surprise -ZaYa OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hellowww zayantics ..aaj meri TR (Vinu)ki b'day so thought of writing some thing for her as a b'day gift ..so here i'm with my very first OS on zaya... i just wrote all this in just on go and didn't do any proof reading so ignore typos.. i don't have a slight idea how did this turn out .. so please have patience while read this...Happi Reading ..!!!
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Surprise-An ZaYa Os

After a long day of chaos finally i got some time to hit the bed...right now i'm feeling like the whole energy of my body has been drained out ..and my eyes were pleading me for some sleep... i felt like i don't even have the energy to walk to my room..but somehow i managed to do that ... after a long walk from kitchen sideway to my room ... i finally did it ..."Sleep here i come" i though to myself moving toward my bed where Mr.Kitkit Abdullah was already having a great slumber..involuntarily a smile crawled upon my lips when i saw my hottie hunk hubby sleep with his mouth open as cute as ever ..with his blanket messed up ..and pillow spread all over the bed.."God his guy is never going to change" i though to my self and cleaned up the mess..after the cleaning section .. i calmly climbed up the bed and pull the blanket up on both of us..i closed my eye..and invited my sleep to take over me..!!!

I Think it had been hardly 30 min since i have closed my eye that when i felt a pair of familiar lips brushing my forehead..well i really don't need to open my eyes to find out who it is..no doubt it was my hottie hunk ..ZUA.. i unshut my eyes..just to see a pair of brown orbs staring at me with whole affection and love in the universe..gaawd.. i can spend my whole life just staring into those brown orbs.. i was so lost in his chocolate brown eye that i fail to understand the mischief plotting his brain was doing at that moment ..with out any word he scooped me up into his arms.
"ah Zain..what are you.."
"Shh..mallika-e-zain ...don't talk"
well i don't get what wasgoing on ..and what his mischief mind is up to .. i was left with no other apart from rest in his arms silently .. he cleanly manged to make his way toward the main door with me in his arm ..he finally reach his car..and place me in the front seat ..and quickly got onto the driving seat..but before starting off..he leaned itoward me with an beautiful red cloth in his hand and cover my eyes with it .. i can feel car taking up speed .
if i'm not wrong we have been traveling since past 30 min i suppose ..but still we didn't reach the destination ... i wonder how much long are we suppose to ..why is it taking so long ??? did he forgot that there is part called"Brake "in car???why isn't he using it yet ??hmm okay fine i'm gonna admit it i'm hell excited to know what had kit-kit planned for me..since long back then when i heard him talking to someone on phone for some preparation .. i know something coming up ..but i bitterly fail in finding out what was it ..thank god..finally he applied the brakes..and he quickly got down and again scooped me
in his arms and walking in..!!
i can hear the sound of waves hitting the shore.. i can sense the cold wind playing with my hairs..thats when he left me down he stand on feet ..i can sense the cold sand of beach under my feet ...oho..finally it realization hit me that we are at the beach.. i felt that the cloth over my eye lowering down ..and i opened my eye just to witness an amazing view infront of my eyes.
"WOW" is the only word that escaped from my mouth after see the witness the super awesome view infront of me.
"Happi B'day Mallika-E-Zain"
he whispered in a husky voice in my ear..Oh gawd SH*t ..lost in all these chaos of life i just forgot that it's was my b'day ..i'm such a big bimbo i tell you .
"you always want to celebrate your b'day on beach side under the moon right?"
gawd man how did he knew that??? not even my besties know about this wish of mine..!!

"How do you know that ??" i sounded totally astonished

"Well ..i'm your shuhar sweety and i know everything about my beloved wiffy"and he gives out his trademark killer smirk.
i myself forgot about my b'day but he didn't ..he remembered my b'day ..he planned a surprise for it ..that to in the style i always wanted to..that was enuf for the tear tankers in my eyes to get on..my eye got wet ..and tears rolled down my eye..not the sad tears man ..they are happi tears.
"hey what happens?" he cupped my face with all the care and concern in the world
"I love you .."with that i kissed his cheek and he just smile in reply
"I love too MEZ' i just kept staring him
"Well..janu.. i know i'm pretty hot and handsome..and totally an eyeing worth piece but we here for your b'day celebration remember ??? "he flash his naught smirk again
"zain" i patted his shoulder
After the cake cutting section we both sat back on the beach bank..under the stars in each others arms..his hand around me and me totally in his embrace .
"How great it would be if this moment becomes my life forever"
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Okay i'm done with the OS.. i really don't have any idea ki what did this OS turned out in.. if this turned in it to utter crap i'm extremely sorry about that ..please do bear me and my crap...and yes please do like and comment ..it hardly take few sec to like and few min to comment ...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!!
PM's Later..!!!
Love'
Renu..❤️❤️
Edited by ...Renu... - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Reserved..!!
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Eh Renu...Gethu po..!! Semma Pa..!!

Yeeeaaahh..!! It was awesome Renu..!!

Tum itni achchi writer ho...??

Baava bohot lucky hain...!! You are a multi-talented girl..!!

Zain is the best Shauhar...!!

Super Renu...!! I want more..!! Write more Stories..!!



Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww that was awesome n cute too
Emotions were well described by you
I loved it
I wish this happens in the show too
After reading ur os one question comes to mae mind that wasn't Aliya planning b day for Zain with zubbu in d show where did it go now😳
Well overall it was a beautiful os and a best gift vinu can have ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res 😉

UnRes
Amazing Renu 👏 👏
It was wow!!
Luved zain's surprise for his MEZ
Show mei inka b'day kab aayega? 😭
Edited by ZayaHarshika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow awsm os
Loved it
Very nicely written

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very cute OS, Renu.
Aliya's emotions are beautifully portrayed:).
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kick ass it is renu loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute OS 😳
loved Zains surprise
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww renu that was super cute, loved zain's surprise
Awesome os dear,
Eagerly waiting for some thing like this to happen in show
Thanks to u🤗 and vinu🤗
Looking forward for more stories on zaya
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Totally marvellous work!!!!
I am totally in love with it..
The first got me interested.
Plzzz PM me if u cn!
And keep writing.
Thanks a lot.

Lots of love,
-Tanya.

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