AsYa SS: Loving Me Will Only Cause You Pain- Epilogue- Page 99- 5thDec

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Plot: Zeenat Farooqui n Zoya Farooqui family comes to Bhopal wid their family 4m New York to find abt their father who murdered their mom 18 years ago. Except Zoya, others go back to New York for some time. Till then, her nani decides dat Zoya sud live in her mother's friend Dilshad Mausi's house. Zoya goes to live in d Khan family. She finds dat Dilshad Mausi's son Asad is regressive, old-fashioned n judgemental who judges by her clothes n lifestyle. Zoya always gets irritated n angry wid him. She even sees dat he does not allows his younger sister Najma to wear western clothes n even change her hairstyle which is long n braided. Dilshad n Najma loves her but Asad always gets annoyed n irritated by her. Is Asad really like dis or we all r in for a big surprise? Only time will tell.
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Plot

Prologue


New Characters

Note

Part 1


Part 2

Note


Part 3(A)

Promo 1

Promo 2

Promo 3

Part 3(B)


Part 4(A)


Promo 4


New Characters

Part 4(B)

Part 5

Promo 5

Promo 6

Part 6
Part 7

Promo 7


Part 8

Part 9

Promo 7

New Character

Part 10
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Prologue

Bhopal:

At Farooqui Mansion, Anwar, Zeenat n Zoya r sitting in d hall. Zeenat is playing video games on her I-Pad while Zoya is eating chips.

"Anwar, 2day I vl break ur record in Angry Birds," said Zeenat.

"Dream on, Baby," said Anwar.

Zoya laughs while munching d chips. Sikandar n Nazneen, Zoya n Zeenat's nana n nani comes in d hall.

"V hv to go New York for some work," said Sikandar.

"I vl stay here," said Zoya.

"No Zoya, u too vl come," said Nazneen.

"But someone has to stay here for d work v hv come here," said Zoya.

"Then I vl stay wid u, Chhoti," said Zeenat.

"No di, u sud also go as Alisha n Zain needs u too for their class tests. I can stay alone here till all of u comes back," said Zoya.

"Fine, u can stay here but u vl live in ur ammi's friend Dilshad Mausi's house till v come back," said Nazneen.

"But I, di, n jiju hv never met Dilshad Mausi," said Zoya.

"They r very nice people, Zoya," said Sikandar.

Scene shifts to Asad n his mother Dilshad in Khan Mansion hall.

"Asad, you r 25 but still u hv not thought abt ur marriage," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, I don't want to get married. I don't want to fall in love cuz I fear dat I hurt any girl. After all, I am d son of Mr. Rashid Ahmed Khan," said Asad.

"Hope, u change ur mind one day. By d way, wat type of girl wud u ever like to get married?" asked Dilshad.

"D girl who I want to get married sud be modern n progressive in thinking like us (A car stops outside KV n a girl comes out of d car 4m d back-seat. Her face is not shown. She is wearing a grey t-shirt, white jacket n blue short skirt). Dat girl sud be smart, intelligent n bold (D girl starts walking 2wards d gate wid a red I-Pad in her hand. Her face is still not shown). Dat girl sud be independent. She sud live according to today's time. She sud be sweet, kind, beautiful, understanding, cheerful, funny, caring n friendly (D girl's face is shown n she is none other than Zoya. Zoya's funny music starts playing in d bg as she walks wid a smile on her face.)


Zoya's outfit


Others also comes out of d car. Zoya stands near d gate. Others come near her.

"Lets go inside," said Sikandar.

"U hv a very nice choice. I hope u get a girl like dat one day," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Ammi, I just said abt d type of girl I want. Dat does not means I am ready for love n marriage," said Asad.

"Hope u change ur mind one day," said Dilshad.

D doorbell rings. A servant opens d door. Dilshad is happy to see Farooqui family.

"Aslaam waalekum," said Nazneen wid a smile.

"Waalekum salaam. Plz, come inside," said Dilshad wid a smile.

Asad gets amazed to see Zoya. He keeps lukn at her wid a slight smile on his face. Zoya then sees Asad n freaks out making Asad to stop smiling.

"Wat r u doing here?" asked Zoya freaking out.

"Zoya, do u know him?" asked Sikandar.

"Nana, he is d same guy who tried to run his car over me. He is one of dat moron Akram's goon. I am not going to live here in dis house," replied Zoya annoyingly.

"Do I luk like a goon to u?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Even goons luk decent. In many movies, d villians also luk hot, handsome n dashing like u," replied Zoya rolling her eyes.

Asad n others r shocked wid her reply.

"Zoya, he is not a goon. He is Dilshad Mausi's son Asad," said Nazneen.

Zoya's eyes becomes wide in shock.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay!!!

U choose this story!!!🥳

I voted for this one!!!😃

Can't wait to read this story!!!⭐️

Ha ha ha Zoe thought Asad was a goon!!!😆

Zoe is the perfect one for Asad and his choices!!!😉

Excited!!!😊

Update soon!!!

I want pms!!!😎

Edited by Ami34 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice prologue
Loved it!
Do pm me if possible...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!! The start is really good...
Asad wants a modern girl..😳
Now that's a change.. 😆
Zoya again escapes a wedding with Akram.. 🤣
Asya have met before, While Asad has a small smile Zoya is shocked and angry..
She thinks Asad is a goon.. Well that's a first.. 🤣
Waiting to read more.. 😃

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Nice prologue
Zoya arrived at KV & met with asad
She was shocked to hear that asad is dilshad son
Asad description of girl was amazing
Let's see how the story progress
Plz continue soon
Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the prologue ❤️

Asad's description of the girl he wants , it left me fangirling 😳

Hayyyeee Asad ❤️

Zoya Farooqui and her usuals 😆

Asad id one of Akram's goons 🤣 Zoya 😆 only she will think that 😆

Lovely concept ... Loved itt 👏

Please pm me the next time yew update 😳
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Loved the prologue 😳 ⭐️ 👏
Asad... I'm so in love with him
Amazing concept...
😃
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Very nice prologue di. Asad want a modern girl. Thats vry nice. The way he describe the type of girl he want and at the same time zoya entered KV was beautiful. So asya meet before. Zoya is shocked to c asad and asad has a smile. Lol zoya thing asad is a goon. Only my zoya baby able to think like that. Waiting for next part. Thanks for pm. Update soon

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