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Great update dear

I loved it

I had to give u a clarification.

In Islaam their is equal right to men & women in divorse.

He or she could only get divorse if there is any serious issue.

And its not easy to get divorse.But now a days no body practice the correct way of divorse that in the religion

.In Islaam if a man said Talaq to his wife,after his Talaq he should kept her with himself for next 3 months and give her proper treatment and fulfil her all needs.If they both get in to any close proximity that is sex then he cant divorse her and he should take her as his wife and treat her in a rightful manner.This is the correct way of Talaq.But nobody practicing it.Allah ordered us to do like this cause within these 3 months if he or she can solve their issue then they can be together again.Allah hates divorses.This is applicable to women also.

I hope u get my point.

And the precap is wonderful😃

Pls update soon

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U said right abt talaq but v normally see around d world in news dat men take advantage of their talak power. If women wants to initiate a khula she sud have a reason but men don't need any reason. See Faiz's example where he gave a superspeed talak.

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Part 5

Next morning, Akram, Haseena n Chand comes to SM.

"Where is Nikhat?" asked Haseena.

"She has gone to college," replied Rashid.

"Rashid Miya, I already told all of u dat I don't want Nikhat to go to college," said Haseena.

"Haseena, wats so much hurry in dis? Marriage still has time," said Razia.

"Wat vl Nikhat do by takn degree wen she has to stay home?" asked Haseena, "Wat if she gets more dark till her marriage?"

Ayaan was getn furious.

"Haseena, why to waste time talking all dis?" asked Gaffur, "Have kababs na."

"Oh yes," said Haseena wid a smile, "I forgot abt kababs only."

Haseena started gobbling kababs while Ayaan got annoyed. Haseena, Chand n Akram finished d plate of kababs.

"Wen Akram n Nikhat gets married na then I want a boy 4m Nikhat," said Haseena.

"Wat if a girl is born?" asked Badi Bi.

"Then I vl be disappointed wid Nikhat," replied Haseena, "Everyone in d society vl ridicule our family cuz of Nikhat cuz she did not gave birth to a boy."

Badi Bi, Rashid n Ayaan got angry at dis. Haseena Bi gave Rashid a long list.

"Wat is dis?" asked Rashid shockingly.

"I want all dis things for my family n relatives," replied Haseena wid a smile.

Rashid n Ayaan got angry.

Scene shifts to KV. Zoya n Najma r in Zoya's room. Zoya is wearing a grey vest and a red short skirt. She n Najma r making a house model.

"U make such nice models, Zoya," said Najma wid a smile.

"I and di used to see ammi making them so v liked making them 4m a very young age," said Zoya wid a smile. "U r also awesome in dis."

"Not as much as u. Bhaijaan taught me a little abt dis," said Najma.

Just then, Asad n Ayaan enters her room.

"Can't u both knock before cumn?" asked Zoya.

"Don't be such a khadus or akdu type. We all r friends," said Asad.

"Wat if we were busy in sumthn?" asked Zoya.

"Wat thing u both wud get busy in?" asked Ayaan.

"U need answer for dat also?" asked Najma.

"Zoya said dat wat if u both were busy in sumthn. Listen, v all know dat d government has legalized 377 thing. Par yaha ye sab nahi chalega," said Ayaan firmly.

Najma, Zoya n Asad got shocked.

"Najma, tera bhai paagal ho gaya hai," said Zoya.

"Exactly, kuch bhi bolte rehta hai. Dhakkan kahi ka," said Najma.

"Girls, calm down. 4m now, v vl knock d door n come," said Asad.

"Okay," said Zoya.

"Dis Haseena Bi is getn on my nerves," said Ayaan.

"U say dis everyday, bhaijaan," said Najma.

"Wat she said 2day?" asked Zoya.

Ayaan tells them abt wat Haseena Bi told abt college n boy child thing.

"Why u all just don't break off dis alliance?" asked Najma.

"Mamu is not listening to us," replied Ayaan.

"Tu jab bhi apne mama k baare me baat karta hai to aisa lagta hai ki Kans Mama ya Shakuni Mama ki baat kar raha hai," said Zoya.

"My mamu is mixture of both," said Ayaan.

Others laughed.

"Dunno who d hell ur mamu is," said Zoya rolling her eyes.

"Wat d hell dat Bhaiseena Bi said?" asked Najma wid a laugh, "Dat she wants only boy child 4m Nikhat otherwise people vl ridicule her family."

"Bhaiseena Bi," said Asad wid a laugh.

"I think she is so obsessed wid boys n she is planning to get a sex change operation on herself," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Dats why, she is so despo for boys. I think she was born a man n she did sex change operation to marry her husband," said Asad wid a laugh.

"But if people like these keep getn despo abt boys then everyone vl have to do Dostana n then d world vl soon end," said Najma.

"Exactly," said Ayaan.

"She says as if only a girl is responsible in baby's birth. Luks like she, Akram n others in her family don't know even school level biology dat both girl n boy r responsible in baby's birth," said Najma.

