choda tha. Tum ne mujhe jo dard aur takleef de hai shayad is k liye mai tum ko kabhi maaf bhi nahi kar paaongi. Mere jaane k baad tum ne dubara shadi kar k ye bhi ehsas kara diya ki tumhari zindagi me meri koi jagah nahi hai ab."


And with their thought the romantic and passionate dance also ended when their thought was broken by the sound of loud claps in the hall. They came out of the terrace of their imaginations. Everyone around them was praising the dance of the hot couple except these two who were busy in whole dance sequence into each other's thoughts.


"Naina di how was my dance?" an excited Kria asked to Naina.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

KD is a bit surprised but Sheetal and Kria are very happy to see him here!!!!šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Old habits die hard and Raj still says hum out of habit referring to himself and Naina!!!!šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰

Finally Raj and Naina came face to face but they are feeling awkward!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and apt for this situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

KD smartly diverted the attention to the cake cutting!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and suits both the pairs!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The dance is sizzling and wonderful and it made Raj and Naina think of the past!!!!

The flashback was so romantic with the decorated room and their dance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Seeing their daughter's chemistry with her friend, Sheetal is definitely smelling a rat and telling her suspicions to KD!!!!šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj was so egoist and his rude behaviour and jealousy killed their relationship!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

He didn't want Naina to get ahead in her life and didn't even care when she left his house!!!!šŸ˜’ šŸ˜’ šŸ˜’ šŸ˜’ šŸ˜’ šŸ˜’ 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

KD ne kitna samjhnane ki koshish ki magar Raj toh sunne ko hi taiyaar nahi tha!!!!šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼ šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼ šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼ šŸ‘ŽšŸ¼

In sab ke baad bhi Raj sochta hai ke Naina ne mud ke kyun nahi dekha!!!!šŸ¤” šŸ¤” šŸ¤” šŸ¤”

He has not changed at all aur aaj bhi yeh manna nahi chahta that he was wrong!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

But what is this that Raj had got married again??😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj and Naina were lost in each other's eyes and their thoughts during the whole dance!!!!

Let's see how Naina manages to talk her way out as Kria is now asking how was her dance!!!!šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜› šŸ˜›



Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey wat a surprise amzing thanks for pm and lovely update why raj is married ????
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome
superb
itni dino bad update
suprise krdia
lovely update
keep it up
cont. soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow wat a surprise!!
Nice part.
Want u to complete this too. along with others.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey I am super happy ki chalo tujhe is FF ki yaad to aayi varna to mujhe lagne laga tha ki tu is k baare me bhool hi gayi jab ki is ki start itne mast hue thi. 😊 Nice part.šŸ‘ Ye song to mujhe kaafi pasand hai.😃 I liked the perfect mixture of past and present in this part.šŸ‘šŸ¼ Many things are hidden and confusing but I know soon these confusions will be cleared.šŸ˜‰ You took your fav pair KriYaansh in this FF, great.šŸ˜† The thing which shocked me the most was news about Raj's marriage!!!!! 😲 How's that possible? šŸ˜• Pls do clear it soon.šŸ˜›
Pls now on update it regularly.

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