Asya(kabhi)OS:A day as ekta kapoor style bahu

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Hello readers. This is my first ff please ignore the typing mistakes thanks hope I dint dissapoint you


The story is same as qubool hai.It is one month after the tanveer fiasco and najma did not marry the jerk imran and neither did asad slap zoya that day in the hospital rest all is the same.

Zoya and asad are going to be married after a month and zoya works in Asads company as a IT expert.Diloshad does all the major household work and Asad,zoya and Najma help whenever they are at home.It is one family that cooks together,Eats together and laughs together.
IN THE EVENING AT KHANS VILLA

Dilshad:Najma wow bahut maja ayega na lets do it.

Najma:Ammi Zoya aur mai aur ab toh bhaijaan bhi 21 centuary ke hai..wont it look odd.

Dilshad:Mujhey tohbas mere bete ki shakal dhekni hai..

Najma:Par kya Zoya mannegi??

Dilshad:Zoya meri bachi hai and waise bhi this isnt going to be real its just a little drama.Aur Asad ka poora time toh woh actually ...ammi...zoya..kyu..please mai hi nikal jaeyga.

Najma:are you sure Ammi having fun is your only motive.Mujhey toh kuch daal mai kala lag raha hai.Kya toh phir puri hi dal kali hogi.

Dilshad:Achha baby you got me you know na Asad is so shy he would never voice his feelings aloud for Zoya.But weboth know na what zoya means to him.I have seen my son crying and staring into nothing the whole night wheb
n zoya wasnt there.But apprantely Ayesha bi has some doubts she feels Asad still wants a wife who works like EKTA kapoors serial wali bahu.
She feels i have emotionally blackmailed asad to marry Zoya,take her to the office and we both have forced him to help us in all household work.

Najma:But ammi Bhaijaan can tell the full story,i am sure ayesh Bi will understand.

Dilshad:No Najma i told him once to tell the whole story to Ayesh bi ,My bacha had r
tears just by remembering that time and neither will i allow Ayesha Bi to insult zoya.
Ayesh Bi knows Asad never refuses me for anything even if i have an illegal demand and Ayesha Bi knows he will never talk to me in a loud voice.

Najma:And if Bhaijaan does all that for Zoya Bi will the know the extent of Bhaijaans feelings...


IN ZOYAS ROOM
Zoya was playing games on her I pad.

Zoya:Phuphi aap..whats the matter why so serious.Najma what happened?

Dilsahd:Zoya if i ask you something would you do it without asking questions..

Zoya:offcourse pH up hi i trust you 100% issi baat pae ek sher arz hai

Dilsahd:No sher.For 2 days you will neither recite a sher,no jokes ,no laughing and giggling.Get up 3 in the morning wear this old suit cover your head rest ill tell you what to do...

Zoya:But phuphi 3 in the morning..why

Dilsahd and Najma:You promised..

Zoya(A bit sad and confused): okay

IN THE MORNING 6 AM
Asad had woken up and exercised

He came to get his and miss farooquis coffee from the kitchen. He then would have to knock several times at her door and finally would his zoya wake up at 7 .But asad was very happy with this and would not even like a hair changed in his miss farooqui.
But to his surprise he saw his miss farooqui awake dressed in a old suit with her head covered ...asad rubbed his eyes
Dilshad, Nazma and Ayesha big were sitting on the table with a pleased expression.
Asad:Allah miya what's wrong with you miss farooqui
He bit his tongue, he sure was going crazy, what's up with me, now Zoya will say this is my copywrite dialogue
God now I am talking to myself.

To Asads surprise he did not hear any laughter but most importantly no reaction from his Miss Farooqui.
She quietly continued doing her work as she was told by her phuphi to not to talk to Mr Khan.

Asad shrugged his shoulders and went into the kitchen to join his Miss Farooqui and Help Her in The Household Work. Just then...
Dilshad:Asad there is no need for you to do household work from now, now your hard days are over.
Asad: Ammi what are you speaking about... Hard days.. Don't help Ammi you know na I don't do this out of compulsion.. I do it because..
Dilshad:Not a word Asad
To say Asad was surprised was an understatement he was shocked
Ammi who made him do more household work than Zoya as she was Ammis bechari was making her..??
He looked at Zoya who nodded her head so Asad came at sat at the table.
Ayesha bi who had heard asads incomplete statement of helping made a surprised face
Asad sat at the table confused with his Ammis behavior, even Nazma dint say anything. Was this some kind of drama no... it dint look so by zoyas face she was serious and solemn too.
Dilshad:Bahu take a cloth dust everything, then put zharu and then mop everything. Then cook food, them wash clothes, then go and buy vegetables from the market. I will give you some clothes which are to be mended. We all have to go for a movie in the evening but since you have lots of work you stay at home.