"Itna to pata hi hoga unn idiots ko. But they don't know d school level biology dat only a boy is responsible for d gender of d baby not girl," said Zoya.

"Titli, these things r even taught in 8th or 9th standard dat only boys r responsible for d sex of d baby," said Asad.

Asad, Ayaan, Najma n now Zoya enjoying talking in a cool way which vl sound like cheap n vulgar to conservative people like Ayaan's family. But, they did not talked in a too cheap way which cud be very shameful, embarrassing or hurt anyone. In Ayaan's house, Humeira n Nuzhat know a little bit to talk in such bold ways n use double meanings but Nikhat is too nave n innocent dat most of d times she had to be explained wat they talked.

"Thank God, I did not marry in dat pagal khaana," said Zoya.

"Agar vaha shaadi karti to 1 din me bhaagkar aa jaati," said Najma.

"But dat was not even needed wen she got to know abt Akram n his family before d wedding," said Asad.

"Wen u got told those guys to beat me u asked me wat vl I do if my sister got a guy like u had got. My sister not only got a guy like him but dat man only," said Ayaan.

"Yaa, v both got d same guy," said Zoya.

"Dat Haseena Bi keeps on teln my family to stop sending Nikhat to college cuz she has to sit home n she vl get more dark by marriage," said Ayaan annoyingly.

"1st tell her to have Kellogs Special K diet to reduce her weight," said Najma wid a laugh.

"I have recorded her, Chand Bi n Akram's convo wid us. 2day, she gave a long list. Dis list is double of dat day wen I, bhaijaan n Zoya shopped in d mall," said Ayaan.

"And Zoya spend 5 minutes for 2 lipsticks," teased Asad.

"Shut up," said Zoya whacking his head.

"Asad bhaijaan ko ye laga ki Zoya uss Bhaiseena Bi k liye mini-skirt le rahi hai," said Najma wid a laugh.

"Ye bhi nahi socha ki vo item list me nahi tha," said Zoya wid a laugh.

"Ayaan bhaijaan, u said dat she gave d list double to dat list. Is she mad?" asked Najma.

"Is it new dat she is mad?" asked Zoya.

"Now, v must put an end to it," said Asad.

Just then Ayaan got a call 4m Shirin.

"Hello ammi," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan beta, Akram called Nikhat on a date wid him. Dats why, I called u. Its good dat now they vl get to know each other," said Shirin wid a smile.

"Wat? Akram called Nikhat for a date?" asked Ayaan shockingly.

Asad, Najma n Zoya were also shocked.

"Yes," replied Shirin happily, "Its very nice for both of them to spend time wid each other. My Nikhat is so fortunate for getn a good boy like Akram."

"Ammi, I have some important work. I vl call later," said Ayaan n hung up.

"I was right dat v must put an end to it," said Asad, "Now, Akram called Nikhat for a date."

"U both need to keep an eye on them," said Zoya.

She opened d tracking software on her I-Pad n typed Akram's cell number. She asked for Nikhat's cell number 4m Asad n typed it.

"They both r at a cafe," said Zoya.

"V both sud go there now to keep an eye on them," said Ayaan.

"Bhaijaan, only Zoya can't come before Akram. But can I come?" asked Najma.

"No Najma, its not proper for u to come now. Only I and Ayaan vl have to manage it. U stay wid Titli," replied Asad.

"Okay," said Najma.

"One of u keep ur mobile speaker on so dat v cud talk," said Zoya.

"Okay," said Asad.

Asad n Ayaan went in Asad's car.

Scene shifts to d cafe where Akram tuk Nikhat. They r hvng coffee.

"Nikhat, have u ever fallen in love wid someone?" asked Akram.

"No," replied Nikhat.

"Good," said Akram, "Even I have not fallen in love wid anyone before u."

"U are a nice person," said Nikhat wid a smile.

Akram also smiled.

"Nikhat, do u know how to be a good wife?" asked Akram.

"Means?" asked Nikhat.

I mean a good wife sud always obey her husband wateva he says. U sud start practicing 4m now itself so dat u vl not have any problems in future," replied Akram.

Nikhat was naive. She easily believed wat he said.

"Okay," said Nikhat while nodding her head.

Akram smirks.

"Thank God, she is not like dat bitch Zoya. She can be easily trapped," thinks Akram.

"Nikhat, I want to take u somewhere," said Akram.

"Where?" asked Nikhat.

"I vl tell u later," replied Akram.

"Why u can't tell now?" asked Nikhat.

"Nikhat, just now I said u dat u sud always obey me. A good wife does not even questions n argues wid her husband. U sud trust me who is ur future husband," replied Akram.

"Okay, I vl come wid u," said Nikhat.

They went 4m there in Akram's car.

Scene shifts to Zoya n Najma. Zoya notices dat Akram n Nikhat moved 4m d cafe. She called Asad. Asad who was on d way wid Ayaan in his car answers d call. She n Asad kept their mobiles on speaker.

