SwaRon FF:Ishq hota nahi sabhi ke liye *Last Chp@110*

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@Slayerkajal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Really nice start...
Loved it truely...
Sharon's pain of loosing her parents was heart touching...
Her last birthday memories with her parents 😭
Beautifully described sharon's pain...
Swaron first meet was really small...
Eagerly waiting for their proper meeting...
Thanks for the pm
Update soon

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Bhumi06

Ab itna mast OS likha...toh mast comments bhi milenge na...
P.S- @Shini sry kal tujhe thnx nahi bhula...thanx both of you for doing such a gr8 job.

dats ok bhoomi v r glad dat u liked our work

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@Incorrect

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Thanks Chitra for PMing me this one.

Well the emotions were described really well.. All I would like to say is just break the paragraphs when there's a different scene.. Because it at times gets confusing. Just a suggestion. I don't intend to offend you guys. Apologies if I did.

Well I would really like to catch up with this one. But I will keep skipping Reyansh's part. I can't read that -_-

thank u..

ok.. we will surely look into that in the next chapter

thanks for d suggestion..

u need not apologise..

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

nice start

sharon in pain

do update soon

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

I would say this was just fab! My god I loved it so much... ❤️

Kya yaar ek chap mein hi is story ka fan bana diya mujhko !😲🤗

Classic Story line, Awesome Characterisation.

Poor Sharon... Swayam ne to emotional Sharon ko dkeh liya... wanna see how they interact more!

Love it.
Both of you ! WOW!👏

love,
Sakshi.

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Amazing plot here n thats too with perfect characterization of SwaRon..Loved the way u described sharon's character n her emotional trail..She had suffered a lot due to such crucial enitiy played by god to made her orphan..now rest of the characters are also looking great.. SwaRon first meet was quite small but i am looking forward to ur story line ahead..Do update soon guys..

Thanx fot the PM,Actually since from past 3 months,i just stopped to read works here due to my inactiveness..But thankfully i got my continuity here as a reader..

Prateek

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Sorry for the very very late reply.a one of itz kind iam really looking forward to this story.do not forget to pm me the next tym u update

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-.QTPie.-

@-.QTPie.-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Shini Di I am sorry
I know I am late
Very late commenting
*Kaan Pakkadke sorry for that*
Okay now my comment time

Update is too good 👏

u both are great

Sharon's intro well written 😃

Dance academy by Sharon mujhe bhi admission chahiye 😎😆

Party 🥳

The flashback was really sweet 👍🏼

The album stuff just was awesome 😳

Aww.. her parents loved her so much and even she loves them so much ❤️

SwaRon meet

Their eyelock 😳

And abhi se Swayam was caring for Sharon 😳

Vivian and Swayam convo was bit confusing

I mean uncle n aunty out of station are they the same person who were enjoying there anniversary some time before? and why was vivian calling Swayam "Sir" 🤓

Sharon was in such pain

I hope Swayam makes her happy soon 😉

-Surabhi/ur nautanki 😆 -

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

@..QTPie.. Swayam said to vivaan that his own mom dad had to go coz of some urgency and sohis mom dad gave him special instructions ti come and congratulate Vivaan's parents on their anniversary.
And Vivaan is calling him Sir coz Vivvan is just a student jind of teenager whike Swayam owns a big business house...so just out of respect...hope its clear now :)

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Hey guys thank you for your likes and comments for the first chapter they are really encouraging.

we are here with the next chapter hope you like this chapter too..

Chapter#2

banner credit goes to -Koeli_Appy- thank u soo much

The soothing morning sunlight was coming from the window and filling the room with warmth and sunshine.Sharon was lying awake. . .her tear stained face looked pale.She was twelve years old when her parents died in a car accident.After their death nobody of her relatives was ready to take that Twelve year girl's responsibility. . .Thankfully her parents left her a will where all her rights were secured. . .Otherwise what could have happened to her still trembled her.She grew up like an orphan in all these years without anyone's care and love.She didnt know what love is. . .She started dancing and whenever she danced she found herself closer to her parents. . .her pain reduced to an extent. . .Since that day she had only one dream to start a dance academy and she did it successfully on the basis of her sheer talent. . .she had all the luxuries of life today. . .Name,Fame,Money but still she felt empty. . .and she could never understand the reason behind it. . .
Her trance broke as her ccellphone rang.It was Taani. . .Her very close friend and her assistant in the academy.
"Morning Sharon"Her voice chirped on the other side.
"Morning Taani"Sharon replied blankly.
"What happened?You fine?"
"Yes I am. . .Just a bit of a headache. . .Can you please manage for today without me?"
"Sharon i won't force you but something important has come up and you need to be here fot that."
"OK,Fine I am coming"Sharon replied.
Sharon got ready in the next thirty minutes and picked up her car keys and drove off to her academy.
IN SHARON'S CABIN
"Sharon actually remember I told you about Inernational Dance Carnival. . .Its gonna happen in the next two months only" "What?"
"Yes. . .If we miss this then we will have to struggle a lot but this carnival can give us exposure on International Level. . .Passionate Dancers will automatically come with us."
"But it will need a lot of Investment and in such short time. . .how are we gonna get a investor who just doesn't want profits but can understand the passion for dance too. . ?"
"I know Sharon it will be difficult even in the past we have rejected so many investors just to secure the passion of our dancers. . .That is why I have a suggestion. . .If you agree we will have our Investor."
"You mean you have a potential Investor?"Sharon asked surprised.
"Yes. . ."Taani replied smiling widely.
"Who?"Sharon asked.Curiousity rising in her.
"My Brother Swayam Shekhawat"Taani replied smiling.
"Swayam Shekhawat?The business Tycoon?He is your brother????"
"Yes. . .Sharon he is my brother.Sharon see If I am sitting with you here then its because of Swayam. . He is the one supported me,encouraged me to dance when every other person from my family wanted me to do MBA. . .he sent to Trinity College Of Performing Arts. . .He respects talent and knows that not everybody is blessed with it. . .It is not something to waste but it should be nurtured.I am sure he will never deny to invest in our project if he sees the potential"
"Have you talked to him about this project?"Sharon asked.
"No. . .He is not going to invest just because I am a part of it. . .He is very professional. . .We will have to make the best presentation to get him On with this project.If you agree then I will take the appointment from him."
"Yes Taani. . .go ahead. . .If you are so confident then I do not have any problem. . .You take the appointment."Sharon replied smiling.
"Done. . .Then fine I gotta lot of wok. . .see you later."Taani said and left.
Sharon entered the huge building of Shekhawat Industries. . .She went to the Receptionist. . .
"Hi can you confirm my meeting with Mr.Swayam Shekhawat"
"Just a second Ma'am. . .Mr.Swayam is a in ameeting right now as soon as he gets free I will inform you till then you can wait in the lobby"
"Thank You"Sharon sat in the lobby and admired the interiors of the Building. . .
After half an hour
"This has to be my best presentation of my life. . .This next two hours will re-write my life"
But little does she know that its gonna be re written but in a different way. . .