Last Update: My First SS on Parud (Love is Life); Chapter 11 Pg 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys now a days i am so much inspired by Parud that i have wrote SS on them i have never wrote any story before sooo please tell me how was that and shall i continue or not...please do like and comment...!!!!😊

Character Sketch


Major Rudra Partab Ranavt:


He is a loyal, brave, honest, kind hearted, caring and handsome military officer. He is appointed to Kashmir border, as he is the most trust worthy officers among all others that's why General V K Singh is personally in contact with Rudra to keep in check the whole situation of the border. His father died when he was just a child in a war since then his mother Mala has brought him up into a perfect gentlemen.


Parvati Singh:


She is the daughter of General V K Singh. She is very cute and beautiful like an angle but beside her beauty she is very arrogant, selfish and stubborn girl who only loves herself in short a spoiled child of a rich father. She is a student of final year in University of Mumbai. All her friends call her with her nick name "Paro".


How both of them will meet??? Would Rudar will be able to change Paro's nature with his kindness?? Will Paro fell in love with Rudra??? Well we will know it very soon...

Prologue


Laila (Paro's friend): "O poor boy now he is gone"


Sunahri (Paro's friend holding Paro's arm to free the boy from her grip): "Leave it na Paro he is new student he don't know who you are..."


Paro (still holding his collar with full of anger): "How dare he flirt with me...you cheap boys...don't know kahn kahn sy uth k a jaty hn...all boys are always the same...:/"


Laila: "Leave him na yar look principal is coming and his nose is bleeding too"...Laila asked Paro to run nervously...


Sunahri: "RUN FAST" at last she was able to free that new student from Paro's grip...

Three of them tried to run but principal caught them before they could run...it was Paro's weekly schedule to go to principal's office atleast 2 times a week...but this time "it's enough" told the Principal I am gona call your father..


Principal explained each and every thing to Paro's father that how the boy just asked her to guide him the way to his class but she start beating him so badly that his nose start bleeding...


That night Mr. Singh was very upset because of his daughter...when Paro arrived home she tried to silently go to her room but his father caught her on the way... "Paro what did you do today?? Dear not everyone is like Sh..."


Paro (With an upset tone): "Please papa don't call his name ever again..."


Mr. Singh (tried to cheer Paro up): "Ok leave it be happy but try not to do that again please for your papa jani..."make a cute childlike face...


Paro (smiling): "Papa jani you know na I can't resist my laughter when you make that type of face..."and start laughing...


Mr. Singh (smiling): "I know my jan that's why I do it to brought a cute smile on my dolls face..."kissing her forehead...


Paro (hugging her father): "I love you papa jani..."


Mr. Singh (hugged her back with a little fear in his heart): "love you too myri jan..."


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Forgive if there is any mistake thanks w8ing for your response... and buddy me if you want to receive a PM of every new update...😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a really good OS!!
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Originally posted by: Marvel-freak

That was a really good OS!!

Thanks Dear...i was really very scared before posting but Thanks for your good response 😳
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Nice!
Any plans of making FF with this.
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Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Nice!

Any plans of making FF with this.

Yup if you guys like it then i will surly try to write FF...but thanks dear for your good response it really matter alot for me 😳😊
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Wow sounds interesting please continue
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Originally posted by: selenagomez786

Wow sounds interesting please continue

Thank you so much dear i am like flying in the air...😳😳 thanks for your positive response i will try my best to improve my next update 😊
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Originally posted by: DevdasiSingh

Interesting start!

Please do continue!

Thanks dear 😊 now paka i will continue 😊😳
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Originally posted by: Linsie

nice continue soon...

Thanks dear and sure i will 😊
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that is soo awesome i love it

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