ASR's Angry Mode Part 20 on Page 72 (Completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awesome. ...very interesting..
looking forward to read more. ...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
feeling bad for khushi...how could arnav be so low and so monster for a girl who has done nothing to him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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uh oh arnav...u shdnt hav done like tht
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hey i loved the concept of this story! very different😊! would love to read more! plz PM me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intresting plot thankgod that arnav realise his mistk such cruelty nt sutes our arnav what wil khushi reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
omg poor khushi 😭wat arnav s going to do?😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Guys... my net is very slow... thats why... am posting the replies in a single post... please forgive me for that... thanks for always supporting me... luv u guys... 😛

@ vandu123... thanks dear...
@ katj... thanks dear... yup...
@ Raadhiyaaa... thanks yaar...
@ pran28671...yup... dont worry... arnav will tc of her... thanks dear...
@ sana11..s dear... yup its too late... so true... thanks a lot...
@ madkukku... thanks dear...
@ sfghfj... thanks dear... yup... poor khushi...
@ BarunFan1212... u r always welcome dear... s.. i totally agree... yup he will... thanks...
@ daljeet... yes dear... sorry abot dat... coz he's not like that... so he's started to realize it... the pain of khushi similar to his lovely sis... hope i didnt disappointed u dear...
@ tikarshi... thanks buddy...
@ pinky_sathiya... she will be dear... not to worry... ummm lets see... thank u...
@ ravalisharma06... thanks yaar...
@ drashtimeetu... am so glad dear... thank u...
@ Nas.fasna... oh thank u so much dear...
@ Sakhi2013... thanks dear..
@ angelsabreenxz... ha so sweet of u dear... thank u...
@ ranogill... thanks dear... yup reality stuck him...
@ Smrikta992... ha thanks dear... hehehe yup... welcome...
@ Uarnkhui... am glad dear... thank u...
@ nano123... thanks a lot dear...
@ rk2127... s dear... u r rite... both r equally wrong... s arnav started to realize... well on the way dear... thank u...
@ zaniax... yup... its started... thanks dear...
@ nina282... oh thank u yaar...
@ anu17... on d way dear... ha yes... thank u...
@ -afsha-... yes... they didnt know yet... thank u dear...
@ Chocolate_pms... ha sure dear... thank u...
@ Alai123... yes dear... no he dont... u r welcome... thanks...
@ MDTharun... oh am sorry for dat dear... yup... sure he will... he has to... no option left for him... yeah... will surely try my best dear... thank u...
@ radhvi... oh thank u dear.. am so glad... yes dear... ha sorry abot dat... thanks again... very sweet of u...
@ bs1224... really dear... i really was scared to try such an attempt... but am happy that u like it... yup... u r welcome always... thank u...
@ sneharjun92.. ummm lets see dear... yup... sure dear... thanks...
@ swtsam... ha am happy dear... thank u... sure...
@ Meerah14... just his anger... his love to his only sis... thank u dear...
@ hararnav... yup he shouldnt... now lets see what happens... thanks dear...
@ Sanz... oh am really sorry dear... to hurt u... thanks...
@ LyssaPie... thanks a lot dear...
@ sspoorthy... i hate him too... thanks dear...
@ zainy26... ha thank u very much dear...
@ Swathiarshi... oh am so so glad dear... thank u... ha i would love it...
@ bhumi1492... thanks yaar...
@ sutapasarbabhom... thanks dear... yeah well said... khushi reaction... yet to come...
@ frity... ha dear... thank u so much...
@ arshiska... he is now ready for the punishment... thanks dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys... am really very glad for the support you all are showering on me... I was really very scared to try this attempt... thanks for accepting this creation too... Luv u all guys...

Please... if i hurted any of u guys... please please forgive me... 😊😊😊

Part 3

After talking with that person he cut his call and his eyes went back to Khushi. He felt so guilty. Guilty is a very a small word. He watched her and something stuck him. He made another call and instructed that person to deliver whatever he asked as soon as possible. Then hanging the call his eyes fell on the file which had the details abot her. He took it and opened it. He mouthed "Khushi Kumari Gupta... 21 years... Final year... Diploma in Fashion Designing..."

He closed it and stared her innocent face again. He gritted his teeth thinking of the fate which has played this much worse in their lives.

Arnav Singh Raizada (27 years) is a young and dynamic person... of course a very short tempered one... who after his studies fully involved in his work and made their AR designs even more famous. His only younger sister... Anjali... a very cute lovely girl... 22 years... doing her management course... her whole world is her brother...

After their parents died in an accident... their Nani took care of them along with their Mamaji (Manohar) and Mamiji (Manorama)... Their Mamaji and Mamiji considered them as their own kids as they don't have children.

Everything was going smoothly... until one day Shyam's eyes fell on his lovely sister. He and his gang of friends had no work other than teasing and enjoying girls for their bets. Richness has made them so careless abot what they are actually doing.

