ArHi FF:11:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES

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The Storyteller would like to express her thanks to all those who make this tale a happening success.

To the Almighty who gives Inspiration to my Soul and who helps me Transform my Imaginations into Words and in every way Created Creativity in me , To my beloved Parents who nurtured my Mind and Strengthened my Heart to become the person I am, To Aura my dearest Dickinson

To the IPPKND Forum and the FanFiction Forum for letting me find a nook wherein to narrate this tale

And to my beloved Friends, Comrades, Commenting' Readers and Silent Liking' Readers who make this story find meaning, and this writer find love in your circle of sincere friendship

Almost human is this virtual world that finds people drawn to understand and belong to the warmth of another's words but also by a story that runs so deep and rich through the veins of our reading minds

A story of determined, devoted and desperate men

A story of spiteful, spirited and sincere women

A story of loneliness and companionship

A story where every detail is valued and where even little things matter

The Beasts and the Bleeding Roses, though the title sound too drastic, is a gentle story that is embraced by hearts that value family, relationships and character growth

Ridden with mysteries and hinted with allusions, the tale takes you on a mad ride through a maze of feelings, wrapped in words that echo over a land created just for the manifestation of this legend

Be it a tale that belongs to the Lady in the Dark Hood, a tale about a Castle narrated in the warmth of an Inn, all those who are drawn to the story are destined to get entangled in a web of mysteries and be mesmerized by the potency of its crafting

So, why lag at the doorstep of the kind Innkeeper's abode? The choice is yours to make. But this I assure you: those who pause in their life's passage to enter the Inn, are bound to make magical their moments in Arhasia!


Chapter 241: Valediction from the Village Home (Scroll Down)

Chapter 242: Advent from Cottage to Castle (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108925448

Chapter 243: By the Banter of the Brothers (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108974039

Chapter 244: The Loyal Butler (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109097055

Chapter 245: Thithilos and Periusia (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109198168

Important Note: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/109957616

Arrival Note https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111392180

Chapter 246: A New Name and A New Home https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111417404

Chapter 247: A Pinch of Revelation https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111467789

Chapter 248: Upon A Pinch of Revelation https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111537678

Chapter 249: The Late Letter https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111661403

Chapter 250: Encountering the Epistles of the Erstwhile https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/111863982

Stalker's Special: Spoiler for Chapter 251 on Page 49

Chapter 251: Reluctance https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112067538

Chapter 252: The Forte and the Furyhttps://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112442094

Acknowledgements for Ch 252 and Spoiler for Ch 253 on Page 61.

Chapter 253: Dispelling Dislikes, Discomforts and Dubiousness https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/112841581

Chapter 254: The Crimson Augury https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113305108

Chapter 255: A Nascency or a A Fatality? https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113453370

Chapter 256: The Nick of the Nascent (Not PMed due to frequent disturbances in network) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/113760582

Chapter 257: On the News of the Newborn (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114512065

Chapter 258: Lady Payal's Conundrum (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114556196

Chapter 259: The Bustle in the Castle (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/114700050

NEW CHAPTER Chapter 260: An Oddity in the Orchard (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118838800

Official Arhasian invitation for Sunday https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118951446

Chapter 261: The Amphidromia of the Little Jha (Not PMed) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/119014140

Chapter 262: The Night of the Ceremony https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/121963119

Chapter 263: When the Unsung Song Becomes a Dirge https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122034745

Chapter 264: Woe https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122167300

Chapter 265: The Solace and Her Story https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122239997

Chapter 266: Epiphany https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/123964301

Chapter 267: Epiphany Expressed Not PMed https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/124133643

NEW THREAD: Thread 12: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/4412675/arhi-ff-12-the-beasts-and-the-bleeding-roses


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Chapter 241: Valediction from the Village Home

With a heavy heart, the First Lady sat cross-legged on the floor of her beloved bedroom, packing her clothes into the open suitcase along with other cherished things that she retrieved from the depths of her dear old wooden chest.

She had taken time's habit of flight for granted, too lost in the dreamy delight of being home again, that she was taken by surprise when the day of parting finally caught up with her.

Her hands fumbled through the contents in the inside of the wooden chest and extracted a tiny wooden box, upon finding which, her grim face suddenly lit with innocent mirth.

"My treasure box!" she exclaimed, holding her little box of personal riches that she had been deprived of on account of an unexpected nuptial hitched in haste.

Propping the box upon the floor before her, she delicately opened its lid.

Her eyes moistened as she let her fingers brush upon the prized possessions within the box.

The sunlight from the window caught on something in the box, flashing silver.