Sad(thought): what happened is she my ammo , the same who would disown me if my miss farooqui shed even a drop of tear... And tamatar and most importantly my miss farooqui who was miss rights why was ammi behaving this way is it some kind of a joke, why dint ammi allow me to help Zoya in the kitchen and moreover all the talk about burden and then why dint Zoya call me
Maybe I should rest for a while, this all can't be serious
Dilshad(thoughts) :sorry meri bachi, but this has to be done I hate it but now I have to leave you alone in this.
Half hour later
Zoya was kneeling down and putting pocha... What has happened to phuohi is this what she meant by daughter bahur mother relationship, and nazma and most importantly Mr khan ... he just left me I thought he meant it when he said husband and wife share everything I work in the office so now would he tell me to leave that too
I thought Mr Khan had changed, and he had been helping in the household work since a month... But wait he did come to help me in the kitchen (she smiles). But her smiles fade but phuphi said NO
If Mr Khan felt that helping in each and every household work was a burden he should have told me. Waise bhi Indian males help that too rarely 10% or so that too when there is a dire need... A girl cannot have everything she has to compromise but I thought when Mr Khan had started helping in all the household work.. I felt I was one among the lucky girls who had to compromise less..
But maybe phuphi is right no mother would like her son to work when there is a daughter in law.
And aisa bhi to nahi ha na ki we have a very big family that if phuphi reduces the amount of servants to one then I can't survive.
And waise bhi Mr khan, phuphi and najma have done so much for me this is a way I can repay back. She wiped her tears and continued scrubbing the floor...
Just then Asad entered he saw his miss farooqui kneeling down and scrubbing the floor with her head covered.
She quite dint look like the person who could brighten anyone's day with her stupid shers and unending chatter. The one who could bring out every hidden emotion in him. She was his personal computer password lock genius, his miss new York, his miss hoitey toitey, his miss fix it all, his miss endless chatterbox, his miss 24 hour helpline, his miss farooqui. He had tears remembering the last to last month. A sudden fear gripped him what if she leaves again... NO

Asad: miss farooqui get up. Please listen to me I ...I... don't know what's got.. I mean... Ammmi... Najma...you... And... All.. This...woh actually I ...don't ...want.. .you
Zoya dint say anything she just lifted her broom and started going to the other room.
Asad caught hold of her hand and pulled her to his chest. STOP NO YOU WILL NOT DO THIS
Zoya:Mr khan I was wrong I was not fulfilling my duty as a daughter in law. Please go and rest I'll bring you something to drink and mid noon snacks
Asad without saying anything went changed in to his old clothes caught hold of another broom and begain mopping
EVERY one including ayesha bi came down hearing Zoyas protest.
Dilshad:Asad stop all this... Asad ignored her and continued doing the work
Dilshad (now for the masterstroke):Asad stop or it won't be nice for Zoya.

ASad(in a loud voice):BAS AMMI BAS
Ayesha bi mouth opened like a alligator eating it's prey and najma smiled showing her battisi
Asad:ammi I never questioned your any decision but I want an explanation for your this point of view. Why have to decided to dismiss all the servants and are not allowing me and najma to work and Zoya is being I'll treated ammi.

Dilshad:well she is the bahu and she needs to realise her responsibility. You don't have to force yourself to work.

Asad: Ammi you were always of the view an that daughter in law are daughters then how is cleaning and doing all the household chore a responsibility. Phir to ammi yeh ghar pehla mera aur apka hai then isn't it my responsibility to maintain my house and force.. No ammi it isn't forced on me its our house and we all do it to run this. Ammi we have servants then why , please call them back. Zoya will not do all this and Ammi I have understood covering a head does not prove anything a persons actions do.

Ayesha big knew asad was at a point of no return and choose to keep her mouth shut, than to face asads anger , she choose to retire to her room.

Dilshad took the mop from zoyas hand kissed her forehead and said beta this was just a joke go to your room. Zoya went mad with happiness and along with nazma kissed phuphi .She was about to ask something but nazma dragged her to the room to play with her iPad.

Dilshad: she kissed asads forehead and said: now my son has really fallen in love she explained to him everything. Asad was angry with ayesha bi but dilshad said please ignore her.

Asad: oh to mere itne asoo apne meri miss farooqui keep liya bahaye I knew I was adopted and Zoya is your own.

Dilshad: teasingly ab kya kare mera beta Zoya se itna pyar kart a hair toh Zoya ki good books mai toh rehena hi padega.Asad did you just say meri miss farooqui hair ... Now you're blushing hai... Asad blushed and blushed


***********the end ******


i have also written a ff please do read that asad and zoya are 25 and meet in 2019 link is below please read the ff and leave your comments THANKS FF: IT TAKES TWO TO A TANGO
link to ff INDEX ON PAGE ONE CLICK ON ME
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Divya.S.R thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey.. This is really interesting.. continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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y you stop it there.
very interesting
nice.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasir

y you stop it there.

very interesting
nice.
plz update soon






Thanks DIVYA AND SASIR
WILL UPDATE ASAP
IfritAmbrose thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey..wow it's awesome yr..I loved it
very interesting..u should continue it..n thanks for d pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

hey..wow it's awesome yr..I loved it
very interesting..u should continue it..n thanks for d pm :)


Please don't thank me for the pm
On a second thought if you want to thank Me read the note at the base of the os and read the ff
Thanks for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it 😛
Beautiful and cute. 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for Update.
It was so nice and Different OS.
The way Asad(KSG) worrying about Zoya about leaving,it was so nice.
Asad(KSG) Explains to Dilshad about Zoya's doing households,it was so nice.
Dilshad love towards Asad(KSG) and Zoya was so nicely explained.
i just loves the conversation of Dilshad with ASYA(KABHI).
The whole OS was so beautifully written,Your imagination was so nice and different.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well nice os ican
so Aisha bi is old thinking lady
but khan's r modern & Asad helps in house work
but 2 prove their POV Dillu play this prank so that Ayesha bi stop taunting Zoya or being nosy in there matters.
M i correct
& Ayesha bi is what Asad's dadi

thanx 4 PM dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks so much

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