ASR's Angry Mode Part 20 on Page 72 (Completed) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Angry arnav very very bad for what you did... Poor khushi suffering so much..
Awesome update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arnav's anger brings the worst of him . In fury he did something which he will regret forever . Their is no difference between Shyam and him . Atleast seeing Anjali's condition , he should have thought that khushi is also girl who will feel same way like his sister . What will Badima do after knowing her Chote's deeds ?
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
fablous update.i cant wait for nxt one
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Interesting. ..


Arnav is sorry for his behavior

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Guys... thank u thank u thank u so so much... 😛

@ sarunsashasingh... ha thanks dear... yup... but lets see how it goes as arnav is not bad actually...

@ frity... oh thank u dear...

@ angeldream14... yes... well said dear... khushi staying away... why... it will be revealed soon... yes poor khushi... but arnav is there for her.. he wont let her alone to struggle... thanks buddy...

@ pinky_sathiya... oh am so glad dear... yup... thank u...

@ sana11... yup... i totally agree... watever angry he maybe.. but dis is too too much... marriage... watever his sin wont leave him alone... thank u dear...

@ hararnav...very well said... nothing is enuf now... u got it... no no... but she will be in pain.. hw can she forget or forgive just like that... thanks dear... i really owe you... u know y...

@ Sparkling-eyes5... thanks yaar...

@ RajiSobtian... thank u so much dear...

@ sneharjun92... yup... lets see dear... oh my poor khushi... thank u...

@ thiyamappy... yes dear... ha started to realise that... thanks a lot...

@ ranogill... i agree dear... yup dats the next task... thank u...

@ Meerah14... am really sorry for dat dear... yup anger/luv made him so low... thank u...

@ rk2127... i accept dear... yes... nothing can change wat had happened to those poor souls... i will try my best not to disappoint u dear... thank u...

@ Uarnkhui... yes dear... thank u...

@ Smrikta992... yup... thanks dear... oh u r always welcome...

@ LyssaPie... lets see dear... thank u...

@ zaniax... yes he deserves... thank u dear...

@ tikarshi... thanks dear...

@ sfghfj... am so glad dear... thank u...

@ nano123... thank u so much dear...

@ i_m_arshiya... ummm its very difficult... lets see dear... thank u...

@ vandu123... thanks dear... he has to...

@ anithabalaram... dear... u know hw happy am to see u back... thank u so much...

@ pran28671... yup... but watever he did... nothing can change... thank u dear...

@ anu17... thank u very much dear... am very glad...

@ daljeet... ha am happy... ummm lets see... yeah u r rite... thank u...

@ swtsam... yup dear... thank u...

@ thangam100... yes poor khushi... thanks dear...

@ Raadhiyaaa... yup punishment... he deserves rite... thanks dear...

@ mamidis... yes... not a forgivable one... thank u dear...

@ katj... yup... very bad... thanks dear... welcome always...

@ ravalisharma06... thanks yaar...

@ Izabellaaa... wow... holaf..ur dp... oh thank u dear...

@ manuthi... thanks dear...

@ MDTharun... yup dear... u r so rite... but angry made him blind... he's realizing now... wats d use... lets see... thank u dear...

@ Nas.fasna... ha thanks dear... will give a long update...

@ Rohinid... thanks a lot dear... am very glad...

@ IsleOfCapri... am so happy dear... thank u...

@ madkukku... thanks yaar...

@ apekshash... thanks buddy...

@ sweetlife... on the way dear... thank u...

@ madhu1210... yes dear... am glad... thank u so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys... I came to know that my plot was similar with another story "Broken Mirror" here. But I swear guys... I don't have any idea abot it... Please trust me... Am really very sorry abot this... Anamika dear... thank u loads for letting me know this and also trusting me... hope that you guys believe me and keep supporting me as usual... Luv you guys... 😛


Part 5


Badimaa didn't know what to say. She simply touched his cheek with tear filled eyes thinking her words won't mend what he has committed. She knows in her very deep heart that he deserves punishment... after all Khushi is also a girl like Anjali... Being a woman... she can't forgive him just like that though he is like her own son.

"Badimaa..." he looked her face for some response. When Badimaa opened her mouth to say something, they heard a loud noise from Khushi's room. In a jerk they stood and rushed towards that room. Arnav was the first to reach as he almost ran. He saw the water jug crashed to pieces in the floor. He looked her and it was clear that she has tried to get some water. But on seeing him, her whole body started to shiver again and her eyes filled with fear.

Arnav took a step towards her. On seeing him advancing, she pulled the blanket and covered till neck. "No... No... Please..." saying this she started to cry again by closing her eyes. He felt a sharp pain in his heart coz of what he has done. He stood rooted to the ground. Badimaa who came there has seen and heard Khushi's reaction. She can understand what she's going through.

