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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: -Keerthi-
U r an evil u know tat.?
I still liked the update.. I think we all readers do..
Something is wrong with us(especially nd only ur readers)..

I know, Keerthi, I am evil by counts of what I make my spoilers do to my poor readers!! *chuckle* O so love you for giving me such sweet, heartfelt comments, dear.

Originally posted by: chahath
lovely update as usual
but if they go to india what will happen to arhasia

Chahath! Nice to see you here. Well dear, about Arhasia, won't we have to wait and see about that...

Originally posted by: shipra.aqua
An awesome chapter...

I don't have enough words to appreciate the amount of effort, patience, hardwork, love & what not u r putting into ur writing...

I m & will always be ur die heart fan...

Shipra! How are you, dear? Thank you so much for loving me and my story so much the way you do, dear. It means so much to know how much you cherish it and to say it so.

Originally posted by: angeldream14
awesome
finally both know they love each other
so when will the past be revealed
i think their past is connected

Hey there! Do you still write FFs, dear? You have a knack with connection, you know. *wink*

Originally posted by: jduke
Cool update. "Woman, you own the womb from which I am to beget the heirs to my name and power." Arnav is getting naughty and increasing my anticipation :). Why he wants to move to India?. Kushi and her suggestions...LOL...lets see how Arnav follows them?. Like the gorgeous Kushi in red dress. Happy Red dress to you as well.

I knew you'd love that line, jduke. You pick on the specials always! Thank you for the Red Attire wishes and as to their India trip...we'll wait for the tale to tell us, shall we, jduke?

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Aquiline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: rosalineak
Very beautiful ff.took a week time to read all the updates.cant wait to read the upcoming updates.

Welcome to Arhasia, dear rosa. 251 chapters in a week, eh? Well, on behalf of all the readers and Comrades of Arhasia, I gladly invite you closer to the warm hearth of the Inn and hope you'll enjoy your future visits when time permits...

Originally posted by: Angel1618
Finally read all 4 chapters..
Loved all of them and I just love this new Arnav..
I hope he just stays like this. He is buying mansion in India for everyone I am sure khushi will find a way to make everyone stay under one roof.
Do update soon.

Thank you dear Angel for loving the chapters and the changes in the characters and plot as well...

Originally posted by: smartgirl9009
wowww...
just loved the way u have portrayed their blooming relationship...
an update, very well narrated...
plxxx continue soon..
n
thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

So pleased to know, dear smartgirl. Thank YOU.

Originally posted by: sheshnag1952
as usual a lovely update. but there are only questions after reading the update. which i know will get the answers in the later chapters. but still why is the lord gradually shifting to India. and if the lord of arhasia shifts to India who will look after the land there. but i liked the fact that the lord wanted his lady besides him when he signed the deed. and i also liked the way he said to kushi that she is his future. the lord and the lady are taking baby steps in their relationship. loved that too. waiting eagerly for the next update. update soon

Sheshnag dear! How are you? That's a symptom described exclusively belonging to the readers of THIS tale: questions after reading a chapter. *chuckle* But I am so very happy that you loved the tiny little changes in their relationship as they progress further in the story...

Originally posted by: -Farwa_Ibrahim-
Loved loved it loved it. No doubt the Khushi of show lacked in many ways as compared to this Khushi. Loved how lordy woke Khushi up

Lord Arnav leaned towards her and
whispered, "Woman, you own the
womb from which I am to beget the
heirs to my name and power."

ahem ahem

he bought three mansions and a land in india that's nice.

"Then please don't break the family
up." He looked at her and saw the
yearning in her eyes as she spoke,
"Let us all live together the way we do
now."

so typical Khushi n thats what makes her unique and good. Love her. So now Khushi is going to takeordy on kitchen trips so he can know his servants well enough nice but tough job Khushi. I really like this update the way Lordy ft proud about Khushi's way of dealing the guests and everything else. Loved it

Farwa! Farwa! My dear! I cannot understand WHY you should go and comment on EACH and every chapter. Though I know you can't, but I still do miss your coloured lines. However the happy reactions and thoughts that are typical of you are still there and I am so glad you are there, among our VERY BUSY comrades who barely make it to the Inn these days, to keep me company.

