ASR's Angry Mode Part 20 on Page 72 (Completed) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Alai123

Nice concept of the story

Felt bad for Khushi that she is punished for her brother's wrong doing
Arnav has a reason for doing this to her but it's kind of too harsh
But I guess both will be together in the later part of the story
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for the pm😉


thanks dear...
yeah poor khushi...
i agree with u dear... yup... sure...
its my pleasure dear... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: daljeet

K dear,

Nice to have a new plot from you. I had not been able to keep up with other posts of yours. But this one you have started at the best time. My course is coming to an end this Friday after the final VIVA. So now I guess I'll be free for a while :)


I will be a sincere reader of this FF for sure dear :) That's the least I could do for being a favorite and treasured reader of mine!!!!!


I like this FF. Though Kushi didn't do any mistake I somehow don't feel bad or angry at ASR. Men like Shyam should realize when they hurt other women that they too have mother and sisters at home! Strike where it hurts most is the best formula for such men!


But yes, there was no fault of Kushi...We can't completely justify Arnav's actions. But I hope he can do something about it in future!


So now I'm waiting for more parts from this one. I must say after a long time, I'm getting to read such a spicy script of vengeance, passion, Shyam and above all the real ASR. Waiting dude!!!!!


Aditi dear...

ha am touched dear... dats really very sweet of u...
wow really... grt... My best wishes for ur final viva...
its my pleasure to cherish ur lovely comments dear...
ha am honoured...
yup... u r rite...
can't justify arnav's act... which he will realize very soon...
ha dear... thank u so much... 😛😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: anu17

feel bad for Khushi

waiting for the next update



Originally posted by: sneharjun92

ohhh god. what's this. he is acting like beast. waiting for next update


yup poor khushi... but guys dont worry arnav will regret for his beast act... he's not bad...
thanks guys... 😛😛😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sfghfj

nice start. waiting to read further


Originally posted by: Nas.fasna

update simply fablous.
continue soon


Originally posted by: katj

Interesting start..
Continue soon..
Thanks for PM



ha guys... dat really mean a lot... i was seriously scared to write like this...
thank u guys for supporting me always... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rk2127

Interesting.

So Arnav did what Shyam did to Anjali as a revenge. Than how will he justify his act to Khushi?

Nice start.


thanks dear... yup... dats the thing... his guilt... 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sana11

omg..this is awesome...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

waiting to read more👏😃


Originally posted by: Smrikta992

Very good concept..
Looking forward for more..
Thnks for pm..


Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya

Nice story, Plz continue.



guys... really am moved by ur lovely comments...
thanks a loads... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: BarunFan1212

A new story? Always a welcome from me.

Another angry ASR and the victim Khushi? and she never met him before. what an irony to loose something precious to an unknown?
Hope its different and interesting. Looking forward to read more.
Keep me posted.
All the best.


wow dear... am really very glad...
so sweet of u... yup...
sure dear... i would always like dat...
thank u... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: angeldream14

both man are beep beep...

how can they play with a girls dignity morons


yup... so sad.. lets see how it goes...
thanks dear... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: juliusvalentina

amazing. please continue.


Originally posted by: Meerah14

awesome...continue soon


guys... thank u so so much... 😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Uarnkhui

Intreseting part 1 I hope khushi is not Shyam sister.plz continue.


thanks dear... ha u guessed... 😉

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