He even got a tight slap from Anjali when he approached her first... as she knows abot him... I mean she and others have watched them teasing other girls. She didn't say anything to Arnav abot this slap matter. She thought Shyam won't come in her way after that but she was totally wrong. If she would have told... this day wouldn't have occurred in her life...

When Shyam felt that he couldn't trap Anjali for his bet, and also her slap made him to kidnap her in anger. She tried her best and fought with him. But he was so strong. Also he treated her so badly ruining her whole... Anjali somehow managed to reach RM in a very poor state. Spilling what has happened with her she became unconscious.

Arnav saw his lovely sister who has been beaten so much... also in such a condition... made his blood boil thinking abot Shyam as he already have heard abot him through others. When Arnav went to that club to find Shyam... he heard their conversation before he entered in... "Hey Shyam... you and your guts... do you know with whom you have messed... It's Raizadas..." one of his friend told this. "Hey... Raizadas are nothing in front of us... what they can do... they had no proof... also my mom is there na... she will protect me from everything... like she does before..." hearing Shyam's cheap words made Arnav to think in revenge.

He came out without meeting him. He dialed to Aman and informed to collect the details abot Shyam's sister. He already knew this as it's a well known information to everyone but he hasn't seen her. When Aman told abot Khushi... doing her course... staying in hostel... Arnav just told him to kidnap her. That's it within an hour she was in Arnav's farm house.

He waited for her to gain conscious. Then he ruined her life in anger without hearing her screaming... pleadings... Once done... Arnav felt that now Shyam and his family will know the real pain. But he didn't realize that time... That how she would have felt... Losing herself to a totally unknown stranger...

The door bell brought Arnav from his deep thoughts. After taking a look at Khushi... He took a deep breath... composing himself... went to open the door...


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Part 4

When Arnav opened the door... there stood a lady who is in her 50s... "Badimaa..." his voice made her to cup his cheek. "Chote..." saying this she came in along with him. "What has happened to Anjali... Why didn't you inform me earlier..." her voice clearly showed her anger/worry/concern.

Arnav couldn't say anything thinking her reaction when she sees Khushi. "Chote..." her voice shook him to reality. "Ohhh... Badimaa... you were in your trip... temple visit... so..." he dragged. "Nothing is important to me than you two..." She touched his head affectionately. When she saw Arnav was totally lost... she touched his cheek... "Chote... What is it... wait... why you are here... I thought you were in hospital with Anjali... Just before your call only I arrived... as soon as I got call from Maaji (Nani)... I started... when I was abot to go hospital... your call came..." she finished and watched his face.

Arnav simply watched down. She was really sure that something else is troubling him as she knows her Chote very well. Her touch made him to look her. "Badimaa..." uttering this he looked in Khushi's direction. She felt something and walked towards that direction. Arnav followed her with guilt.

On seeing Khushi and her state... she rushed towards her. "Chote... Who is this... What happened to her..." her questions made him to struggle. "Badimaa... check her..." saying this he came out without waiting for her reply. He waited out.

Badimaa... Her name is Shylaja... She was a very experienced nurse. Recently only she got her retirement. She was there when Arnav's mom gave birth to him. That's how they know her. Later her kindness and nature made her to become one of the members in Raizada family. After Arnav's parents death... she became one of their guardians. Her words are mandatory even in silly matters regarding Arnav and Anjali.

Again the door knock made him to jerk. He went and received the things which he has ordered. It's a parcel of clothes needed for Khushi. It wasn't a big deal for him to pick dresses... that too for ladies... as he is in the designing field... He knows everything... just by seeing a girl he can tell her size...

"Chote..." Badimaa came out after checking Khushi. He turned to her. "Who is this girl... Where did you find her..." now she knew what has happened with Khushi. "Did you found her on the way... her condition is not good Chote... She has been forced... It was very clear when I checked her..." her words pierced his heart.

He stood like a statue. Though he is the mighty ASR... that's only for the outer world... to his family he's still their Chote... an angry Chote. "Chote..." her call didn't leave him any option which he knew already. "Her name is Khushi... She's Shyam's sister..." he closed his eyes "am the person who forced her..." taking a deep breath he looked at Badimaa.

"What..." Badimaa wasn't sure of what she has heard. She sat in the nearby sofa with a thud. She knew very well that her Chote is a very short tempered person... But she never ever thought that his anger will give a result like this. "Badimaa... am really sorry... in anger... I didn't realize what am doing..." he came to her and held her hands by kneeling in front of her. She didn't know what to say... she simply looked her Chote whose eyes were welled up in guilt.

"Badimaa... I agree... I have done a very worst mistake... you know me very well na... Anjali... after seeing her... Hearing Shyam's words... I became so furious that... That..." he looked down "But now... Am ready for the punishment... I accept whatever it is..." he looked her for some support.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm intresting start...so ASR raped Khushi as Shyam raped his sister...so ASR ttok revenge by doing the same with sankes's sister!!

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