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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pran28671

interesting concept

continue soon



thanks guys... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz

o teri kahani mein angry twist😲...feeling bad for khsuhi...😭...but da story line is amazing one...thnxs for pm...


hahaha yes...
yup dear... thank u so much... u r welcome... 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys... this Shyam character is completely like Shourya (Ek Hasina Thi). Just got this idea from that serial only with little bit of my imagination... am sure Shyam is wrong... don't know whether he will realize or not... but I assure that our Arnav is not like him... I agree that he has done the same as him... but in anger... he will very soon realize his big mistake... done to our poor innocent Khushi...

Also guys... the feel... the pain... the struggle... the guilt... am trying to portray is abot the two innocent girls who became victims for two guys... one for fun... one for anger... am going to try... how they are feeling in their point of views... I know this is not my style of writing... but thought to give it a try... I hope you guys enjoy... Thanks guys... This is totally a fictional one... so am really very sorry if I hurt you guys... Forgive me... Luv u all... 😛


Part 2


Arnav didn't stand there. He just picked his keys to go hospital. When his figure disappeared, Khushi wiped her tears and try to stand. She felt so difficult that her whole body ached. She took shower along with a loud cry letting her remaining tears to flow with it. What's the use... she can't change anything now... as she has nothing to lose now... When she came out, her eyes searched for her clothes. But her clothes seemed not good. So she checked the wardrobe. She picked a dark color t-shirt and track suit of him and tried to wear it though it didn't fit her. She had no option left.

Then finally she let her body hit the floor. Arnav who came to hospital got the news that Anjali has gained conscious. When he tried to check her, she was so scared that she didn't even allowed Arnav and Mamaji to see her. Arnav couldn't tolerate this. His eyes welled with anger. At that time, he saw Shyam coming towards them along with his dad Shashi Gupta and mom Garima Gupta.

Arnav held his fist and thought to take a step towards them but Mamaji controlled his deadliest action. So he stood with gritted teeth and waited for him to get close. Shashi's face was clearly ashamed of his son's act while Shyam and Garima gave their looks... like they don't belong there... also they haven't done anything serious. Shashi joined his hands and asked them to accept his apology on behalf of his son. He also told that his apology is nothing in front of Anjali's condition. He actually couldn't meet their eyes coz of his son's mistake.

Shyam interfered and told his dad to stop this drama and just settle the amount they needed. Arnav couldn't control anymore. He held his collar in a single go and gave a tight slap which made his five fingers to impress on his cheek. Garima came to defend her son. But Shashi stopped her and yelled her that she was the actual reason behind Shyam's such behavior.

Shashi pleaded them not to let this information to media for the time being as it will spoil their reputation and also it will mainly affect Anjali. He assured them that he will surely find a solution for this. Shyam left the place with a smirk which Arnav couldn't watch. Arnav gritted his teeth and stood there as he is waiting for the right moment to shock them.

When Manohar nodded his head reluctantly, Shashi and Garima left the place. When they vanished Arnav thought abot Khushi. He made a quick glance at Anjali and reached farm house. His anger is again in peak as he thought abot how Anjali scared to see him... her own brother...

With a gritted teeth and red eyes he marched inside. His eyes searched for her. There it found her lying in the floor like a dead person. Watching her in his clothes... made him even more furious. "How dare you..." with an angry tone he held her elbow and pulled her. But instantly he left her making her to reach the floor again.

"What the..." he stood froze as he felt so hot. Taking a deep breath he kneeled down and turned her upside. He looked her face which was covered with her long shiny hairs. He removed those and saw her innocent looking face which he didn't noticed earlier as only Shyam's face came in his mind. He touched her cheek and felt burning. He took his hand back immediately.

"What have I done..." muttering this he sat down with a thud. Looking her "No... No... this is not me... not me..." he felt so shamed on his own rude behavior. Yeah he wanted her condition to be bad... But he thought that in anger... When he really watched her like he thought... he couldn't take it... his whole anger is abot Shyam... but why he didn't thought this before... his anger/love has totally blinded him. He closed his eyes only to recall how he forced her. He opened his eyes and went near her. He patted her cheek gently. "Hey... you..." after a long think he remembered her name. "Khushi..." his mouth uttered her name for the first time. When she didn't responded he felt scared.

His own heart started to question him... kill him for his angry act. He lifted her gently and placed her on the bed. He adjusted her hairs and finally dialed the person to face the consequences emerged coz of him.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awesome update...
Feeling bad for Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
that was an awesome update..
good Arnav is regretting his mistake..
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
shyam is such a bas***d 😡
he isnt feeling a thing...
shashi is guilty where as garima is as sick as her son
khushi is totally lost..
only because of shyam she s in this condition...
and coz of arnav s anger khushi is in that condition...
atleast he realised but its too late..
he took her everything and hurt her like hell...for no mistake of hers..
superb update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the PM.
Mmm. Shyam doesn't regret. the spoil brat of a rich family. Has his mamma's support and dad's money to cover up his dirty deeds. These guys should be punished in the broad day lights.
Arnav, no less than shyam. though he did it in Anger and revenge, what he did was wrong. Why torture an innocent soul for someone's mistakes.
Happy to see he regret what he has done. But that's not enough. What he did was wrong and he has to face the consequences.
Waiting to see how Shyam and Arnav's life's going to change.
All the best.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
short update!!!!!

So Arnav realized so fast? I hoped he would take time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poor Khushi, I hope she is Ok. Glad that Arnav is realizing his mistake, Hope Khushi and Arnav work together to teach Shyam and Garima a lesson.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avaneesh06


hahaha yes...
yup dear... thank u so much... u r welcome... 😉



ua welcome sweetyyy😃😃...and awesome update👏👏👏

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