"Hello," said Asad.

"Asad, Akram n Nikhat moved 4m d cafe," said Zoya.

"Wat?" asked Asad shockingly, "Where they went?"

"They r going to a area which goes 4m d right 4m some Bhalla Carpet Factory," replied Zoya, "D area has places like Bijli Bar, Gulabi Bar, Chameli movie theatre."

AsYaan r shocked as they heard wat she said.

"Now, they went inside some Hotel Extreme Pleasure," said Zoya.

AsYaan r again shocked.

"Titli, Akram has taken Zoya to a red light area," said Asad.

"Wat?" asked Zoya n Najma shockingly.

"Yes, dat bas***d has taken Nikhat to a dirty hotel," replied Ayaan furiously.

"Ayaan bhaijaan, u tell ur family to reach there," said Najma.

"But wat sud I tell my family?" asked Ayaan.

"U both send ur family Akram's videos wid private number," replied Zoya.

"Nice idea," said Ayaan.

Asad n Ayaan sends SM people Akram's bar n brothel videos to Nuzhat, Humeira n Rashid. They r shocked.

"Badi Bi, see v got some bad videos of Akram 4m private numbers," said Humeira.

"Wat bad videos?" asked Gaffur.

She showed d videos to others. They r also shocked.

"Akram is such a bad person," said Rashid.

"Nikhat sud not marry such a man," said Badi Bi.

Scene shifts to Asad driving 2wards d red light area.

Scene shifts to Akram n Nikhat going in a room of d hotel.

"Akram, why u brought me here?" asked Nikhat.

"So dat v get to know each other better," replied Akram.

Asad n Ayaan had reached d hotel. They enquired d receptionist abt Akram n Nikhat. D receptionist told them they just went into a hotel room on d 2nd floor. Asad n Ayaan had called Rashid wid a private number dat their daughter is in dis hotel wid a boy named Akram. Rashid is shocked.

"Ammi, dat man tuk Nikhat to a red light area hotel. V sud go there," said Rashid angrily.

All r shocked.

"Who told u?" asked Gaffur.

"Someone called me 4m a private number," replied Rashid.

"Rashid, Bhaijaan, our Nikhat is there," said Shirin worriedly.

"Lets go there. But only I, Rashid, Shirin n Razia vl go there," said Gaffur.

They went in Gaffur's car.

Scene shifts to AsYaan reaching d 2nd floor.

"Nikhat, v sud become one," said Akram.

"But v r not married?" asked Nikhat.

"Its normal to do it before marriage," replied Akram, "V love each other n vl marry soon so v r not doing any sin. If v start wid dis now then v won't have any problems after marriage. U sud obey me, Nikhat. U sud trust dat wateva I vl do vl always be right."

Nikhat was too innocent. She did not had any knowledge of adult things. She never liked to talk anything abt it wid anyone. She always stayed away 4m such conversations wid her friends , sisters n relatives as she wud feel shy. Akram is takn advantage of all dis.

"If u r saying then I agree wid dis," said Nikhat.

Akram smirked evilly widout her notice. He came closer to her n tuk off her dupatta throwing it on d bed. They heard a knock.

"Someone came," said Nikhat.

"Whoever is there vl go," said Akram wid a smile as he caressed her cheek.

He held her face n brought it closer. He brought his lips closer to her lips. They again heard a knock. Dis time, d door knocked repeatedly. Akram got irritated.

"Akram, v sud open d door," said Nikhat.

"Let me see who it is," said Akram.

Akram opened d door n was shocked to Ayaan n Asad. They quickly barged inside. Asad n Ayaan lukd at Nikhat n were shocked to see her dupatta on d bed. Nikhat who in her panic of repeated door knocking forgot to put back her dupatta noticed them seeing her dupatta on her bed. She quickly tuk her dupatta n puts it back on herself.

"Wat u both r doing here?" asked Ayaan firmly.

Akram was too scared to reply.

"Bhaijaan, Akram brought me here. He told me dat a good wife sud always obey her husband as he vl always do everything right. He now wants us to become so dat v don't have problems after marriage if v start all dis now," replied Nikhat innocently.

Asad n Ayaan got angry. Akram got angry at Nikhat for blurting out everything.

"Shut up, Nikhat," said Akram angrily.

"How dare u talk like dat wid Nikhat?" asked Asad angrily.

Akram got scared n regretted for shouting at Nikhat.

"I am sorry," replied Akram, "I just got angry."

"Why u brought Nikhat here n wat were u abt to do to her?" asked Ayaan angrily.

"I came here for d 1st time," replied Akram.

"Wid many other girls," said Asad angrily.

"Wat r u saying, bhaijaan?" asked Akram shockingly.

"Bhaijaan, u r thinking Akram wrong. He is a nice guy," said Nikhat.

"U don't talk in between, Nikhat," said Asad firmly.