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Aquiline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: lovedrops
Lin...
Wow.. that was an awesome update... I must say First Lady Khushi Singh Raizada looks gorgeous in that red dress. And oh my my their conversation is romantic. And the way Khushi carries herself before the deligates is impressive and

What? they are moving to India.. And the Khushi reaction is perfect.. I would have reacted the same way for breaking the family..

PS: Of course Lin... I will never leave the Inn. I am camping there permanently.😉

K, I would like to thank you specially for that picture you posted with Lordy "stumbling" upon Kushi in red. It always cheers me up to see pictures, you see! So many thank yous for that, dear! Always happy to see your comments and my! You camping there? Won't your dear family wonder where you've wandered off to? Hope you have all your necessary supplies.

Originally posted by: mpuhan
Now why would the first Lord leave everything behind to go settle in India? thoda soche ke padi😕

Mpuhan dear!! How are you, eh? Ah, you are in your deep thinking mode! Do carry on. Won't disturb...*tiptoes off to the next person*

Originally posted by: sutapasarbabhom
Butiful updt lini u describe it butifuly as first lady khushi play her role that amaze me they moving india gues there lots of past wil disclose the way arnav refer khushi his future its proof that he acept khushi as wife whole heartly in our shw i nevr enjy anx episode aftr arshi force maraige tanx to u that fulfil my wish tanx for pm

And how are YOU, dear sutapasarbabhom? I am so glad I can let this story make its way to your heart. I am really happy that I am able to make you happy at least in this little way. And a clever girl you are for pouncing on the possibilities of this "india moving" intentions...

Originally posted by: anjs
beautiful chapter...loved the way Lord Arnav thought and said that Khushi is worthy of attending the meeting...also the fact that she is his future n the mother of his future kids...sounds so domestic...

khushi's behaviour during the meeting was so perfect, even i felt so proud of her...and i agree with ur note, our wish to see her like this in the show was never fulfilled...do u remember the episode where she barges in the meeting and changes into western costumes to pacify arnav's anger... they made a mockery of her and of the great fashion tycoon ASR, when his clients liked khushi's costumes as opposed to the designs presented by him...

And here cometh dear anjs!! How is life, dear friend! I am always ALWAYS so eager to hear what you have to share with me with regard to your admirable scrutiny of my chapters! Indeed, the heartless treatment of Kushi's character towards the close of the show did prick my appreciative equilibrium A LOT. I only wish to remain intact in my presentation of the characters and never stray from the path even if it is a troublesome affair to keep consistency in check. Thank you so much dear for loving the tale and being here always to support.

Originally posted by: loves_aishu
So glad you liked my thoughts!!😊
By the Way 400 chapters, Oh My My, you have planned for long!!
Looks like you are going to give us the Ever After!!!😆
So happy to hear that!!😃

Loved the way he made his wife feel special!! Lord's comment about the Future was lovely!!😊
Poor Lord Arnav, looks like now he will become the True Master of his Castle!!
Even he himself accurately declares what the scene would be should he go into the Kitchen suddenly!!😆
Looks like its time for The Lord to learn something from Lady about Castle affairs!!😆
Can't wait to see the reactions, when the Special, Master Servant meeting is to occur under the able guidance of Our Goddess of Mischief!!😆

Wow they are coming to India!!!

But why are they shifting to India??

Is Khushi's past related to India, even that Chinese princess had given her a book with the name Chandraki written, which our Our Ladyship declared to by Chandrika!! Can't be satisfied with Payal's observations!! Brain cells are working overtime today!!😆😉

And hey which would they be in?? Can't wait to see our India from your eyes and Our favourite couples' eyes!!😊

Solve the mystery soon!!😃

By the way I had a suspicion, is Aloof Adil, the guy from Castle who is the Lady with the Hood's spy or should I say minion!!😕 Just got thinking!!😉 Can't help but despise him!!