Picking them up, Kushi gazed at the two silver keys lying in the heart of her palm.

One was her wish key, bound upon the wish she had made on the wish tree.

And the other was his.

Clasping her fingers into a loving fist that enclosed the keys, she held her fist to her heart, "Goddess Mother, my wish came true...and I hope his did too. Though I wonder what he could have wished for, being not a believer in rituals of this sort..."

That was when she noticed something else in the box, something that was hidden in the rumble of all the little treasures but had chosen to peep itself to her vision after she'd extracted the keys.

Dropping the keys onto her lap, she lifted up the box and overturned it.

With a bustle of jingles and clinks, assorted articles of many shapes and purposes fell upon the wide skirt of her gown and, on top of them all, stifling the noise of their little accident, fell a book.

Not any book, but the book that had been a gift from a very esteemed person. Which you will remember to be none other than the Chinese Princess.

Placing the emptied box aside, Kushi picked up the book and flicked through the pages, wondering for the first time why the Princess had been so kind as to come visit her and give her this book.

She said it was the painting that brought her to Arhasia but why would a royal Princess cross seven seas to a foreign land just to meet the one in the painting? Could gratitude be that powerful? Or was it curiosity? Whichever emotion it was that provoked the Princess to find the persona in the portrait...

Flipping to the fourth page, Kushi's eyes skimmed over the neat script:

I Ching, the Book of Changes, is China's traditional philosophy on divination that speaks of the Taoist yin-yang. The two forces are present in everything that exists in the world. Everything is either a yin or yang. There is a popular belief that Yin is feminine and yang is masculine. This distinction intersects other divisions wherein Earth, Night, Water, Winter, Moonlight, Rain and Death are yin while Day, Heaven, Fire, Sunlight and Birth are yang.

But because everything encounters a dual action of both yin and yang, a girl may have traits or yang and a boy have traits of yin.

The circular symbol of the yin-yang, which is called Liang Yi, is a black yin and a white yang divided by a curved line. The yin contains a tiny yang and the yang contains a tiny yin, an indicator that nothing is completely a yin or a yang. Each contains the seed of the other.

Kushi was thoughtful. White with a tiny black and Black with a tiny white...Good with a little bad and Bad with a little good...

Lord Arnav's face crossed her mind and she smiled. A yin-yang incarnate.

Kushi returned her attention to the book:

Adding to this ideology is the connotation of the curved line which stands for the constant change of balance between the two sides. A healthy body, mind and soul are results of a well-balanced yin and yang.

In battle or warfare, Taoist doctrines ascertain that an attacker must not instigate force but take the attack of the opponent and use its own force against it.

"I should have read this when I was at war with Arnavji!" She closed the book and sighed at it, "All this unapplied knowledge, wasted."

And then she paused.

There was something scrawled on the frontage of the book.

It was slightly smudged so she tilted the book closer to her face and squinted at it.

"To my beloved friend...Chan-" Kushi struggled to pick out the reedy cursive letters, "Chand-ra-ki."

"Chandraki?" She blinked at the book confusedly, "The Princess must have meant Chandrika."

Kushi shook her head, mumbling, "Chinese pronunciation of Indian names!"

And then she frowned in thought, "But who is Chandrika? Had the Princess devised it as an Indian nickname for me like how she'd offered me a Chinese name?"

Kushi looked down at the book. The book was given as a gift to her so there was doubt required that the name was meant for her too. Maybe she mistook my name until someone told her I was Kushi, reasoned the young girl.

After the suitcases, the boxes and the baskets had been paraded down the stairs, through the living room and out the front door to be piled into the carriage waiting outside, Kushi sorrowfully faced her dear family to bid them farewell.

Crushed in her father's embrace, Kushi almost wept at her Babuji's reluctance to part with his daughter. Even Mistress Madhumati was not in the spirits to tease her niece, uncertainly patting her red wig every other second.

But Garima was ignorant of Kushi and was more occupied in the gifts and edibles she'd made for the inhabitants of the Castle.

"Did you take the jars of jam?" she asked Kushi who was now embraced in her aunt's arms.

"It's packed, Garima," said Buaji, answering for her niece.

"How about the pies and the cupcakes?" Garima looked around as though she hoping to find one floating by.

"They are all in the basket," answered Madhumati, releasing Kushi from her hug.

"And where is the basket?" Garima wanted to know.

"In the carriage, Amma," said Kushi.

Garima frowned at her, "How do I know if it was packed neat enough?"

Madhumati slapped her beefy palm upon her forehead, "Hai Re Nandakishore! Garima, it was yourself that packed the basket!"