Just then RaShi n GaZia reached there.

"How dare u to bring my daughter at dis dirty place?" asked Rashid angrily.

"Wat all r u saying n why u r all angry at Akram?" asked Nikhat confusingly.

Everyone got shocked as they cud not believe how nave Nikhat is n she has still not understood d situation.

"Nikhat, u go near ammi n mumaani," said Ayaan.

Nikhat went to Shirin n Razia. Rashid slapped Akram hard across d face.

"V all got to know abt ur reality," said Rashid angrily.

He pushed Akram to d wall. Ayaan came near him n grabbed his collar angrily.

"U bas***d, u tried to take advantage of my sister," said Ayaan angrily n punched him hard.

He started beating him.

"Nikhat, he is not a good guy. He was taking advantage of u and all of us," said Rashid.

He showed her d videos. Nikhat got shocked n hurt. She started crying. He n Shirin began to comfort her.

Ayaan pushed him to Asad. Asad recalled Zoya crying in d mazhar. He recalled some of her words abt Akram.

"Akram was requesting me to wear bikini but I refused it cuz I wear bikini only at home or wid friends who r only girls. It's a very private thing for me not public. He was requesting me a lot. I did not talked to him for a day but he later came to me n apologized me teln dat he was very wrong n he loves me very much. I forgave him."

"Wen v started dating, he told me to try for cheerleading teln me I vl very hot while doing cheerleading. For 2 years, v kissed each other many times but never did lip to lip kiss. He requested for it many times but I told dat I vl not do it before marriage. He once asked me whether I am in favour of hvng sex before marriage."

Asad got angry n punched him hard on d face. He gave him some more punches on his face n stomach. He lukd at Nikhat n then kicked him on d floor. Ayaan came near him n pulled him up by his collar. He recalled some of Zoya's words abt Akram.

"He kept fooling me n I did not came to know abt him till our wedding."

"Don't know why all Akram n his family r jerks. 1st my ex"boyfriend n then Nikhat's wud be fiance."

"Wen u both vl expose dat jerk n his family, give him 2 slaps on behalf of me too. I had to climb down 4m 1st floor pipe to run. I was not able to beat dat pig."

Ayaan got angry n slapped Akram hard across his face. He kept on slapping him repeatedly. He pushed him to Asad. Asad recalled some of Akram's word 4m d video.

"After marriage, I vl take a large part of her money, use her body to my heart's content n then divorce her. I proposed her so dat I cud marry her, get Green Card n settle in New York as she is a New York citizen. She was a bad girlfriend. She never let me give a simple kiss on her lips let alone letn me give her liplock or sleep wid her."

"Only I know how I tolerated dat bitch for 2 years. Once d marriage happens, I vl show her real place, use her till I want n then dump her like a dirt."

Asad got angry n slapped him repeatedly before kicking him hard on d floor.

Rashid calls Haseena. Haseena answers d call.

"Hello," said Rashid.

"If u don't want urself, ur son n others in ur family in jail then return all d things v gave," said Rashid firmly.

Haseena got shocked.

"How dare u say dis to me, Rashid Miya?" asked Haseena angrily, "I vl break d alliance."

"No need, Haseena. Cuz I am myself breaking d alliance," replied Rashid.

"Rashid Miya, wat r u saying?" asked Haseena shockingly.

"I am saying truth," replied Rashid, "V all got to know abt ur son's true nature. V know d places he visits n wat he does there."

"Rashid Miya, u got some misconception," said Haseena.

"I have no misconception, Haseena. U all sud stay away 4m our family n return all d things in an hour. Otherwise, u all vl be in jail," threatened Rashid.

Haseena got scared.

"Rashid Miya, I vl return all ur things in an hour and v vl stay away 4m ur family. Plz, don't call police," requested Haseena.

"Okay Haseena, just do wat I said," said Rashid n hung up.

"Now, get lost 4m here otherwise u all vl be in jail," said Ayaan angrily n kicked him hard.

Akram ran 4m d hotel as fast as he cud. Rashid came to Asad.

"Asad beta, thank u," said Rashid.

"It was my duty. Nikhat is my sister also," said Asad n went 4m d room.

Rashid lukd on unhappily as Asad went out of d room.

Scene shifts to Asad teln Dilshad, Najma n Zoya everything dat happened. They were shocked to hear everything.

"Ur sister is too innocent, Asad," said Zoya, "And her family was getn her married. She needs to learn a lot abt outside world."

"I can't believe he said those regressive n cheap things to her," said Najma furiously.

"Its good dat u and Titli did not came there. It was such a dirty area," said Asad.

"Cuz of Zoya, u all were able to reach d place n stop Akram 4m doing anything wrong wid her," said Dilshad, "Thanks a lot, Zoya. U helped in saving our bacchi's life 4m getn ruined."

"No need to thank me, Mausi," said Zoya, "These people can't respect women. Dat day, wen some goons ran after me then u called di to inform abt it otherwise they wud have got to know very late dat I was running 4m goons. At dat time, u only knew me by my face."