Anyways no more blabbering, just waiting for the next update!!😊

And before I forget!!😃

I, loves_aishu, present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses.

Dear Aishu, if I may call you that, I was laughing so much on the tumult of your thoughts and how you kept trying to connect and unwrap and desperately glue things together! *giggle* You really ARE something! I love the way you address our characters and contemplate on them and try to understand their intentions. But I would advise you to keep away from Aloof Adil for his aloofness has nothing to betray. As of yet. I am hoping to end the story before 400 but by the way I have framed the chapters to come, it seems to only lengthen. *grumble grumble* So happy to know you've taken the pledge to be a Comrade. I lost my "editing CAC parchment" so I've stopped adding names to it or even presenting it on the first page of the Threads but I would like to present you to my dear readers as Comrade Aishu (again, if that name is permissible for you. DO tell me if you want me to call you by any other).

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Aquiline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: Diaphanous
Hi Linny and everyone else!!! I'm back! Been so long, busy with school, work( I got my first job!!!!) and life. Anyways, I've finally caught up with all I have missed. Seems like a lot. Let's see if I can even talk about it.
So they come home, and surprisingly, the First Lord is reluctant. And why wouldn't he be, he had a chance to take a break, do something he enjoyed, and learn about his wife. Not to mention fall more in love with her, the cheesecake incident. And then Khushi having trouble over enjoying the cake her husband so lovingly made or her pride. This shows the ups and downs of their marriage, that even if they are married and past their argue menus, they still have these "power" struggles. Khrushchev tries to make the Lordy Lord bend down to her and Armav showing that you can take the man out of the castle, but you can't take the lordiness out of him. Even being outside his castle, he still acts as The Lord rather than the son-in-law.
This being said, I think this is showing his struggle with his marriage and trying to be a good husband. He has trouble acting like the common man and he has been single for too long that he doesn't exactly know how make a marriage work. But him doing all those things, the cheesecake, the carriage, talking with buaji, he is working through it and trying to make it work.
Ram is in the Raizada Castle as the son? Or the butler's son? Either way, permanent and important member of the castle. Based on what was given, that the General did not approve of his coming, just as much as he wants his unborn child, I feel like Ram and/or the unborn child will be his undoing. In addition to Khushi and Arnav. Maybe Armav will use Ram to bring him down, even if he doesn't want to put the boy in harms way. Guess we will have to see what the story is with Ram and the General.
Now, coming to La's letter. We didn't see much of the time where La was starting to act like Khushi, but i feel that thisetter was supposed to make up for part of that. She is starting to see under people's masks, what's in their hearts. Before, she didn't care for her father because she thought he didn't care for him. But now she sees that the coldness and the hours he put into working was just what he knew. He didn't know how to explain it express his feelings. So when his aunt fell ill, he realized that if not expressing and telling how he feels about her, he could at least show her in small ways by asking these simple questions. And it's enough for La to understand.
Now for the last part, Arnav asking Khushi to the meeting to serve as the witness. He is starting to include her in his professional life, hopefully, knowing that a wife is not just important in a man's personal life, but that there is always a great woman behind every great man. Before it was his Di. Now she has taken a back seat and Khusji has stepped up to the plate. And going BACK to India. I thought they weren't Indian. So why and how would they go back to India. What is the story there? Or is it just that their ancestors are from India. And since Kushi said no to living in 3 seperate houses, does this mean that aside from not wanting the family to spilt up, she also worries for Di's safety. Could this possible mean that something is in store for Anjali???

Am I right or completely wrong, Linny?
It was a wonderful update!! Always love your updates

Saima!! Goodness!!! I thought you'd left or gone madly busy or something!!! It was like fireworks in my heart when I caught you on the Thread and so your massive "return" comment. HUGS for your comeback!!! So glad you are back!!!! I so missed your thoughtline and how you'd assume and weigh matters in the FF. How are you dear? I am so glad to hear about your job and your busy life but I am doubly happy to see you back here!! Thank you so much my dear for this thoughtful narration of what you felt and read in each character as you passed through the chapters. I love the "practical" side in your dealings with the discussions. I love seeing your head fire up with theories but I was extremely astonished when you wondered if they were India. The first page of every Thread describes Arhasia to be a land with a past of Greek civilization but where Indians migrated to reside in. Also, I've mentioned this in the prenote before Ch 15 and in the first paragraph of Ch112. Details, Saima dear. Keep an eye out for details, always. But so glad you asked this question because of which I could go out and find the chapters and clarify the matter. So happy to see you back again, dear Saima.