"Was it?" Garima had a lost look on her face, "Well, I don't remember if I packed the meatloaf-"

Suddenly, young arms were around her, pulling her into the embrace of her daughter.

"I will miss you too, Amma," murmured Kushi into her mother's ears.

Garima wrapped her arms around her youngest and as the mother closed her eyes, tears fell down her cheeks, "Who said I was going to miss you! I am waiting to be relieved of you!"

"What a wholesome wicked mother you are!" mocked Kushi and kissed her mother's wet cheek, knowing her mother was prone to worry about this and that when trying to hide the huger lump that might threaten tears to rise in her motherly eyes.

Lord Arnav stood outside before the readied carriage and, turning to Master Happy, shook his hand. He noticed Ram standing beside Master Happy silently and attempted the alienated liberty to ruffle Ram's head.

Master Happy was touched on witnessing the last gesture of the First Lord, that he couldn't stop himself from whispering to Lord Arnav, "He doesn't show it but he is grieved inside both by your parting and also by the greater parting that waits for him."

Confused, Lord Arnav looked at the elderly man, whose expression was sad as he said, "I am returning him to the Boy's Home the day after."

Lord Arnav looked at Ram. The little boy had not overheard the conversation, having found a distraction in the form of a blue butterfly that was dancing beside his little shoulder.

Just then Master Gupta, Kushi and the women folk came out of the Cottage and headed towards the carriage.

Lord Arnav shook hands with Master Gupta, let Garima and Madhumati touch his head in blessing and then after helping his wife into the carriage, got into it after her.

"Do come again soon, babua," said Madhumati on a hopeful note, "You and Akashbabua and the girls."

"We will, Buaji," assured Lord Arnav politely, with a gentle tip of his hat.

Wide-eyed, Kushi stared at the hat-donned head of her husband and would have implemented on the moment with an exclamation if she hadn't caught her father's kind face at the window beside her and her young daughterly heart sank.

"I wish I could stay with you a while longer, Babuji," Kushi mumbled, her eyes moistening again.

Her father patted her cheek lightly, "Home is a place of welcomes and never of goodbyes. You will come again, bitiya."

Kushi leaned forward and kissed her father's cheek, a drop of her tear fastening gently upon his aging cheek.

And then the carriage was rolling out of the street.

A minute's speedy ride across the dusty path, with houses and Cottages and people's curious faces flashing by, led them right out of the South Village and the vast grasslands welcomed them on either side.

Lord Arnav saw that Kushi was silent along the ride, which was unusual.

She was looking out the window and he knew her heart was elsewhere.

He placed a hand on hers.

Snapped from her reverie by his touch, she looked at him.

He had a kind look in his eyes, "I never thought I would say this but I will have no objections in paying a visit to the Village next time."

Kushi's eyes lit with gratitude but her lips curved to a clever smirk, "Are you saying this to conceal the clanger you made a moment ago?"

Lord Arnav was puzzled, "What do you mean?"

Kushi narrowed her gaze, "Did you think it fell unheard: you calling my aunt Buaji?"

Lord Arnav withdrew his hand and frowned, "I don't know what you are talking about."

He turned his head to the tiny window on his side of the carriage and immersed his vision in the passing landscape, his mind wandering.

Kushi smiled complacently at him but decided wisely not to pursue the professed point since it was certain he was uncomfortable by it.

As the hill upon which the Castle was perched neared, Kushi's heart delighted in the thought that she was to see her Jiji again while Lord Arnav's head swam with images of his sister's face, followed subsequently by the visage of her abhorred husband.

Kushi caught the serious expression on Lord Arnav's face and she bit her lower lip anxiously. Oh please, Goddess Mother, don't let the last week be a mere dream. Please don't let the return to the Castle revert what has been beautifully changed.



Edited by Aquiline - 11 years ago
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Is there anything I can word that might get atleast half an equal to what I feel everytime I read this tale?
*sigh*
I do speak of the impossibles even when I know the ultimate end of it...
How do I tell you Aquiline, that your every word gets craved right into my memory the moment I see it?
How do I tell you how much this Land and its tale mean to me?

Well since I'v got no other choice, let me speak a few of my heart's whispers, the very same ones that keep fluttering right from the moment I see your PM to the moment I see your next...

Can love be so mystic?
So accentuated and pure?
So immortal and wondrous?
Like making you want to experience it to the fullest, no matter what the future holds?
Tale of the beasts and a bleeding rose, I see it as a tale of a true Love..


There is compassion, there is confusion..
I see the general, I see in him the both of them..
Oh how I wish he saw things different, oh how I wish he dint again..
Why, is this me speaking?
Really?
In such a dazed state?