Scene shifts to SM.

"Ammi, abbu, mamu, mumaani, I already told dat Nikhat is too young to get married n dat guy is not nice. But u all never listened to me. Look, wat happened," said Ayaan.

"V have done wrong in choosing a boy for Nikhat," said Razia.

"Wats so hurry to get me married, Mumaani?" asked Nikhat, "I am only 19. I want to study further. I don't want to get married so soon."

"Nikhat, wat r u saying?" asked Razia shockingly, "V vl not do any mistake again in finding a boy for u."

"Mumaani plz," said Nikhat firmly, "I said na I don't want to get married so soon. I was always very innocent n naive. But not anymore. I vl do wat I vl wish."

Razia was shocked.

"Razia, v sud respect Nikhat's wish," said Rashid.

"Okay Nikhat, v vl get u married only wen u vl want," said Razia.

In d evening, Asad n Zoya were watching TV in d hall.

"I still can't believe dat some men r so cheap like Akram who only think of using women's body. For them, love only means getn physical. I think dat there r many things dat can be done wid each other wen v fall in love wid someone," said Zoya.

"Wat many things to do?" asked Asad.

"Wen u vl fall in love wid someone na then only u vl understand wat things v can do to spend time n be happy wid each other," replied Zoya wid a smile.

Asad also smiled as he stared at her.

Next morning, Zoya gets ready in a formal wear of brown top n black skirt. She comes for breakfast. Asad comes for breakfast after some time in a black 3 piece suit.

After breakfast, Asad goes to Scindia Corporation as the 8 bidders of the tender were called at Sciandia Corporation for a meeting wid Yash n Aarti. Zoya too reaches there after some time. Asad n Zoya r surprised to see each other in d corridor.

"Asad, wat r u doing here?" asked Zoya.

"I came for a tender meeting," replied Asad.

"I came for d same," replied Zoya.

"Lets go for d meeting," said Asad.

They went inside d meeting room 2gthr n sat next to each other. Zoya is the only women among d bidders. The other 6 bidders had already came. Yash was in a black 3 piece suit while Aarti was in a blue saree. 2 bidders were not liking a woman among them.

"Luks like someone has forgotten d way of her kitchen," said one of d bidders wid a laugh.

"May be she has forgotten d way of cooking class n accidentally came in Scindia Corporations," said d another bidder wid a laugh.

Zoya felt uncomfortable. Asad got enraged wid those 2 men for insulting Zoya. Even d other 6 bidders as well as Yash n Aarti were not liking them.

"Guys, v have come for meeting not for insulting anyone," said Asad.

"Why r u supporting a woman?" asked d 1st bidder.

"These women just wants publicly by trying to be like men," said d another bidder.

"U both sud learn to respect a woman. U both r highly educated businessmen but r still behaving like uncivilized people. For ur kind information, I am where I am just cuz of a woman who is my mother. So, u both better behave urselves," said Asad firmly.

Zoya smiled as Asad stood for her.

"By insulting Miss Zoya, u have insulted my wife too. I can't understand people like u exist in dis world n come for business meetings. U both sud apologize to Miss Zoya," said Yash.

"Is dis d way u both talk wid d women in ur house?" asked Aarti.

"Women of our house only manage house," replied d 1st bidder.

"I think u both sud not participate in dis tender as I don't welcome people who disrespect women," said Yash.

Both of them got scared. They quickly apologized to Zoya n Aarti.

"Next time, before insulting a woman think abt d women of ur house," said Zoya.

"Nice to meet u, Zoya. V heard a lot abt u and ur family. Dis is ur 1st tender in India. Right?" asked Aarti.

"Yes Aarti, dis is our 1st tender in India," replied Zoya.

"Who do u think deserve dis tender?" asked Yash.

"I think Asad of Dilshad Constructions deserve dis tender. I am not saying dis cuz I am his friend butI am saying dis cuz unlike other 7 of us, he set up his business on his own while our business had been set up by our families," replied Zoya wid a smile.

Yash, Aarti n Asad smiled cuz she spoke in a very genuine way.

"It does not matter whether d business is set up by on our own or our family. Its our effort n dedication dat matters d most. Ur business was set up by ur mother. But after her death, u and sister started helping ur mother's parents 4m ur childhood to run d business whether by making models or doing d computer works. U tuk law n ur sister tuk media inspite of knowing dat u both have to run d business cuz u both wanted to do sumthn else too other than business. U both have managed to help in business while u both were busy in ur college studies. So, its u deserve to get dis tender," said Asad wid a smile.

Zoya, Yash n Aarti smiled at wat he said.

"V sud start d meeting," said Yash.

D meeting started n ended in an hour.

After d meeting, Yash n Aarti stopped Asad n Zoya.

"Asad, v know each other. But how do u know Miss Zoya?" asked Yash.