Originally posted by: Swaatii
please pm me!!!!!!!

Oh! Dear Swaatii. I don't know what had happened. I had assumed you were in my Buddy List but now when I checked, you are not. Please Buddy me again and I will PM you whenever I PM updates. That's also another thing: I don't always get time to PM my updates but I will when I get time to do so. Take care, dear.

Originally posted by: Shalve
superb update...loved it

Originally posted by: TaujooMadiha
awesome updates

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..brilliant update..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Smrikta992
Cute update..
Lovd it..
They r coming in India..
Thnks for pm..

Originally posted by: kaur94
Nice update

Originally posted by: nadiafarjana
Amazing update

Originally posted by: siamesecat
Lovely!

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Khushi didnt mess up heheheh Great
Nice part

Originally posted by: sanamsky
love it awesome

Originally posted by: ankitabaran
Just amazing and update soon... 😃

Originally posted by: sneharjun92
very short update. ur writing is amazing. so plz give long update dear.

Originally posted by: sib_12
very nice update

Originally posted by: KRYSTAL-C
Fabulous update

Thank you dears.

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

When will be the next update? 😊

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Kiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: Aquiline

K, I would like to thank you specially for that picture you posted with Lordy "stumbling" upon Kushi in red. It always cheers me up to see pictures, you see! So many thank yous for that, dear! Always happy to see your comments and my! You camping there? Won't your dear family wonder where you've wandered off to? Hope you have all your necessary supplies.

Aweee... thank you Lin.. for thanking me... You know.. When you explained Khushi in red dress ... I remembered the first rabba ve moment in IPK... Lordy Arnav is no less .. he has to ogle at her... I am thinking all the possibilities why Lordy decided to go to India...

PS: No worries.. I have everything spare in the Inn...

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Love this update.😊

Khushi you are my future ,and "Woman, you own the womb from which I am to beget the heirs to my name and power."

These two are setting the boundaries and everything in between them.He is moving to india , WHY? awww love him having her besides signing those papers..Red dresses and Khushi , really beautiful.

Happy Red dress to you as well.

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loves_aishu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: Aquiline

Dear Aishu, if I may call you that, I was laughing so much on the tumult of your thoughts and how you kept trying to connect and unwrap and desperately glue things together! *giggle* You really ARE something! I love the way you address our characters and contemplate on them and try to understand their intentions. But I would advise you to keep away from Aloof Adil for his aloofness has nothing to betray. As of yet. I am hoping to end the story before 400 but by the way I have framed the chapters to come, it seems to only lengthen. *grumble grumble* So happy to know you've taken the pledge to be a Comrade. I lost my "editing CAC parchment" so I've stopped adding names to it or even presenting it on the first page of the Threads but I would like to present you to my dear readers as Comrade Aishu (again, if that name is permissible for you. DO tell me if you want me to call you by any other).

Oh sure, you can call me Aishu, I love my name!!😆

Thanks for the advise, I will try to keep away from the Aloof Adil, though not sure how much I am succesful in it!!!😳

400 are not much,😆

anything will be less, am very greedy, you know!!😳

Waiting for your update!!😃

Edited by loves_aishu - 11 years ago

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Aquiline

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Yes, we did miss this bonding between Payal and Lord Manohar in the serial and it is nice to see the mutual admiration for each other. General character has so many hidden layers. At times he seem to be friendly and next minute he seem to be detached and fierce. Poor JP 😆 got the burnt. It will be interesting to see what significance does General's outrage will have on future?

Edited by jduke - 11 years ago