ASR's Angry Mode Part 20 on Page 72 (Completed)

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The mighty ASR... due to his over affection on his sister... forced Khushi to lose everything to him... including herself... how destiny has planned them to be with each other... scroll down... to know more...

Guys... this one suddenly stuck in my mind... so thought to pen it down... this is very different from my other write-ups... so guys... Please do support me... encourage me... love me... which you all always do... Luv you guys... Here it comes...

Arnav Singh Raizada wearing his T-shirt looked at Khushi, who was completely broken down due to what has happened with her. His anger didn't reduce even now after spoiling her virginity. He went out to get fresh air. He sat in the chair out and closed his eyes. Instantly his lovely younger sister, Anjali's face came in front of him. His blood boiled thinking how Shyam has shattered her... all just for a bet...

He gritted his teeth opening his eyes which were so red now. "Shyam Gupta... You didn't realize a bit with whom you have messed... What if your family is a well known one in this city... We are also not less... We are Raizadas... The pain which you have given to my sister... Is not a forgivable one... see now am messed with you too... by making your sister to feel the same pain... Even more... and much worse" his thoughts came to an end when his cell started to ring inside.

He went and attended it. "Chote... where are you..." Nani's voice is clearly shaken. "Nani... I came for an urgent work..." composing himself "how is Anjali... did she open her eyes..." his voice was shaken now. He heard a low cry from Nani confirming that she didn't. "No Chote..." she continued to cry. "Nani please stay strong... nothing will happen to my sister... Mamiji is there na..." he said in a go. "Yes Chote... Manohar is also here... you come soon... she needs you..." saying this Nani shut the call.

He again closed his eyes. "Anjali became so critical coz of that idiot Shyam... how he has handled her so rudely... that she is in hospital now..." again this came to his mind. He opened his eyes and looked at Khushi who is still having tears and has held the blanket close to her neck sitting in the corner down the bed. She has lost what a girl shouldn't have to... that too to this mighty ASR who is an unknown person to her.

Arnav couldn't digest that she is well while his sister was not. He rushed to her. On hearing his footsteps she curled even more in fear without looking him. "You..." saying this he bend down to her. She didn't look him in fear only her tears rolled. "Don't think that I will leave you... Am not done yet..." his gritted words shook her core even more without knowing what she have done to him.

"Why..." a slow voice made him to stop. He turned to her. "Why..." she again uttered this without moving her eyes from the floor. "Why..." his yell made her to jerk a bit. He took steps towards her. "Why..." he made her to stand forcibly holding her elbows while she's holding the blanket. "Why... You should ask this to your shamless brother... When I let you out... but not so soon..." his words made her condition even worse. When he left her she fell down as she was so weak and held her stomach.

He just watched her and almost ordered to stop pretending and to go freshen up. Few more tears rolled cursing her condition which she has never ever dreamed.

So guys... how was it... I know you all are cursing me for making our Arnav this much rude... But trust me he's not bad... his love for his family especially to his sweet sister makes him to do this... Don't worry our arshi is always made for each other... So shall I continue or not...

Whatever... do let me know guys... 😊

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IDatIF thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A bit different

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arnav n his anger
He should take anger management classes
Felt bad for Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh god such a cruel treatment!!!!!!!!
Please continue soon. I am very much excited.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg! Tht was brutal !!
cont soon.
Edited by zaniax - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Tis is bit rude ... Bt i knw u wil never disrespect women in ur writtings ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anithabalaram

Tis is bit rude ... Bt i knw u wil never disrespect women in ur writtings ...


am really very sorry if i hurted u dear... trust me... how his doings in anger turns up in love... dats my plot... thank u so much... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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please make Arnav see sense soon.
don't want him to be this cruel.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow thats a good start a typical ASR mode... will definitely enjoy it. tit for tat huh but at the expanses of innocent one that is Khushi .

please continue n update soon :)😊

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