"She is a family friend. Both our mothers were college friends. After studies, her mother shifted to New York. V both r now friends," replied Asad wid a smile.

"Now, v r planning to live here in Bhopal only," said Zoya.

"Dats very nice. Since v know each other, v sud be friends," said Aarti wid a smile.

Zoya smiled n shook hands wid Aarti n Yash.

"How long u guys got married?" asked Zoya, "U both luk very perfect for each other."

"V hv been married for 7 months n hv 3 kids." replied Aarti.

"Have u adopted them?" asked Zoya lukn puzzled.

AarYa n Asad laughed.

"No," replied Aarti, "Dis is our remarriage. My 1st husband left me for other woman wen I was pregnant. Yash's 1st wife died in an accident. I had 5 year old Ansh while Yash had 5 year old Palak n 4 year old Payal. Initially, v married for our kids but later v fell in love."

Zoya smiled as she said dat.

"Dats very nice. Hope u all remain always happy," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Okay, I need to go," said Asad.

"I also need to go," said Zoya.

Asad n Zoya went 4m d room.

In d evening, Asad n Zoya were sitting on d garden bench sipping coffee.

"Asad, v both did not knew dat v were going for d same tender," said Zoya.

"Lets see if one of us wins or not," said Asad.

"Asad, u supported me in d office by defending me 4m those 2 men. Thank u," said Zoya wid a smile.

"No need to say thanks, Zoya," said Asad wid a smile, "I am ur friend."

After 2 days, d bidders came to Scindia Corporation for d opening of d tender. In d corridor, Asad n Zoya bumps into each other. Zoya trips n Asad catches her in his arms. Mitwa plays in d bg. Zoya was wearing a short sleeved blue churidar dress. Both were lost into each other. Yash n Aarti who were passing by sees them n got confused as both were not standing. They lukd at each other n again at Asad n Zoya. They came near them.


"Hello Asad n Zoya," said Yash.

Asad n Zoya came out of their thoughts n got embarrassed.

"Wats going on?" asked Aarti.

"Nothing, v bumped into each other while walking. I then tripped n he caught me 4m falling," replied Zoya.

"Oh, we see," said Aarti wid a smile.

"Lets go inside," said Yash wid a smile.

Scene shifts to d meeting, d tenders was being read out.

"After seeing everyone's information, I and Aarti have decided dat Zoya Farooqui of Farooqui Constructions vl get d tender," said Yash.

Everyone including Asad got shocked. But then Asad smiled.

"Congrats Zoya," said Asad wid a smile.

"Thanks," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Of all d bidders, a girl got tender," said one of d bidders disappointingly.

"Exactly, v simply wasted our time," said d other bidder disappointingly.

Those 2 bidders were d same who insulted Zoya on dat day. Others got irritated.

"Look, I said u both even dat day u both sud respect women," said Asad.

"Dat day also u both did d same thing," said Aarti.

"Zoya got d tender cuz she deserved it," said Yash, "She does not ridicule or irritate anyone like both of u."

Both bidders became silent.

Scene shifts outside Scindia Corporation. Asad n Zoya came out 4m d office to d parking 2gthr. Their cars were parked side by side.

"Titli, v want a treat," said Asad wid a smile.

"Yes, v vl celebrate in d evening at home," said Zoya wid a smile.

They both went in their separate cars.

Precap: #Zoya gives a pizza n cake treat at KV for her tender success.

#Zoya gets a call 4m Zeenat who tells her dat she has gathered some other proof against their father to prove dat he used their mother's design for his own project.

#Asad shows Zoya around some places in Bhopal which she did not saw. Asad n Zoya have gola(ice-candy) n pani-puri in d park. Asad is surprised dat being 4m a very rich family, she is enjoying like normal people. He tells her dat he sometimes enjoy these things wid his siblings n friends. He says her dat she too is enjoying these things being 4m a rich family. She tells him dat even though v r rich, v sud sometimes enjoy life small happiness as it gives us a lot of happiness. Asad likes n smiles at wat she said.

#Zoya gets a call 4m her nani dat they vl take one more week to come. Asad who is by her side gets happy but does not shows it. Unknowingly, Zoya is also getn happy.


A/N: Asad, Ayaan, Najma and Zoya's way of talking in a cool and bold way are common among many modern people. Zoya is not like she was in the show who would act oversmart and interfere in any thing without thinking properly. She did not went with Asad and Ayaan because she did not wanted to come before Akram but still she helped them a lot. Zoya is not arrogant or rigid type but still she has common sense like knocking before entering and getting unhappy if a guy comes inside her room before knocking. Nikhat is very innocent and naive who does not know about adult and double meaning talks. She does not know about the outside world. Akram got what he deserved. But he will re-enter in the sequel of this SS.


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Promo 5: Zoya falling in love with Asad

"Asad, can u show me some places in Bhopal which I never saw?" asked Zoya.

"Of course Titli," replied Asad.