Badimaa came near Khushi. She touched her head gently. Khushi got almost frightened and looked up thinking it must be Arnav as his words "Don't think that I will leave you... Am not done yet..." kept ringing on her head. "Khushi..." hearing Badimaa's soft voice and kind face made her to look her without any emotions. "Beta... don't be scared... am here na..." saying this Badimaa sat on the bed near her. "Help me..." She started to cry like a baby. Badimaa's eyes too welled up. "He... he..." Khushi slowly pointed Arnav with tears. Arnav held his fist and closed his eyes looking down and started cursing himself. "I Know beta... now am here na... nothing will happen..." saying this kindly she wiped her tears. Then she made Khushi to have some water.

"Now... you are a good girl na... sleep beta..." she made Khushi's head to rest on her lap. Khushi felt like she's her mother... whose love she's longing for so long. Khushi held her left hand while Badimaa's right hand tapped her gently making her to sleep. Badimaa looked at Khushi and then to Arnav who is now watching them with heavy heart.

Badimaa knew that Arnav's heart has started to kill him. "Go and get my medical kit... key is in my handbag..." she uttered this and Arnav with a nod vanished from that room. Within half an hour he came with her medical kit. He saw Khushi sleeping peacefully on Badimaa's lap. Badimaa without disturbing her sleep made her head to rest on the pillow. Then tucking the blanket she stood and signaled Arnav to come out.

"Badimaa..." he looked her guiltily. "Chote... I don't know what to say... She's like our Anjali... how could you..." her voice stopped in air. Arnav looked down as he couldn't meet her eyes. She took the kit from him and handed some medicines to him explaining when and how to give. She looked him. "Chote... what you are going to do now..." Arnav looked her and said "Badimaa... tomorrow Anjali is going to be discharged... When they reach home I will tell them what I have done..." with determination as he's ready to face it.

She touched his cheek. With a forced smile she left to hospital to check Anjali. Arnav took a deep breath and came to Khushi. He saw her sleeping so calmly. He adjusted her hairs and thought to sit in the sofa near her. But he stopped... thinking what if she wakes in the middle. She will become nervous again...

So Arnav came out and sat there. Unknowingly he dozed off. "Please... Please... leave me... What have I done to you..." her pleadings made him to jerk. He had heavy breaths realizing that this is what his rest of the life going to be... or even worse...

He heard a thud and ran inside. His eyes searched for her who is not there in the bed. Her cries made him to look in the restroom side. "Something is wrong..." spilling it he started to knock the door. He didn't have any response other than her cry. "Khushi..." he said loudly. Still there's no response. He looked here and there and finally broke the door. There he saw her lying in the floor holding her right wrist. Arnav got it that she must have slipped.

He went near her. On seeing him she tried to move back. Without minding her he held her elbows gently and made her to stand. She tried to free from his grip though she can sense the gentleness now which was not there before. "Stop it Khushi..."he said calmly and without looking her eyes helped her to walk. She noticed the softness in his voice too. When she struggled he lifted her with a single swing which she didn't expect.

He can sense her shiver clearly. Khushi just closed her eyes in fear. He made her to sit on the bed. Then he took the ointment and thought to touch her right wrist. When she took her hand back Arnav closed his eyes to calm him. Then without looking her face he pulled her wrist gently and started to apply the ointment. "Ahh... Ahhh..." she made sound childishly. He just looked her face for a second and then continued it. When she again shouted "Shhh... Finished" he said without looking her.

Arnav thought abot the medicine. Also she didn't had anything. So he prepared soup as per Badimaa's instructions. He kept the bowl in front of her. She hesitated for a while. "Have it..." his stern voice made her to try it as she's very hungry. She tried to take in her left hand. Coz of weakness, her hand shook vigorously. She kept trying but couldn't have a spoonful soup.

Arnav lost his patience on watching her. He sat in the bed and took the bowl. Seeing him so close made her to move back in fear. He sensed that. So he moved away which made Khushi to look him straight. He held the spoon near her mouth without meeting her eyes. She gulped it looking him. For a second she's surprised by his doings though her fear has never left. After that he gave the tabs without seeing her. She took it without saying a word. Then he extended the parcel. "Change your dress..." saying this looking somewhere he kept it near her. "I will wait out..." without waiting for her response he walked out. Khushi simply watched him.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Nice part sorry for khushi but arnav will take her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
superb update..
good to know that he is taking care of her now.. but I feel he should teach a lesson to Shyam and his mother.. I feel that Khushi is neglected by her mother because when Badimaa held in her lap and smooth her pain.She feel relax & slept. Hope Arnav will tell her the true behind his behavior but the way he punished to very innocent person only because that innocent person is a relative of a person who did wrong to his family member is not acceptable. Now I am waiting for next update so that what will Arnav will do and what will the reaction of Mother and sons will be.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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khushi's pleadings will be a nightmare to Arnav for the rest of the life . Applying medicine and feeding soup does not make ASR less sinner . Arnav has to go long way to heal khushi both physically and mentally . Atleast Arnav is not as brutal like Shyam who was ready to usher the matter by paying money .
What will be Raizada's reaction for Arnav's deed especially Anjali ?
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome. ...feeling sorry for khushi. ...arnav will repent massively. ..
looking forward to read more. ...continue soon
waiting eagerly

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