I see him struggle, I see him love..
I see him agonize, pray and fight..
I pity him and loathe too..
But somewhere down the line, I think I now understand him, his need and worries too..
Why is he so difficult?
Like making you want to not hate him but instead understand that he's right in his own way..


I see the Mother bearing her child..
Loving it to the fullest even before it opened its eyes..
I see the Father walking on fire..
How can his own child, why infact, is it the one that'l lead him to the pyre?
Does he not want to love it?
Then why does it make him cry?
Why is the fate so twisted?
Or is it the time?
How can he bare the hell to come, his love and cure on either sides?
Why is there no other option but to get sacrificed?
Why cant he sit back in his room, playing his heart's song?
Oh not the one that spread the melancholy but that'd make his wife thrum with desire...
Why oh why in the good Lord's name? Why is he gonna get suffered?
And why all of a sudden, do I want him not to face the fire?




I see the power, I see the love..
I see the arrogance, I see the indifference..
But beneath all that I see that him, the vulnerable child.
A child stunted emotionally, bound by curse, chained by insecurity..
A monster with a beating heart that he had always been unaware of...
A heart that bleeds with darkest of the curses but flows with the purest of gold..
A heart oh so believed to be a stone, a heart that oh so dearly waited...
Awaited to cherish that one rose that willed to bleed to unbind the chained mystery...
A heart that cried in the loneliest hours, a heart that shunned itself from hoping that it could see the dawn...
A heart that stubbornly is holding onto the healing rose that fell into its owner's arms, the very same rose that heard its faintest of the beats..

I see the monster, an aphrodisiac one of it...
Not just by its intimidating beauty, but by its stunning soul...
A soul that lived inspite of the scars, a soul that survived inspite of the curse..

I see a lover, oh so sensuous...
I see him resist, fight and blend...
I see him care, I see him crave..
I see him in all the majesty, I dare to say..
I see him love, I see him loved...
I see him change like a burning flame...
I see him open up, I see him conceal..
I see him hoping to make every moment with his wife be real..
I see him mellow, I see him dream..
I see him in a new light, a soul oh so surreal..
I see him wish upon his wife..
Did he forget, he'd rather wished for a life?
And then he smiled, the way that made me dazzle..
He simply said, that's what he wished for : A life with his wife...



I see the rose, impeccable and one of its kind..
The balm to the scarred heart that bled inside..
I see her smile, unaware that it lightens up his day..
I see her play, unaware that it makes him pray...
I see him try, try his best to reach for her...
A moment is all it takes, but its easier to be said..
He knows he aint perfect...
But he keeps trying..
Coz now he's got his other half..
The keeper of his soul..
Who'd keep holding on to him..
No matter what may come, coz they know..
That they're for each other : The yin-yang in true love, in every true sense..


Ages and miles to be crossed..
Darkness and evil to be fought..
The Angelic monster now knows he can, coz he's got that string to hang onto, if at all he'd get lost..

The beasts and the bleeding rose..
A tale of its own..
I see more than just magic,
I see what I want..
I see what you tell, Aquiline..
I see it right here : A tale of true love,
I see it everywhere : The love that'd surpass the deepest fears..



Congratulations on the 11th thread, buddy!!!

Sorry for not having commented on the past few updates, trust me, I loved every single one of them...

And I'm on the first page of the new thread?


And the changes you'v made to the welcome note are astounding! I loe them, the introduction done to the T..

Seriously, I love you Aquiline and I mean it! Come here dear narrator!!!




Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one...
I agree, "Home is a place of welcomes, never goodbyes"..
brilliantly written.. but its strange, u suddenly mention the Chinese princess's visit very subtly with the gift..
Waiting, for the story to unfold more...
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awesome update.. loved it..
i think the chinese princess's gift will play some impt role in future...
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i m happy and i m sad😃😕
happy because of the new thread and also i await to see what happens now that khushi has found the book
sad because they had to leave the south village

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and I wholeheartedly agree that home is a place for welcome and never goodbyes:))
was wondering about the chinese book as well that says never use force against the enemy rather the information about him/her against the enemy. I hope Khushi shows the book to Lord Arnav and he go 'Ureka'!!😃 And that would be the end of the General😆
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That was truly amazing and wonderful , please try to update quickly lin...
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wow...finally a book pointing her to the direction of the mysterious...or is it?

Lord Arnav has changed so beautifully, that even i feel n pray like khushi for the change to not be a dream...but alas, we forget that the beloved General is residing in the castle to instigate the Lord...hopefully he will get them more closer, like earlier
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un-resed in page 1

Can you believe it, Aquiline? I'm on page 1!!!!!


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