"I don't know why but I love spending time wid u," thinks Zoya.

Asad shows Zoya some places which she never saw.

"I have never seen those places before," said Zoya wid a smile.

"There r some more places to be seen," said Asad wid a smile.

Scene shifts to Asad n Zoya hvng pani-puri n golas in d park.

"Even now, I sometimes have these things wid my friends n siblings. U being 4m a very rich family is hvng all these things wid so much ease n enjoying them," said Asad.

"U r also rich, Asad. Wat if I am 4m a rich family? Sometimes, v sud enjoy life's small happiness as it gives us a lots of happiness," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad likes n smiles at wat she said.

Scene shifts to Zoya getn a call.

"Wat? U all vl take one more week to come?" asked Zoya shockingly.

Asad who was by her side gets happy but does not shows it.

"Yaa beta, v have some work but v vl come soon n dis time Alisha n Zain vl also come wid us," said Nazneen.

"Okay, I vl wait," said Zoya n hung up.

"They vl take one more week to come. Till then, I vl have more fun wid Asad," thinks Zoya lukn at Asad, "Dunno why I am drawn to Asad so much? I feel so happy wid him."

Scene shifts to Asad n Zoya walking on d road talking n smiling. Rashid n Badi Bi who were going somewhere in a car sees them. They wonder who is d girl wid Asad.

Scene shifts to Dilshad, Asad, Najma n Zoya visiting mazhar. Zoya wears a full sleeved orange churidar. While praying, Asad n Zoya keeps glancing at each other.

Scene shifts to Zoya sitting in her room.

"Allah Miya, wats wrong wid u Zoya? Why u always think of Asad so much? I feel so happy around him like u never felt happy around anyone. Even Akram. By d way, Akram was fake. But still, why I feel so different weneva I am wid Asad?" asked Zoya.

Zoya's heart figure came in front of her n smiled. She was Zoya's duplicate wid HEART written on her t-shirt.

"Zoya, u love Asad," said Zoya's heart figure.

Another Zoya's figure came in front of her which was Zoya's mind figure. She was also Zoya's duplicate wid MIND writon her t-shirt.

"Zoya, u r not in love wid Asad. U r just thinking abt him so much," said Zoya's heart figure.

"Who sud I listen among both? Who among of u is right?" asked Zoya confusingly.

Zoya's heart figure n Zoya's mind figure starts fighting wid Zoya acting as a referee. Finally, Zoya's heart figure pins Zoya's mind figure. Zoya counts 1 2 3. And d winner is Zoya's heart figure. Zoya's heart figure n Zoya's mind figure suddenly vanishes.

"Dat means I have fallen in love wid Asad," said Zoya.

Zoya then smiles happily.

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Promo 6: Why Zoya had insulted and rejected Asad's proposal?
Zoya was walking to her room wen she heard Dilshad n Najma talking abt her in Dilshad's room. She stopped to listen.

"R u saying truth, Ammi?" asked Najma shockingly, "Was Asad bhaijaan really acting like a stupid n irritating person so dat Zoya cud hate him? Why he did dat?"

"Asad was attracted to Zoya 4m d time he saw her in d magazine," replied Dilshad, "Wen Zoya came in our house, I found him lukn at Zoya 4m time to time in a way dat he never saw any other girl before be it his female friends, relatives or any family friends. Wen I asked Asad abt it, he told me dat he is attracted n infatuated to Zoya. He told dat he may fall in love wid Zoya but he does not want to fall in love wid her n he wanted her to hate him. He feared dat he may hurt her like his father so he played all dat drama. Once, he was convinced dat he may not bcum like his father but wen he heard Zoya teln me abt Akram on d day she came, he again got scared dat he may hurt n he did not wanted her to get hurt again. So, he planned to bcum sumthn he is not till Zoya stays here."

"It vl be nice if bhaijaan falls in love wid Zoya. Zoya is someone wat bhaijaan wanted in his type of girl," said Najma.

"Wen Asad was teln me abt d type of girl he wants then at dat same time, Zoya arrived in our house wid her family," said Dilshad.

"Is it some signal?" asked Najma.

"May be," replied Dilshad.

As Najma got up to leave for her room, Zoya went to her room wid a smile on her face.

"I can't believe Asad likes me so much," said Zoya wid a smile as she came inside her room.

Next day, Dilshad said everyone dat they have to go to a relative's daughters engagement.

"But ammi, Ayaan's family vl come there. I don't want to come," said Asad.

"Asad, come for us na," said Dilshad.

"Asad, I know u don't like Ayaan's family. But u can come for Ayaan n ur other sisters also na," said Zoya.

Asad lukd at both his mother n Zoya.

"Okay," said Asad.

Next evening, Zoya wore d blue anarkali which Asad help her choose at d mall. Asad wears a red sherwani. Dilshad, Asad, Najma n Zoya went to d reception 2gthr. Dilshad n Najma notice Asad n Zoya glancing at each other in between. Dilshad n Najma smiles at dis. They reach d hall. As Zoya n Najma r talking, Dilshad says to Asad dat he sud tell his feelings to Zoya. Zoya luks at Asad while talking to Najma thinking dat she vl tell her feelings to him along wid teln him all on why she n her family came here as she is sure dat Asad vl not understand n its not her fault dat she is a murderer's daughter. Najma sees dis n smiles.

Scene shifts to Zoya standing in a corridor lukn disturbed. Najma comes to her.

"Zoya, r u alright? Why r u lukn so disturbed?" asked Najma seeing her very worried.

"Najma, I want to be alone for some time," replied Zoya.

Najma goes 4m there thinking why is Zoya so worried.

Scene shifts to Zoya walking in d garden lost in thoughts. She was lukn very disturbed.

"Titli," Zoya hears Asad's voice n turns around to see him smiling.

Zoya felt dat tears can out of her eyes at any time. She had a hard time controlling them 4m falling. She was supposed to propose Asad but she cannot do it now.

"Asad," said Zoya.

"Titli, I want to tell u sumthn 2day," said Asad wid a smile, "U know wat, Titli? I never fell in love wid any girl. But 4m d time I saw u, I always got attracted to u. Weneva u r around me, I feel very happy. I never knew dat I vl like u so much. I found u so..."

Before Asad cud continue, Zoya stopped him. She realized dat Asad is proposing. She wud have gotten happy dat she was abt to do but Asad himself is doing it. But now she has to stop him 4m saying his feelings to her even though it vl hurt her very much. Pain n disturbance were showing on her face n she did not meet Asad's eyes while saying anything as they were moist. Why Allah play such a cruel game wid her? Wats her mistake?

"Stop ur nonsense, Asad," said Zoya rudely shocking him, "Wat d hell u think of urself? I thought u as my friend but u started thinking of me in d other way. U all men r the same. Just cuz u r Dilshad mausi's son does not means dat u can expect me to accept u to fall in love wid u. I can't believe u can think abt falling in love wid me. I vl never accept cuz v vl never be happy 2gthr. U sud forget abt falling in love wid me, Asad."

There was no one else in d garden except Dilshad, Najma, Ayaan n Rashid who were watching them shockingly. Rashid found d girl as d same girl who he n his mother saw talking n smiling wid Asad. Asad got very hurt but he found Zoya's face showing pain rather than anger. He noticed dat she was not lukn at him in his eyes n her eyes were moist.

"I vl leave ur house 2mrw," said Zoya n turned 4m him.

Dilshad n Najma tuk Asad away 4m d garden. Ayaan n Rashid were not noticed by anyone. As Dilshad, Najma n Asad went 4m there, Zoya broke down.

"Asad, I am so sorry. I had to reject u by insulting u so much. U were abt to do sumthn which I myself was abt to do but I had to ruin my own plans n ruin urs also. I never thought dat I vl do sumthn like wat I did now," said Zoya while letn her tears flow freely.

"Anyways Asad, u and others vl know abt me very soon. Cuz of dat reason, I had to reject u cuz I want u to hate me n then forget me," said Zoya seriously thru her tears.

Ayaan n Rashid were shocked to see her crying n not feeling happy for behaving rudely wid Asad n rejecting him. Zoya went 4m d garden while still crying as they lukd on.

"Who is dis girl, Ayaan?" asked Rashid, "I and ammi once saw her wid Asad."

"Abbu, she is Zoya who is d daughter of badi ammi's friend," replied Ayaan, "Why she rejected bhaijaan wen she also loves him? Wat is disturbing her so much?"


Why do you think Zoya acted like a jerk with Asad? More drama to come. Asad and Zoya will not reunite soon. There will be a sequel of this SS. This SS will end as usually after Part 10 and epilogue with incomplete ending to be continued in the sequel😊.



Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Amazing Update
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Interesting Pormos


about ur AN: why don't u change this SS into FF?
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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wonderful updt Juhi👏
thank god AAZ saved Nikhat
poor Nikhat was so naive cuz of conservative environment
she got some guts now & asked 2 study b4 marring
Zoya got d project i thought both will get it
Promos r nice
Zoya got 2 know Asad likes her & realizes her feelings 2
but she rejects him cuz she got 2 know about her father being Khan's enemy
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Awesome update & wonderful promos
Asad & zoya applied for same tender & got surprised to see each other. 2 bidders tried to insult zoya but asad stood for her. He told them to respect women. Aarti & Yash supported him. Zoya was happy. The way they packed akram things was wonderful. He served what he deserved. Both attracted towards each other. Waiting for next update soon as I want to know the reason of zoya rejection. I think so it's bc of ghafoor. She is doing the same what asad did. Hope everything sorted out. One question as u said u will complete this story in sequel so when that 10 parts finish, asya will be together or not. Reply me if you can . Thanks for pm
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Awesome part
promos are amazing
why zoya rejecting asad excited to know answer
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

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